Wow, ok after I read through my previous chapter I am super disappointed in myself for writing so horribly. I was recently in a play and we just finished all our shows this afternoon, so I'm all depressed and moping around and decided to write some more of this story so here you go.

MAX P.O.V

I sat watching the movie for about 20 minutes after fang left before I started to wonder where he was. Not that I really cared there was just something about him I didn't trust. I didn't like him honestly I'm not exactly sure why.

Fang P.O.V

The girl was staring at me intensely clearly waiting for me to say something.

I smiled and turned around, "Iggy,Nudge,Angel?" I called

"Come on guys come out" I glanced around waiting for them

"This isn't funny anymore seriously" I snapped ,the girl was glaring at me,

"This is serious stop being an idiot" she said looking pissed off. Suddenly she began to fade as if she was a TV with bad connection. She was blurring and I just barely managed to make out her next words,

" Today,9 o'clock tonight catch her waiting in the kitchen, Ethan Wilson,"

and then she disappeared completely. I stared wildly around me, before sighing I wasn't going to give them the satisfaction of freaking me out and having me camp out in my kitchen tonight. I slowly walked back to the movie theater but everyone was sitting in their seats staring at the screen. I sat down calmly but my mind was buzzing how had they all gotten back here so quickly and how had Max disappeared like that in the hallway?

Later that night I went downstairs for a glass of water to find Nudge standing in the kitchen all dressed up.

"Where do you think you're going?" I asked. Grabbing a glass of water and jumping onto the counter

"Umm I uhhh" she stuttered my heart froze and I turned my head to check the clock 9 :00 on the dot.

I turned to look at Nudge, but before I could say anything the doorbell rang I went to answer it,

"no wait Fang don't!" nudge shouted I opened the door anyways to reveal a boy with pale skin and a rose in his hand on the front step.

"who are you?" I asked

"im Ethan Wilson" he said blinking at me "Nudge and I have a date tonight"

I turned to look at Nudge she smiled halfheartedly,

"Surprise?" she tried

"upstairs" I snapped " and you beat it now!" he shot off our porch pretty fast and I heard Nudge scream about how I was ruining her life as she slammed her bedroom door but I hardly heard any of it , I was in a trance I walked back towards the kitchen. I felt sort of numb and there was a buzzing in my ears.

"do you believe me now?" a voice said I whipped around too find Max sitting on my counter sipping my water.

"ok what do you want?" I asked quietly

"I told you" she said hopping off the counter and stretching "im here to tell you how to save your life , or show you rather "she stuck out her hand "well take it" she said to me I slowly reached out my hand and as soon as I held hers the world spun out of focus. There was nothing but white flashes blinding me in every direction.

Ok that's it. Please review I'm thinking of doing a different story and maybe just deleting this one or starting over but if even just one person wants me to keep this I will.

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