Three Surprises
Part: 3
I hope you liked the last chapter and I hope you like this one too! Sorry if the whole performance thing isn't good. I've never been to a concert so I don't really know how they go. This was my best guess. Please enjoy and review!
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Where we left off…
Loren: Quietly, but above her normal voice," My surprise for tonight is a new song!" Everyone cheered, even Eddie. I guess he was shocked too. "So I wrote this song just two days ago. With everything going on in my life I was really inspired. Well, at first I was a mess and could hardly concentrate, but hope and family pulled me out of my funk and this came out of it. This song means so much to me as it describes my true feelings. I decided to share it with you all tonight, because I was inspired by a young girl who I met tonight. My original plan was to sing a different song, but I'll save that for next time. So uhhh I hope you all like it, here it goes." Everyone was silent and it was just me and my guitar. I couldn't see anyone and I loved it. I really wanted to see Eddie's face though, so I made sure to tell them to turn the lights back on so I could see after I started playing. I began strumming the guitar, I was so scared. What if people don't like it? What if Eddie doesn't like it? What am I going to do!
For you Eddie…
Loren: It was still dark as I continued strumming. I was scared to start singing. This was like singing in my room, but usually I'm alone. I have no background music to cover up my mistakes it's just me, my guitar, the audience, and the people I love the most. "This is for you Eddie," I said softly into the microphone. The light dimmed up so I could see a bit, but not enough to make out faces. I also seen a lot of phones and cameras, if I messed up it would be all over the internet. "Just go!" I told myself as the words to my new song left my mouth.
"I'm sittin' here all alone
No one to hold
No one to make me feel better
You left just like him
But I loved you more, I loved you more
Oh, I loved you more"
"Okay first part over," I thought to myself. So far no boo's, it must be going good. I looked around, my eyes had caught up to the light and I could see. Jessica was back with her uncle and Eddie and Mel were sitting together at stage left, where they have been all night. Mel was filming still so I knew I would get to see and hear all about this performance. Eddie's arms were crossed and he was all tensed up. I could tell he was nervous for me and for the song.
"I'd rather have you
And no one else
Just come back to me
I can't do this without you
I loved you more
But now you're gone"
"Oh yeah, I'm stuck sittin at home
Thinking of you and what could be and these memories
Oh why'd you have to go?
I loved you more"
"They told me you were gone
Gone forever and never coming back
They told me to move on
They told me to be strong
But I loved you more
I couldn't let you go
I needed you home
I couldn't give up
Oh, I loved you more"
"Oh, they all left me and
I'm stuck sittin at home
Thinking of you and what could be and these memories
Oh why'd you have to go?
I loved you more"
"You've got to come back
Come back home
I need to know
Please come tell me
Make these wishes come true
Because I need you to know
I loved you more"
"Almost done!" I wonder if, he gets the message of my song. I loved him more before he disappeared than I ever did anyone else. I love him more now though. I moved my eyes slowly to look around again. Eddie was standing, now, as close to the stage as he could possibly get without being in view of the crowd. I seen a sparkle in his eyes, but it was tears. I hope he understands! Mel and my Mom were up by Eddie, but not as close. I could see Max and Ian walking up to join the group. Kelly and Jake must be talking. My eyes went back to the audience as my pause was over and I needed to continue the song.
"He was there before
But now he's gone
Made me who I am
But you were changing that
Making me who I want to be
I loved you more"
"Just come back
You can't be gone
Soul mates stay together
Forever babe never, never
Everything has to get better
I loved you more"
"Uh huh, you will see you and me
Never letting anything take over
I'm stuck sittin at home
Thinking of you and what could be and these memories
Oh why'd you have to go?
I loved you more"
"Forever in love
Because right now
Just know
He doesn't even compare
You're nothing like him
I loved you more"
Eddie had a few tears rolling down his face. I wanted to go hold him, but I needed to finish the song. Max and my Mom were standing together with Max's arms wrapped around my Mom, she was crying now too. Mel wasn't crying, but I could tell she was saddened. I could see people in the audience wiping away tears. They didn't know though, they have no idea who "he" is or what this really means. They probable thought the "he" in my song was an ex who broke my heart, but it's not. Like I told Eddie, my songs are letters to or about my Dad; this one was a bit different though. And I could tell Eddie remembered that. After this song is over I just want to go and talk to Eddie and make sure he understands what I am saying and my mom too.
Are you sure?...
Phil: "Yes Dad, I want to go to college."
Lisa: "Where; and for what?"
Phil: Mom sounded shocked; I guess they thought that I just might keep with my same life after catching this huge break. "Come on guys, don't sound so shocked. I don't want to live the criminal life anymore. It turned me into a 19 year old senior idiot! I can't be a bad example for my son or daughter."
Gus: "S-speaking of it, when do you find out?"
Phil: "3 more days Dad."
Lisa: "Yeah, yeah back to my boy going to college." I truly was excited that Phil wanted this, but I was so surprised.
Phil: "Well, after the accident with Dad I felt something. Knowing I saved his life made me feel good. I want to save people's lives and b…"
Gus: "A cop?"
Phil: "No n…"
Lisa: "A fireman?"
Phil: "No! Guys, I want to be a paramedic. I want to be able to save my children or anyone else if something goes wrong."
Lisa: "Oh son, that's so sweet. But what do you know about being a paramedic?"
Phil: "That's what college is for. I already know about medicines, so I just need to learn everything else."
Gus: "It's not that simple Son." He sounded so non-impressed, like he just thought College would be just a simple thing.
Phil: "I know Dad. I'm willing to do the work."
Lisa: "Are you sure you really want to do this?"
Gus: "Plus you have a…"
Phil: "Kid on the way, I know! I have to support my family somehow. Sorry to say this, but I don't wanna live here forever. Trust me, okay? Now I'm gonna go lie down with Aid, goodnight." I said and left the kitchen. I could tell my parents were skeptical, but I knew they would soon understand. I need to do this Aid and my future child. But this is mostly to prove to myself and everyone else I can do it!
I don't understand…
Eddie: Loren's song is so beautiful and heartfelt, but I just don't understand. I know the "he" is Lo's dad, but what does the "I loved you more" mean? Was this what she meant earlier? I'm so confused! I guess I need to just keep listening. I don't know why tears are falling from my eyes, it's almost like my heart understands but my mind doesn't.
Mel: Eddie's crying and I don't know why. I know this song is about him being gone, but it doesn't make any since. The audience must understand because they are crying too. I feel so lost, I'm gonna make Lo explain this to me! Or maybe Nora get's it?
Nora: Max was comforting me, but I think Eddie and I are the only ones who remotely understand this song. Lo is comparing her father and Eddie. It was like everything she told Trent before her MK concert, but in a song, along with her feelings for Eddie. She really does think that everyone she loved or loves will leave her, but she didn't include me. "Does my baby not love me?"
Loren: "I'm stuck sittin at home
Thinking of you and what could be and these memories
Oh why'd you have to go?
I loved you more"
"He left when I was young
But I'm older now
And you've left
I've gotta be strong
But I'm realizing things
I need you more
I loved you more"
Tears formed in my eyes after I seen Eddie crying, and now they are flowing freely down my cheeks. I haven't even finished the song! Just thinking about the lines makes me tear up. It brings back everything I felt when Eddie disappeared and it brings up the feelings I had when I was younger and my Dad left. I hated that I was crying in front of people and the fact that I couldn't wipe my tears until the song was over.
"Oh please come back
I can't be stuck thinking
Of you and what could be
And all these memories
I loved you more
I LOVE you more
Oh, please, please come back
I LOVE you more"
I'm pretty positive I hit the last high note. The crowd lost it, they might have been crying, but they cheered their hearts out! I began to wipe my tears away. I pushed my guitar around to my back as I stood and bowed to thank everyone. I seen Eddie slowly walking onto the stage and knew he was confused and wanted answers, now. I grabbed the microphone and began speaking, "If you all only knew how hard that song is for me to sing. It really pulls my feelings all together. I was so scared to sing it for you all. I really hoped you loved it! And sorry we ended on a slow note, but I really wanted to sing the song for you and him." I said as I pointed to Eddie. He was wiping away some final tears as he made his way to the microphone.
Eddie: Pulling myself together, "She was great right?" I said and the crowd responded with loud cheers and whistles. "I just wanted to thank you all. I know you are here for Loren, but I felt the love too. You guys really made this the best welcome home present yet! Thank you so much and enjoy the rest of your night! Now please give MY GIRL another round of applause! " I said and then gave the microphone backed to Loren and put my arm around her waist as the crowd hollered.
Loren: "It's true you guys have really made this an amazing night! Thank you so much for accepting me and my music hear! I love you all goodnight and be safe!" I shouted. Eddie and I began to walk off stage; I could feel the anticipation and worry in his heart beat, which I could feel through his hand on my waste.
Announcer: "We thank everyone for coming out to see tonight's performer, Loren Tate! Please let us know what you thought on Twitter and Facebook! Please enjoy the rest of your night and be safe!" The crowd cheered one last time and they started to slowly exit.
Learn your roll…
Oz: "…For this movie, right now, you guys just need to learn about your rolls. For you, you are the main guy. Everyone knows you and what you did. You are very solitary, but in the middle of the movie you have an epiphany. You learn that the way you have been acting is really messed up."
Tyler: "And and by the script I can tell that I really screwed some people over. And I treat people like crap even though I'm in prison for like 20 years."
Oz: "Exactly, after your little epiphany you become more social. You make some friends and start allowing your family to visit."
Tyler: "So tomorrow after the court hearing you want me to go to the jail and meet someone who was very unsocial at first, but is now very vibrant?"
Oz: "Yes, exactly. Now I'll see you tomorrow after the court hearing. I need to go talk with Connor and the rest of the cast." I got up off the couch and walked to the door and headed for the other cast members rooms.
Backstage…
Loren: "Mel c-can you go find Jessica and her Uncle and bring them back here? Eddie and I are going to go the dressing room real quick." I said and I felt my mom's eyes bolt onto me. "Of course he won't be in there when I change, Mom!"
Nora: "Sorry sweetie."
Mel: "Yeah I can do that. Ian, want to come with me?"
Ian: "Ummm, yeah sure."
I can keep a secret…
Eddie: Lo and I were headed to the dressing room. Kelly and Jake have disappeared; they didn't even tell Lo could job before they went off to do their own thing. What is going on with those two? Ehhh, who cares right now? All I care about is finding out what Loren's song truly means, but first I wanna kiss her to let her know its okay. As soon as we walk in the dressing room I notice that it's empty which means Lo and I can do whatever for now. Lo walked in first, I closed and locked the door. ;)
Loren: I heard Eddie lock the door which meant he either wants to kiss or he wants to talk. I think he probably wants to talk though, I mean my song made him cry, and he must be confused or hurt. "E-Eddie I know that might have been confusing for you, but just let me explain."
Eddie: Instead of responding at that moment I back Lo up to the wall and kissed her with so much passion. I let our lips stay intertwined for about a minute before I spoke. Lo has a tear running down her face, I guess I've confused her or maybe something is wrong. I wipe away the tear, "Lo, listen okay?" She nodded her head and I continued. "Look, I am highly confused by your song, but you don't have to explain if you don't want to because that kiss told me everything. You are sorry that I may have been hurt by your song, you want to know why I was crying, you don't know if I understand your song, and you are crying because you are too worried. Am I right?"
Loren: "H-how could you tell all of that from one kiss?"
Eddie: "Because I love you. Loving you, I've grown to understand you and your emotions more than I ever have anyone else. I know this is hard, but it's okay. Let me just tell you what I do understand, that is if you want to explain?"
Loren: "Of course I want to explain. That's why I brought you with me; I will explain things to everyone else later. But you're different, you mean so much more to me and I don't want you to be hurt or confused."
Eddie: "Okay. Well, what can I say? I absolutely loved your song, it was so heartfelt. I know that the "he" in your song is your Father. You sung about how he was there for the first 4 years of your life, but he left, and then about how him leaving made you who you are. You also said that he doesn't compare to me, which by the way made me smile." She smiled so wide, she is so glad that I understand this part. I knew telling her this would stop her explanation from being so hard. Her Dad was a sore subject for her, so I didn't want her to have to talk about it. "And I'm pretty sure you said you need and love me more. "
Loren: So much relief was lifted from my shoulders; I don't have to explain the "he" part now! "Exactly, and the song title is "I Loved you More" for that reason. I wrote this when you were gone so at that moment I knew I loved you more than I ever did him. Eddie you already know how bad he hurts me. I said I needed you back so bad so you could make my wishes come true. My wish was to learn that the way my Father made me feel is wrong. I needed you to let me know that not everyone I love will leave. You won't leave right?"
Eddie: "Like I told you before, NEVER BABE. Or as you say "soul mates stay together, forever babe never, never." Her lyrics were starting to make so much more since now.
Loren: "I'm glad you liked that, it made my day when you said that up at Mulholland when you first came back. It was like you already heard my song. Do you have any other questions?"
Eddie: "As long as you still love me, and are ready to love me more, then no."
Loren: "Does this answer your question?" I said and this time he was backed up against the wall and I was kissing him. I felt the worry in his smile go away and everything was better. I think about 2 minutes later we both pulled away and I said, "Now can you unzip me?"
Eddie: She has no idea how hard it is for me to hear those words and not follow through, if you know what I mean. I laughed it off, I couldn't let her see how turned on I was by those words, "Shhh-sure."
Loren: I chuckled a bit, I could tell that Eddie was trying to hide the fact that those words turned him on. "Don't you worry; I already told you I'm ready to love you more."
Eddie: That sentence just spoke volumes to me. Ian was right! Now I really need to get prepared and make the rest of this night as special as I can without taking away from my plans for tomorrow before we get back on the plane to L.A. I unzipped Loren's dress and she walk back behind the divider that was placed in her room for her to change behind.
Loren: I slid off my dress and realized the other dress I needed was out on the rack hanging up. "Forget something?" I heard Eddie say sarcastically. "Ummm, yeah, a little help?"
Eddie: "No I'm good, you can come out here and get it yourself." I wonder if she will really do it.
Loren: "Eddie, I already have my other dress of." "Good," he said. What am I going to do? I cannot walk out there in a bra and underwear and I don't feel like putting this dress back on. "Close your eyes then!"
Eddie: "I don't want to; the last time I closed my eyes I woke up in a shed in Ojai." I could tell she was getting frustrated with my little game, but it was so funny.
Loren: "If my mom finds out, she is going to kill both of us."
Eddie: "I-I can keep a secret." She was really going to walk out, in front of me, practically naked!
Lo would never forget…
Mel: "Thanks for coming with me, Ian."
Ian: "No problem love, but can I ask why you wanted me to come along?"
Mel: "Well, you should know I hate being alone."
Ian: "Is that it?" I said seductively.
Mel: I looked at him and winked as we reached Jessica and her Uncle who were almost about to walk out. "Hey Loren wants to see you!"
Andrew: "Oh, sorry we thought she forgot about us."
Jessica: "See I told you!"
Mel: "Jessica is right; Lo would never forget something or someone important to her."
Ian: "Yeah, I've only known her for a while now and I can already tell that about her."
Andrew: "Okay, so what does she want?"
Mel: "I don't know, you will just have to come back here with us and wait on her to come back from the dressing room." We walked back towards the stage. Andrew and Ian jumped up and Jessica and I were headed to the stairs.
Ian: "Hold up ladies, no need to walk all the way down there." I had faith that I could pull Mel up, she didn't need to go all the way to the stairs. She isn't even that heavy.
Later?...
Jake: Lia called during Loren's performance so as soon as she was done I left to go call her. Lia was already important to me and I hardly know her. For some reason this girl just put the spark back in me that I needed. I was barley thinking about Traci, my focus was on Lia. I don't know why thought, my love life is so confusing. I want Traci back, but then I want Kelly, and then there's this new comer Lia. "H-h-hello?"
Lia: "Jake is everything okay?"
Jake: "Y-yeah, why wouldn't it be?"
Lia: "Well it's really loud and you sound like nervous or something."
Jake: "Oh well Loren's concert just got over, so people are still leaving. Plus this is a festival so there's a lot going on."
Lia: Ughh, why'd he have to bring up Loren? I know I don't know her, but she has Eddie. I'm so jealous, but who knows maybe if this music thing works out I will meet someone as sweet and caring as Eddie. "Oh, well I'll let you go then."
Jake: "C-can I call you later?" I don't know why I was so nervous; I don't even know this girl!
Labels and other singers…
Kelly: Loren did amazing; I haven't had the chance to tell her yet. My phone has been ringing off the hook, and videos of Loren's songs are already up on the web and the concert has only been over for no less than 20 minutes! Steven called about 5 times along with so many others. I figured I should call Steven back, he might have some news.
Steven: "Kel-Kelly you there?"
Kelly: "Huh, yeah I'm here. Sorry it's really loud. Uhhh, what's up?"
Steven: "What I can't just call to talk?"
Kelly: "Y-you can, but when you call 5 times something's up."
Steven: Laughing, "Fine, you got me this time. I just wanted to tell you to tell Loren how remarkable she was!"
Kelly: "That's it!?" I cannot believe he would call just for that!
Steven: Laughing again, "No, that was just the most important part. Anyways, the phone here at the office has been ringing like crazy!"
Kelly: "Mine too!"
Steven: "Well more record labels are calling, some other singers have called and said they have wanted to work with her before her and Eddie become a duo."
Kelly: "Record labels are good; just write them down and the same with the singers. But why do they think her and Eddie will become a duo?"
Steven: "I don't know, you will have to ask them. But I think it's a good idea."
Kelly: "Well, I'll let Jake know what you and everyone else thinks and we will think about it."
Steve: "You don't have to include me."
Kelly: "Yes I do, your opinion matters!"
Steven: I didn't know Kelly could be so sweet to someone else. She almost sounded more interested in me than Jake for that moment. "Kel, can I ask you a question?"
Kelly: "Shoot!"
That's it for this chapter. A few cliffhangers here and there . Please make sure you scroll back up and READ the BOLD part at the begging of this chapter. Most of my thoughts are posted there. Down here is just like an ending to each chapter. Please let me know what you think and again feel free to post this on Twitter or Tumbler or whatever. Also if anyone can sing, I would love it if you could sing my song and put it on YouTube. You get to decide how it goes, since there is no music to it. Please let me know if you do because I think it would be really freaking awesome and maybe Cody Longo or Brittany Underwood would see it! Just saying! Also the next chapter will be the final of the Three Surprises chapters. Anyone know what the 3 surprises were/are? Review with your answers or just with a review on the chapter(s)!
M.L. #14 Jordan G.