Three Surprises

Part: 4

Hey all! I hope you had a great Valentine's Day; mine was full of High school bull shit! Sometimes I just can't wait to turn 18, but other times I wanna stay a kid forever. Please keep reading, reviewing, and suggestion. I really do listen, I promise and I have some results for you. By tallying up what everyone who reviewed thought: Jeremy will be added to the story, I don't know if he will get a GF or not yet. Adam is making his last few appearances in these next few chapters. And Cameron will also be added to the story, but not as a stalker like some other stories have him. Thank you so much, your reviews really help! Please READ on.

Suggestion/ Question: Also if anyone can sing, I would love it if you could sing my song and put it on YouTube. You get to decide how it goes, since there is no music to it. Please let me know if you do because I think it would be really freaking awesome and maybe Cody Longo or Brittany Underwood would see it! Just saying!

Where we left off…

Steven: I didn't know Kelly could be so sweet to someone else. She almost sounded more interested in me than Jake for that moment. "Kel, can I ask you a question?"

Kelly: "Shoot!"

Talk to you later…

Lia: "Uhhh, yeah I guess; unless I get to it first." I stated with a jokingly tone.

Jake: "Mhmm, okay. Well, Lia, I will talk to you later."

Lia: "Bye Jake."

Jake: "Bye Lia." I said and hung up the phone. I seen Kelly a little bit away and started to walk to her, as I began to hear her conversation I learned she was on the phone with Steven.

Sudden interest…

Steven: "Well, I was just wondering now that Traci is gone, what are you and Jake?"

Kelly: "I don't really know; we haven't had the chance to sit down and talk. But I do know he likes this Lia girl."

Steven: "Lia?" I've heard the name twice, but I can't remember who it is.

Kelly: "The one that saved Eddie. I mean I like Jake n all, but I can see the real him now and it's not the one same guy I fell in love with. I guess I seen how he treated Traci and I guess that's what I wanted. But he's not like that with me."

Steven: "So now what?"

Kelly: "I think we are gonna have to talk first and then I'll let you know. Why the sudden interest in Jake and me?"

Steven: "N-no reason." I couldn't let Kelly know they real reason! "Well I'll, uhhh, see you when you get back."

Kelly: "Will you be at the office?"

Steven: "Probably not, why the sudden interest in me?" I said curiously and sarcastically.

Kelly: "Just wondering, b-bye Steven." I said as I hung up the phone. Steven was a very interesting guy, but I just don't know him that well.

Steven: "Bye Kel," I said, but she hung up the phone too quickly. I'm about to head out and leave this office. I need to think, for some reason I've gained feeling for Kelly and I don't know if I can control myself with her living in the same house as me.

Come here…

Mel: Ian wanted to pull me up on stage, I've never really thought about my weight as a problem until now. Ian was so little I don't think he can do it. I just sent him the biggest "NO" look I possibly could and shook my head left to the right a bit.

Ian: "Come here love and grab my hands." I seen the look she was sending me, but I am not taking NO for an answer! Finally, she started to walk over along with the young love, Jessica.

Andrew: "Jess, come on, you don't need to walk all the way down there." The stage stairs were all the way at the other end, literally it would take like 3 minutes to get over there.

Jessica: "I was just going with her." My Uncle was so protective; he barley lets me leave his side.

Andrew: Laughing, "I know sweetie, now come here." I took a hold of her hand and pulled her up over the, maybe 2 foot high or more, stage. Max Duran walked over to us and asked us to come with him. We did so ad left Ian and Melisa all by themselves. I knew the turn it was going to take and I agreed with Max that Jess didn't need to see that.

Ian: I laughed as Andrew and Jessica left with Max. Thanks to them, I could make this a cute moment instead of a PG one. Mel stuck out her hand and I took a hold of it very softly. She smiled as I rubbed my thumb across the top of her hand. I pulled her up with just one arm; I wanted to show her that even my scrawny self could lift her up. I pulled her up over the stage and the slowly dropped us both to the ground. Her giggles were so adorable as we fell to the ground. Our eyes locked and for the first time, ever, my heart skipped a few beats. I let my gaze leave her eyes and drop down to her lips. They were a precious glossy red, I just wanted to lick that gloss right off her. First off she didn't need and secondly it looked so God damn delicious. I brought my gaze back up to her eyes, her eyes never left mine though. "Maybe she doesn't wanna kiss me?" I though and my mind started to race about everything I've learned about this girl. Right now she is going through so much maybe this is so wrong, but I couldn't help myself. I was about to just pull away and apologize, but…

Control myself…

Loren: I stood behind the divider contemplating if I was really ready for this. Walking out there like this would be giving myself away, and really telling him that I was ready. But am I?

Eddie: Lo was still back there, and a minute or two have passed by. "L-lo, y-you don't have to. I was j-just messing around." I didn't want her feeling pressured by me. "Maybe she's not ready and Ian is wrong," I thought.

Loren: Eddie started talking, but I was too busy thinking to listen. My heart was beating so fast, I'm surprised it hasn't popped out of my flat chest. Before I knew it, my body was walking out from behind the divider. In my mind, I was still thinking, but my heart and body has already made up their mind. Eddie's eyes widened as I walked out. "Maybe I'm too ugly, he's probably grossed out," I thought to myself. But then my mind was wrong again.

Eddie: I can't believe she really did it! I n-never pictured her like this. She looked absolutely stunning, I have just never thought about seeing her this way because I knew she wasn't ready. I could tell she was scared, but she has no reason to be. She was in nothing but some lacy black underwear and a black bra. It was so adorable. She still gave me the feeling of being innocent, like I was in High School again and knew this was wrong. "But this isn't wrong, we aren't doing anything." I said to myself as my body was pulling me forward. I was still thinking, but my body didn't care it wanted Loren. I had to control myself; I can't get turned on in a dressing room! I placed my hands on Loren's waist and could hear her heart beating. She jumped a bit when my hands touched her, she was probably cold. "Wow!" I said and she just smiled a bit. "I-I didn't think you would walk out here."

Loren: "S-should I go back then?" The words left my mouth before I had time to think. I reminded myself of Mel, being all sarcastic and sassy. Eddie chuckled a bit.

Eddie: "H-hell no! Y-you don't understand how hard it is for me to control myself right now."

Loren: "Really?"

Eddie: "Y-yes really. You are so glad we are in a dressing room and not at home or in the hotel!" I said in a serious manner, but also trying to make Loren loosen up a bit.

Loren: "Haha, well I'm glad you can control yourself. Now can I get my dress?"

Eddie: "Not before this!" I laughed and picked her up. She wrapped her legs around my waist as I wobbled over to the couch. Our lips locked and didn't unlock until we hit the couch. She pulled away to take a breath and I tried to relax myself, but it was so hard to do, she is so sexy! Our tongues fought our lips as we both were going all out. My tongue made it in first and I could taste the mint-i-ness of Loren's toothpaste. "Mhmm." I moaned as Loren pulled away.

Loren: "This is no Bungalow situation." I said as I pulled myself away from Eddie. He laughed and I spoke up again, "Now let me get dressed so we can get to the hotel." I got up from Eddie's lap and made my way over to the rack of clothes. I took down my dress from the rack and slid it on. "Can you zip me up?"

Eddie: Laughing at Loren I got up from the couch. As she put her dress on I had to readjust myself, because her being on my lap practically naked was really turning me on. The words she spoke were clear indications that Ian was right. "I-I would rather take that dress back off of you."

Loren: "V-very funny, now come on! I'm hungry and tired."

Eddie: I walked over and zipped up her dress. "You will be even more tired later," I said sarcastically. She giggled a bit and I took her hand. "Are you ready to go?"

Loren: "Uhhh, yeah let me just grab this." I said and walked over to the vanity where I had placed the picture of Eddie and me, so far for every concert. Then I realized something that I had been wondering about since Eddie got back.

Confused?...

Max: "Nora sweetie, are you okay?"

Nora: "Y-yeah, why wouldn't I be?"

Max: "I could tell you were really shaken up by that song."

Nora: "It-it just doesn't make that much since to me."

Max: "And?"

Nora: "And I don't really wanna talk about it, okay? I know Lo will explain. I mean, you were confused too, right?'

Max: "Uhhh, yeah I was and still am. I would love to have some insight on the song. What do you know?"

Nora: "Really I just know that the "he" in the song is Loren's Dad. The rest is so confusing."

Max: I walked closer to Nora and took her hand; we then went and sat down. I placed my arm around her waist and kissed her cheek as we waited for our kids.

That's fine Love…

Ian: But… Mel leaned in. It took me a second to realize it, but then I found myself leaning in too. Her glare had finally dropped to my lips for the first time. My heart was beating faster and faster as we got closer and closer. Our noses lightly touched and then for the first time our lips. My mouth moved and then hers, the kiss stayed clean and no tongues were involved.

Mel: I can't believe I just kissed him! I don't even know where Adam and I stand, but what I do know is that this guy makes my heart stop. I've never had a kiss that didn't involve tongue and still be out of breath. Ian began to pull away as I did too. He place is forehead on mine and asked, "Was that okay?" I didn't really know exactly how to answer. "Uh huh, I-I just don't know if-if I can continue."

Ian: "T-that's fine Love, I know you are going through a lot. But just know, that was the most amazing breathtaking kiss I've ever had."

Mel: "Me too." I said as he stood up and placed a hand out to help me up.

Ian: I brought Mel to her feet and asked, "W-what do you think our friends will say?"

Mel: "I-I don't know, but can you promise me something?"

Ian: "Sure Love."

Mel: "D-don't tell Eddie till I talk to Lo. I have so much to tell her and I don't want her to find out from Eddie and not her best friend."

Ian: "I-I will try my best, but Eddie is my best mate it's kind of hard."

Mel: "That's all I ask."

Ian: "If he starts asking questions, I will make sure not to let him tell."

Mel: "Thank you Ian, for everything."

Ian: "Anytime Love. Now let's head back and see if they are done "getting dressed"." Mel laughed and I took her hand as we walked back stage. When I could see a glimpse of Nora and Max I released Mel's hand and with a smile on my face I said, "Don't want them to tell either."

I do understand…

Jake: Kelly had hung up the phone and I walked closer to her, "W-what was that about Kel?"

Kelly: I jumped at the sound of Jake's voice; I hope he didn't hear what I said. "J-just talking to Steven."

Jake: "I'm not the same guy anymore?" I said sincerely, sadly, and confusingly.

Kelly: "You heard?"

Jake: "Yeah I heard!"

Kelly: "It's not what it sounded like."

Jake: "T-then what the hell was it?!"

Kelly: "Jake calm down! You already said you and I would never be, so why does it matter?"

Jake: "Because I wanna know why you think I'm different!"

Kelly: "It's just that you've changed. I don't see the family wanting, romantic guy anymore. I see a workaholic who is falling for a girl he doesn't even know."

Jake: "I- I don't know about Lia. She is sweet, but maybe I-I wanted to find love too much. It has only been a few days since Traci left. Kel, I'm just gonna think about things, okay?"

Kelly: "You do that Jake, but know I-I don't wanna be with you. It has already caused to many problems and-and I don't want that."

Jake: "So whatever we had is completely gone?"

Kelly: "Yes, Jake. It's for the best, okay? I want to work with you and remain friends, but I don't want to be in a toxic relationship with you. Do you understand?"

Jake: "A-actually I do understand. This is good Kel, real good. Now we can both be free, and the guy who likes you can have you!"

Kelly: "What guy!?"

Jake: Walking away, "We need to go find Eddie and Loren!" I said laughing with Kelly trailing behind me. We made our way back stage where Eddie and Loren were nowhere to be seen.

Call them/Text him…

Eddie: Walking to the dressing room door, "Lo, you coming?" She was like in a daze by her vanity.

Loren: "Huh? Uhhh, yeah sorry I just realized something."

Eddie: "What?"

Loren: "Well I was getting our picture and then I had like this flashback of being in the MK dressing room. My-my dress was thrown on the vanity!"

Eddie: "Okay?"

Loren: "That-that's why I didn't get your note!"

Eddie: "Huh?"

Loren: "The dress was over the note! Eddie we have to go back to MK as soon as we get home! Call them and tell them not to clean the dressing room!"

Eddie: "I will, but Lo they probably already did. And-and why do you want the note?"

Loren: "Just because Eddie, okay?"

Eddie: "Okay love."

Loren: "Call them!"

Eddie: "It can't wait?"

Loren: "No call them!" Eddie pulled out his phone and instead of dialing he started scrolling with a confused look on his face. "What?"

Eddie: "Uhhh, Tyler Rorke j-just texted me."

Loren: "W-what does it say?"

Eddie: Instead of trying to explain it, I just read it to Loren. "It says: "I know you hate me, but I just wanted to prepare you. Chloe will be calling soon and is going to try to convince you to help her. All I can say is, DON'T DO IT! She just ruins people's lives. I'm a changed guy, okay? I know I've done some stupid things, but I'm back to the real me. The guy I first was when we started filming Senior Ditch Day. I'm sorry for everything I've said and done to you. I'm a changed man and I'm just trying to make things right with the guy I used to call my best friend.""

Loren: "Uhhh, wow. That's crazy."

Eddie: "Yeah I know, I mean I never expected him to apologize after everything that went down between us."

Loren: "What did happen with you two?"

Eddie: "Uhhh, it's too much to explain right now." I was trying to stop the memories of that day/night from running through my head, but it didn't work. I shook my head trying to get rid of the memories.

Loren: "Eddie, w-what are you doing?" I said laughing at the way he looked when he shakes his head.

Eddie: "Trying to get rid of the memories that are showing up in my head. I don't wanna think or talk about them right now. I just wanna think of you."

Loren: "Well, I'm flattered, but maybe you should think about them and text him back."

Eddie: "Later, okay? Let me just make this call for you and I will think about them in the limo, okay?"

Loren: "Okay," I said as Eddie began to dial.

5 minutes later:

Eddie: "You're in luck; they said the club has been so busy they haven't made it back stage yet so no one has touched your stuff."

Loren: "Phew, thank God!"

Eddie: Laughing, "O-okay now let's get going. They are probably freaking out, out there." I said and took Loren's hand. She took the picture of us and put it in her purse as we walked out the door. Kelly and Jake came up to us, told Loren good job and that they would talk later, and then headed into the dressing room to pack everything up.

Talking…

Max: "Welcome back kids, while you were gone we all decided never to leave you two alone."

Eddie: "Haha very funny Pop. Sorry we were just talking." I said as Loren looked at me and we both smiled.

Mel: "Sure you we're just talking…for maybe a second."

Loren: "Mel! We were talking for longer than a second!" I said as I winked at her, she had the biggest grin on her face. But I could tell it wasn't just from what I said. I sent her a look that said "we will talk later." She just nodded as my mom began to talk.

Nora: "And it better have been just talking!"

Eddie: Everyone laughed at Nora, I'm glad they did too because it saved Loren and I from having to reply to her.

Tony/ Driver: "Are we ready to go?"

Loren: "Not yet, Tony. We have to wait on Kelly and Jake…"

Jessica: "And talk to me!"

Loren: I jumped at the little voice, "Y-yeah and talk to her. We will be ready in about 10 minutes."

Tony/ Driver: "Okay and good job Ms. Tate. I loved it!"

Loren: "You watched?"

Tony/ Driver: "Of course I did! It was amazing!"

Loren: "Thank you so much." I said as Tony headed back to the limo.

Shhh…

Ian: I walked over to Eddie as Loren, Mel, Nora, and Jessica started talking. "Aye Mate."

Eddie: Ian had this awkward smirk on his face that I did not like! "Dude, wipe that smirk of your face!"

Ian: "What are you talking about Mate?"

Eddie: "You know what I'm talking about!"

Ian: "Fine," I said and wiped my face sarcastically. "Gone?"

Eddie: "Haha very funny, but no it's not gone it's just different. Wait a minute, did I miss something?"

Ian: "N-no Mate, Mel and I just shared the stage." I laughed as my Mate's eyes grew.

Eddie: "What-dude come on! You know what happens when we date best friends."

Ian: "No one said anything about dating."

Eddie: "Well, I swear to God, if you hurt her you will be hurting Loren. So I will have to kill you."

Ian: "I'm not going to, now don't say another word about it till I tell you that you can, okay?!"

Eddie: I put my hands up in surrender, "I won't man, calm down."

Max: "What are you to talking about now?"

Ian: "Just the ladies."

Max: "Oh, so something did happen with you and Mel after I took those two away from the stage?" I said motioning to Andrew and Jessica.

Ian: With a smile on my face, "I-I don't know what you're talking about! Don't go spreading rumors Papa Max." Okay…

Andrew: I just stood there awkwardly as Max and the boys were talking, and Jessica and the girls were talking.

Jake: "Hey man, nice to meet you." I said walking up to the awkwardly standing guy who was just watching everyone as they talked.

Andrew: "What's your name again?"

Jake: "Jake. You're Andrew right?

Andrew: Pointing at Jessica, "Yeah, I'm her Uncle."

Jake: "Oh, okay. And if you don't mind, why are you guys back here?"

Andrew: "Ummm, I don't know exactly Mel and Ian came and got us and told us to come back here and that Loren wanted to talk to Jessica."

Jake: "Oh, okay."

Wrong idea…

Loren: "So Jessica, let me see those songs."

Nora: "You right songs?"

Kelly: "Can you sing?" I said walking up to the group of girls.

Jessica: "Uhhh, Loren I think you got the wrong idea."

Mel: "Why do you say that? You said that you sing and write."

Jessica: "I-I do, but it's like play around stuff. I can't really sing. And these are just written down words that rhyme." I said opening my notebook.

Loren: "Oh I see. That's okay. It's fun to just play around."

Kelly: "Sorry to interrupt again, but we have to get going. It was nice meeting you and your Uncle Jessica." I said as I left the group and joined Jake and Andrew and told them the same thing.

Nora and Mel: "Yeah it was!" They said and then walked over to their men.

Loren: "Give me your notebook again, Jessica."

Jessica: "Okay?"

Loren: I flipped to the same page where I gave her my autograph, "Here's my number you can text anytime."

Jessica: "Really?"

Loren: "Yeah, of course. You're a cool little girl. Text if you ever need anything, okay. Or if you just wanna talk. But promise me one thing."

Jessica: "Wow, thank you. And promise you what?"

Loren: "That you won't give my number out, because if you do then I have to get a new phone and won't be able to talk to you."

Jessica: "I promise!"

Limos?...

Loren: I gave Jessica a hug as Eddie and her Uncle walked up. Eddie gave Andrew a bro hug and they left. Eddie put his arm around me and told me that the limos were ready. "The limos?"

Eddie: "Yeah," I said smiling. "Moms and Pops are going on a date so they wanted their own limo. Jake and Kelly are going back to the hotel."

Loren: "What about Mel and Ian?"

Eddie: "Mel wants you to ride with her and Ian to ride with me. They are gonna go sightseeing, but first they wanna talk to us separately."

Loren: "About what?"

Eddie: Smiling, "I don't know, but I'm sure it's good news. Oh and after we talk to them, we are gonna stop and eat together and then they will get in one limo and we will get in the other."

Loren: "And then what?"

Eddie: "Then we are doing whatever you want."

Loren: "Well I'm glad you know how to make plans. I would have never been able to do that." I said laughing as everyone walked up to us.

Bye's and Love you's...

Max: As we all approached Loren and Eddie, I placed my arm on Eddie's shoulder and pulled him away.

Eddie: "What's up Pops?"

Max: Winking, "Just wanted to say see you tomorrow morning." I said and as we were hugging bye I slid the thing he asked me to get earlier into his jacket.

Eddie: "Thanks so much Pops." I said as we walked back over to the group.

Kelly: "Tony just texted and said his friend is here to pick Jake and I up."

Everyone (Nora, Max, Ian, Mel, Loren, Eddie): "Bye guys." They all said as everyone gave them hugs. Mel was the only one to not hug Kelly.

Eddie: A minute after Jake and Kelly left the next limo arrived. Moms announced that their limo was here and we all gave them hugs and said I love you. Ian and I didn't tell Nora that we loved her because we thought it was too soon and Mel and Loren didn't tell Pops they loved him.

Max and Nora: "Love you guys!" We said walking to out limo.

Ian: "I see our limo pulling up Ed."

Mel and Loren: Looked at each other and laughed, "Bye." They both said and started walking toward the limo.

Eddie: "Where do you think you are going?"

Mel: "What Rock Star, you think we are gonna stay here and wait alone? You guys can wait for the next limo.

Ian: "Point taken Love."

Eddie: "Fine with me, but don't we get proper goodbyes."

Ian: Mel sent a look at me like I told or something. I thought Eddie could keep a secret!

Eddie: "I mean come on Mel; don't you think I deserve a hug?" I said sarcastically.

Loren: "Excuse me?"

Eddie: "Oh, I haven't gotten to what I want from you yet." I said with a smirk on my face.

Mel: "Okay, you two, PG13 please!"

Loren: "Oh it will be." Mel walked over to Eddie and gave him a hug then moved over to Ian. Eddie started walking my way and I took off in Ian's direction. I wrapped my arms around Ian, "Bye Ian."

Ian: "Uh oh!" I said laughing as I hugged Valley Girl bye. "Bye." I said as Eddie came up and lightly pulled her off of me. Next thing I know, Mel was attached to me and it sent shivers down my back.

Eddie: I pulled Loren away from Ian and turned her around to face me. "I love you." I said and kissed her. She didn't pull away, which meant she forgave me. "I love you too, "she said as she got up on her tippy toes and whispered, "Ready to love you more though." I smiled as I thought about how tonight was going to go.

Mel: I hugged Ian and when Loren and Eddie pulled away from their hug we pulled away from ours. "Bye Ian."

Ian: "Bye Love."

Loren: Mel and I began walking to the limo and I yelled to Eddie, "Don't forget to think about what Tyler said and text him back!" He laughed and said okay. "Ian make sure he does it!"

Ian: "Okay Valley Girl!" Eddie punched my arm because he hates it when I call her that, but I figure one day if she gets to out of hand it will always remind her of where she came from. And with that the girls left in there limo and ours pulled around the corner. "This night is nowhere near over, Mate."

Eddie: "Yeah, trust me, I can wait for tomorrow to come. I don't want to leave!"

Ian: "I feel you Mate." I said as we got into to the limo.

I lied, you will find out the Three Surprises in the next chapter. Sorry, I just have so much to type till I get to that point so I figure the next chapter will be pretty long. Has anyone figured out what the Three Surprises were/are? Please review! And again if anyone can sing, please sing my song! It would be awesome!

M.L. #14 Jordan G.