Nothing Good Ever Happens To Me

Okay guys, so I'm going to try and break things up here but everyone is about to get very jumbled. Hopefully, it won't be too confusing and if it does sorry.

Where we left off…

Loren: "You too babe! Hey did you know you are wearing the same color as my dress?"

Eddie: She was so oblivious, but it was cute. "Nope." I shook my head and laughed a little. She just rolled her eyes and continued to get her make-up done. 20 minutes later she headed upstairs to put on her dress. When she got up there, there was a knock on the door. I went to get the door; I hoped it was Mel and Ian because I wanted to surprise Lo now. Not right before her concert.

She is not yours…

Eddie: Everyone was moving around crazily in the living room when there was a knock at the door. I was the only one who heard it, or at least paid attention to. I almost didn't wanna get it because I was having fun watching my girl get all dressed up, plus I had to make sure they weren't changing her too much. "Welc…"

Person: "What? Were you expecting someone else?"

Eddie: "Ummm, yes actually. Who are you and can I help you with something?"

Person: "Yeah, I'm looking for my family. The front desk said she was staying in this room."

Eddie: "Well, I think you have the wrong room because as you can tell, everyone who needs to be here is."

Person: Boy, Eddie was dumb. I can't believe he is having this big of a problem figuring it out. "No, this is the right room. See?" I said handing him the note from the front desk.

Eddie: The note he handed me and our room number, so I figured they just wrote the wrong number, but then I read the rest of it. The door was still cracked as I just stood there shocked and confused. Was this who I thought it was? And if so what the hell was he doing here! He has no right to be here! "Well, if I'm reading this correctly Loren and Nora are the family you are looking for?"

Person: "Yeah they are. I've been searching long and hard for them. I got lucky when I seen Loren's music video and then found out she was coming here." My guess was Eddie didn't know about our first meeting at Loren's other concert; after all, he was dead then.

Eddie: "What are you to them?" I needed to know before I let him in. Especially, if it was her Dad he would never get passed me. Me and my Pops would probably kill him for hurting our girls before he got chance to talk to them.

Charge!...

Max: "Everything okay at the door there Ed?" Eddie had been at the door for a good five minutes just asking, whoever, was there questions, so I was headed over to the door to check on him.

Eddie: "Yeah Pop, everything is co…" Pops had made it to the door before I could answer him and he was charging at this guy at the door like he had met him before and needed to get revenge. I guess I missed something big, or maybe this was the guy Pops was fighting with a long time ago at the bar. (Max really did get in a fight. It was when Eddie was still dating Chloe. He never did tell them what the fight was about. I think it was in at least the first 10 episodes.) I grabbed Pops by the shoulder to try and stop him, but it wasn't happening. He got this guy pinned up against the wall and that's when Nora came out, I guess she heard the noise.

Nora: "Trent? What are you doing here? I told you to stay away from my daughter!"

Trent: Coughing as Max let out a little pressure on my throat, "She's my daughter! I have the right to see her!"

Eddie: "Uhhh no buddy! That right was taken away when you left a 4 year old girl and her mother heartbroken almost 14 years ago!"

Nora: "And I told you, she is NOT your daughter! She is my daughter and that's it! You lost out on the privilege of calling her yours when you left!"

Max: Trent kept squirming and I just kept sticking him back into the wall, harder and harder each time. Trent decided he wanted to pull a fast one and kicked me in the balls and I dropped down to my knees. Man that shit really hurts!

Eddie: As soon as that dead-beat kicked Pops I was all over him, just like I was Tyler. Right jab to the face, left jab in the gut, and then he hit the ground. He tried to trip me and it didn't faze me. I walked over to Pops to help him up, since Nora had run inside I'm guessing to call security. Trent tried to get up again and I kicked him and his face was bleeding everywhere, I got his ass right in the mouth! Pops kicked him in the gut and said, "Yeah that's right, I'm a man. I don't kick other men in the balls, but since you're already down there…" and he kicked him with all his force right in the nuts. Trent's eyes went red and tears were appearing. I thought to myself, this guy will never be able to have kids again, let alone leave another one.

The truth hurts…

Loren: Mom had come in and called security and she was crying so I went to the door to figure out what was going on. I heard Eddie laughing and the sound of a guy in pain and was instantly worried. I walked out the door to find Max out of breath, Eddie laughing and out of breath, and then what appeared to be my Trent rolling on the floor in pain. "Max, Eddie what's going on?" I said scared.

Eddie: "Just giving this dead- beat a taste of his own medicine." I said trying to lighten the mood. I knew Lo was scared and I didn't want that right before her concert. She just stared at me with a "what the hell" look in her eyes. "It's okay Lo, okay? He came up here trying to get to you and Mom, I mean trying to get to you and…"

Loren: It was cute how Eddie just called my mom, Mom. I didn't want him to change it so I said, "Its fine, and hopefully she will be your Mom someday. Now continue please." Trent had gotten up thanks to security grabbing him. "Oh, hey wait guys I want him to stay for a quick second."

Eddie: "Anyways, he was trying to get to you and Mom and I didn't realize who he was at first. That's when Pops stepped out and just charged at him. I still don't understand how he knew who it was, but yeah. And then he kicked Pops in the nuts after Nora said a few words and then left to go get security. And- and then well this." I said moving my hand around the hall way to show her everything and then pointed to my head, which had a small cut on it.

Loren: I walked over and kissed Eddie's cut and he just laughed. "So Trent, after all the trouble you caused last time you still decided to show up?"

Eddie: "Last time? What last time? What did I miss?"

Trent: "I just wanted to see my lovely DAUGHTER. I didn't want things to end badly."

Loren: "Things ended badly 14 years ago, Trent! And again, I am not your daughter! I may have your blood in me, but I am not yours!"

Trent: "This won't be the last you see of me Loren, this is not how I want to end with you. I want to make everything up to you."

Nora: "Make everything up to her? That's impossible. She had to become and adult at age 4 just to help me! She didn't get to have the childhood most kids have. You ruined everything; you can't go back and fix it now!"

Max: "You will never get the chance to if I'm in the picture!"

Trent: "I can and will, I will find away to fix all of this because I love you!"

Nora: "Security, you can take him now!"

Loren: "Oh Trent, one last thing… I don't love you, and I never will. I have never hated anyone so much in my entire life. I don't even hate the girl who has made fun of me throughout all of my high school years this much! You made it impossible for me to see the good in things first. I take good news and instantly turn it into what-if this happens and it goes bad. I take everything too literally, because I never got the chance to just be a kid and make jokes! I always feel like when I meet someone new and we become close they are gonna leave. When I love a boy I know that there is always a great chance they are going to leave, just like you. I loved my daddy, but I hate the person he became the day you left. You have made me into the women I am and I hate it! I got screwed from a good life when you left me, a four year old little girl wondering where her daddy went." I said so frustrated that tears wouldn't even come out. Security took Trent away and I glanced around the room to see: My mom with tears falling down her cheeks, Max is trying to comfort my Mom with tears and his eyes, and Eddie sunken down to the ground crying. I didn't realize the words I said to Trent would hurt everyone around me. I was headed to my room when I heard a familiar voice, "What's going on here?" she said all worried. It sounded like Mel, but what was she doing here? She is supposed to be in L.A. at school. I just let it go though and ran down to where the stairs were. I was headed to the roof. I didn't have a place to think here, and this was the best I could think of. As I reached the door I heard three more voices talk. One said, "You okay mate? I'm here for you, let's talk this out." That one was defiantly Ian, so I guess Mel and Ian really were here. Then the second voice said, "Loren wait! Is this really true?" That was Eddie, he sounded so sick. I really did hurt him, but I didn't mean to. "I'm sorry," I whispered to myself and opened to the door when I heard Mel again.

Mel: "Lo, wait! Come back; let's talk about whatever just happened."

Loren: "I'm sorry I hurt all of you. I didn't mean to, but I guess the truth hurts. I- I just need to get out of here! I'm sorry but I can't do this concert tonight." I said and ran up the stairs to the roof.

Give me 20 minutes…

Eddie: What just happened here? Everything was fine, but then HE had to show up and ruin everything. This guy really had a bad habit of that. First, he ruined Loren's childhood and now he is ruining her and her life! I just wanted to kill him and get it over with! But I couldn't do that, right now I need to let the truth sink in and go calm Loren down. She had to be flipping out. I mean her Dad just showed up and hurt her and all the rest of us could do is break down into tears. What man cries when his girl needs him? Man I'm a bitch! Ian and Mel showed up at the worst time possible. They were supposed to be a surprise to Loren, but instead they were just more unneeded people. "If you all will excuse me, I'm going to go check on Loren. She had got to be flipping out, and we all just made it worse. No offense. I know what she said hurt, but I guess it was the truth. But all of that was pointed at him, not us. Nora, I know it hurts, but how about you and my Dad just go sit down and talk everything out. This is all just too crazy to handle in one minute. We cannot let Loren miss this concert because her Dad, I mean Trent, had to come ruin it all. So you guys just calm down and let Kelly know I'll be back in 20 minutes with a concert ready amazing girl, okay?" They all just nodded, and Mel and Ian were standing there still confused. I left them though, and headed up to the roof top.

Max: "Be smart son, handle this with the most care you possibly have. Be careful and calm and sweet, okay?"

Eddie: "I hear you Dad and you-you do the same with her Dad. She's an amazing woman she doesn't deserve to be treated the way he just treated her!" I yelled as I headed up the stairs. I wanted to run, but my body still hurt from whatever happened out in Ojai.

No random guys…

Kelly: "What just happened out there? Where is Loren? She needs to finish getting ready."

Nora: "Kelly, will you please just shut the hell up! Everything will be okay, just give us all 20 minutes!" Kelly was really pissing me off. She has been rushing everyone all day and it is just now 5:30. Loren wasn't performing till 9 and the festival wasn't starting till 7!

Kelly: I just rolled my eyes and said, "Okay." I have no idea what just happened, but I seen tears in everyone's eyes so I guessed it wasn't good. Nora and Max went upstairs and that's when I noticed Mel and some guy. "Okay, Mel I know you are new to this but you can't just bring random guys in here!"

Ian: I looked at Mel and she was pissed at what Kelly had just said. Before Mel could go off on this girl I began talking. "Ummm, well excuse me Miss, but I am not just some random guy. I am Eddie's best mate! Ask Jake, he knows. Where is Jake by the way?"

Kelly: "Oh, sorry. And that's a good question I don't know where he is, ill call him." I said grabbing my phone.

Can I really do this?...

Loren: Why did everything bad always happen to me? First my dad leaves and I have to become an adult at age 4 because I couldn't deal with my mom hurting so I had to help her. Then, I grow up and I have a bully who is so dumb I can't believe she actually has friends. Then there's the fact that I "can sing" and I have the worst stage fright ever. Next Eddie, I meet my celebrity crush and mess up. He takes me back, but then his ex gets in the way. His ex causes more trouble and he goes missing. Then I think he's dead and that leads us to now. Eddie is alive, but of course something else bad had to happen. My father shows up right before my concert to ruin everything. It always seems that when something good happens to me 10 pounds of bad is added onto it. It gets better and then gets worse again. Is this how my life will end, bad? Because at this rate I only get a day or so of happiness and weeks of depression! I would say that I can't believe it but now that I think about it I have no reason not to believe it. Nothing could be any worse! I feel like my whole world is ending. I don't think I can take this anymore. I get up and walk to the edge of the roof and look down. Can I do this? Could I really take my own life?

Alright boss…

Kelly: I've called Jake about six times now and he still hasn't answered. Where the hell and what the hell is he doing? I call again and still no answer. This time I grab Loren's phone and call, but still no answer. I tell Ian and let him know that I'm headed to go find Jake. "Ian, I'm going to go find Jake. Oh and if Loren and Eddie come back make sure they hurry and get ready!"

Ian: "Alright boss." I said laughing and Mel just looked at me. I could tell she really did not like Kelly.

Jake?...

Kelly: I walked down the hall way to Jake's room and knocked. I got no answer, but thankfully I had a key card to his room. I walked in and all the lights were off. I switched the lights on as I walked throughout the suite. Finally I found Jake and folded up on the couch crying. "Jake?"

Well guys, I'm pretty proud of this chapter. What is going on with Jake? Will Loren take her own life before Eddie gets up the stairs? What is going on? You may be asking yourself these questions, but I'm not giving anything away. Hate me all you want, you may even hate me when the next chapter comes out. But that's okay. I'm just going where ever my head takes me.

I've decided not to post tomorrow if I don't get answers to my questions:

1) If I add Jeremy into the mix should he get a girlfriend? If so, who? I do have one idea in mind though.

2) Who should Adam date now or should I get rid of him? I again, have 1 idea for him.

3) Should I add Cameron to the mix? I also have an idea for that too.

Please answer because I love writing for you guys, but it's hard when I don't get any help. I just need some answers so I can make my writing more interesting. So y'all, please just review with answers and suggestions. You can also PM me. I am open to suggestions and I would also like to help someone with a story. Like a co-written story? Bad or good, it doesn't matter. I just love writing.

M.L. #14 Jordan G.