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Mark was thinking of ways he could get Jay to love Nya again because she was heart broken He walked to Jay's room. "Jay your making a big mistake Nya loves you and needs you please realize your not making a good choice" he barked. "why are you barking"? he asked. Mark paced around trying to find a way for Jay to understand him. "I know"! he barked. He walked out of Jay's room and into Nya's, and then he knocked some paper off the desk and took it in his mouth. He walked back to Jay's room. "ok Jay here's what's up" he barked. He dipped his paw in some paint. And started writing Nya loves you and she is so upset that you broke up with her just ask her he wrote. "you can paint and understand what's going on"! he said in shock. He barked. Jay walked out of the room to Nya. "you really miss me that much"? he asked. "what are you talking about" she asked. "well your dog painted that you miss me and are upset that I broke up with you" he said. "well yes I miss you and still love you very much" she said. after he saw how beautiful and kind Nya was he remembered that he still loved her and made a big mistake. Mark walked in the room. "you're the best dog ever" she said. she patted his head. "aww shucks it was nothing just doing my duty" he barked. "Nya it took me being a complete idiot to realize that you are the one for me" he said. "oh Jay I love you" she said. he got down on one knee. "Nya will you marry me"? he popped the question. She began crying. "yes of course" she said Mark was so happy. "I hope I get to see the wedding" he said. just then Kai walked in. " Jay you bum how can you not realize that Nya is the one" he said. "it's ok Kai I made up with her and now were getting married" he said. "ok but try anything funny and your dead" he said. so Jay and Nya started planning their wedding.
Aww so sweet anyway I hope I improved for you guys thanks reallycool for helping me know where to place it and thank you my readers for your reviews that also helped goodnight ;)