The Night Continues

Hey guys! I realize it's been weeks since I've posted and I'm sorry for that. I'm going to let you know that most of my weekday posts are going to be late night posts like this one. Basketball season is over and Softball is starting. Thank you all for reading, and continuing to read. Also, please check out my other story, "Eddie and Loren: I'll Walk", thanks! Where we left off…

Eddie: The city bell rung and I thought Loren might realize what she was doing and stop, but she didn't. She continued to kiss my neck and then moved her hands down to grip the bottom of my shirt. Her lips made it to mine and were locked together until Loren started pulling my shirt up. "I'm so glad this place is private!" I thought as I helped Loren pull my shirt off. Once my shirt was off Loren's hands were the only thing keeping my body warm. Chills were being sent all over my body which was making me cold. Our lips locked together once again as my hands made their way to Loren's dress zipper. But before I could unzip her she was pushing me, slowly, down onto the blanket. I've let MY GIRL completely take over; although it was sexy, I wanted to be in control. I whispered in a sexy voice, "Do I have permission to unzip you know too?"

Loren: In my sexiest voice I whisper back, "Of course you do. Eddie, I am so ready to love you more." Then he began to unzip my dress. I don't know how he did it, but my dress was off in the matter of like 5 seconds. I can't believe I am really doing this! But I love him and that's all that matters. "Wait!"

Eddie: I instantly stopped; maybe Loren was having second thoughts. "Yes my love?"

Loren: "D-d-do you have, ya-ya know?"

Zoned…

Loren: "Eddie? Hello, Earth to Eddie!" I yelled for the fifth time. He had zoned out as I started kissing his neck. "Eddie, wake up!" I said as I slapped him on the cheek.

Eddie: "Huh, w-what?" I asked as Loren's light slap awakened me from my day dreams. I wanted this night to go so perfectly that I started dreaming about it and all the things that might happen; it just kept running through my head.

Loren: "You just zoned out on me."

Eddie: "I'm-I'm sorry, I was just thinking and…"

Loren: "Thinking about what?"

Eddie: "This night and…"

Loren: "What Ian was talking about?"

Eddie: "I was going to say how amazing it is going, but, uhhh, y-yeah that too."

Loren: "Well, if you want that to happen we better get back to the hotel. It's almost 1 am."

Eddie: "R-really?"

Loren: "Maybe."

Eddie: "Well, we are going to have to make a pit stop on the way back." I said as I thought of the day dream I just had.

Loren: "Alright, you text Tony and I'll clean up."

Eddie: "Okay babe." I said pulling out my phone.

First test…

Mel: As we arrived in Central Park, the area we were in was vacant. It was a little scary, but maybe this was a part Ian's plans. "So, what are we doing?"

Ian: "You are going to film…Central Park."

Mel: "How do I do that, there is no movement."

Ian: "It's just like filming anything else, you tell it what you want it to do. You get to choose what you want to happen. If you want people we can get it you people, whatever you want we can get it."

Mel: "Well, I want to shoot a love story."

Ian: "Good, I was hoping you would say that." I said pulling out my phone to text a friend to tell him the plan was in motion.

Mel: "Why were you hoping that?"

Ian: "Because you can shoot us."

Mel: "But that's going to be really hard."

Ian: "Good this is your first test."

Go back to sleep…

Max: While in the limo Nora fell asleep on my lap. She's had a very busy and dramatic day, I guess she wasn't feeling up to the date, but that's okay. As the limo pulled up to the hotel I moved Nora slowly off my lap. I got up and stepped out the door, then reached back in to carry Nora bridal style.

Nora: Drowsily, "M-Max, you don't have to do this."

Max: "Yes I do." I said with a smile on my face and turned and walked us into the hotel room. Nora had fallen back asleep in my arms, it was adorable. The hardest part was trying to open the suit door, but I managed. I laid Nora down on the bed and went to take a shower.

Nora: "M-Max where are you going?"

Max: "To take a shower sweetie, I'll be back. Just go back to sleep."

Nora: "Wake me up when you come back, I wanna talk."

Max: "Are you sure?"

Nora: "Yes, of course."

Max: I wasn't really counting on it. I don't want to wake her up, "she is so cute when she sleeps and we have all day tomorrow to talk," I thought as I got in the shower.

Thinking time…

Kelly: We've been in this hotel room, completely silent, for about an hour or so. Not just because we are getting work done, but because neither one of us know what to talk about, unless its work related. "J-Jake can we talk?"

Jake: "Tomorrow please Kel, I just need some peace and thinking time."

Kelly: "Okay, well just know that I'm here if you wanna talk at all, no matter what."

Jake: "I know Kel, I know." I said walking away to my room. I really needed to think about the women in my life. "Do I want to try and get Traci back? Do I want to start talking to Lia? What about Kelly? What about Steven?"

OCD…

Loren: About to fold the picnic blanket, "Babe, can you help me with this?"

Eddie: "What little miss domestic goddess can't fold a blanket?" I asked sarcastically.

Loren: "Hey now! I'll just ball…"

Eddie: "Don't you dare do that! You should know I have a small case of OCD."

Loren: "Yeah, I know. I figured it out while I was staying at your place; everything was so neat and organized."

Eddie: Grabbing one end of the blanket, "I can't help it."

Loren: "I think it's cute," I whispered as Eddie and I began folding the blanket. We were on the last fold and as I went to hand Eddie my end of the blanket our lips met.

Ever again…

Aid: "What did they say?" I asked as Phil walked into our room.

Phil: "They just kept asking questions and telling me how hard it was going to be. It's almost like my Mom didn't want me to go.

Aid: "I guess it's just because you are her oldest and she doesn't want you to go."

Phil: "You'd think she would be happy for me though. I could be out there stealing still."

Aid: Laying my head on Phil's lap as he sat down, "Let's just not talk about that, ever again!"

Phil: "Sounds good to me!" Picking up the remote, "What do you wanna watch?"

Aid: "You can choose."

Phil: "Law and Order?"

Aid: "Whatevs."

Hands down…

Tyler: Beep, went my phone. I pulled it out of my pocket. I wasn't doing much when my phone went off, just sitting here thinking about the night Eddie and I had our first big fight, trying to remember. Eddie had actually texted back! As I began to read the message memories started flowing. This is what I remember:

*Flashback*

Sitting at the movie premiere and bored as hell, Eddie and I got up and went to get some drinks for us and the ladies. The whole cast was sitting together and were all pretty bored. We had already seen the movie a few times before it was released and weren't really looking forward to watching it again, for the third day in a row. As we made it to the bar Eddie started ordering. He ordered so much! "Dude, are those for everyone? You know the ladies won't drink that!" "Yeah I know, I need something to get me through the night," he said laughing. "Come on man you don't need all that, it can't be that bad." "Man, I'm sitting with all of you guys and I'm single, struggling in life, and in music." "You drink way too much!" "Shut up Tyler! It's not even that big of a deal." He said angrily. "Man, it is. You're always drinking, and when you drink too much you start complaining constantly and it gets annoying. And how are you struggling in life? We just got done filming a movie!" "Tyler, man, you know what I mean. Not having a lady around hurts." "You need to chill with all these ladies!" And that's when everything blew up. Eddie swung at me, I swung back. We wrestled each other to the ground. But before all that we had been with his Mom having dinner. "Eddie, sweetie save some of that Rigatoni, you can have it for lunch tomorrow." She said sweetly. "Okay Mom." He replied. "Let's go!" Max said. Then we were in the car and on our way to the premiere. Eddie's M-Mom was so sweet. "I can't believe I was in that car!" I thought as memories of the women I used to call my Mom swamped my mind.

*End Flashback*

Finally, I shook the memories out of my mind and texted Eddie back. I replied, "I'm glad you've decided not to help her. Also glad you want to talk, but I guess you do deserve this. Man, look, I was in the car. I know that's so messed up! I used to call her my Mom too. I guess after the accident my life just went down from there. Hands down that was the worst mistake of my life! I hate myself for everything I became after that night, but I'm trying to change. I'm so God damn sorry for everything man! But look, I don't wanna talk about all this through text. We need to meet up in person and have a talk, a civil talk." That was hands down the hardest message I've ever sent. I could be signing my way into to prison with that message, but it didn't matter. I couldn't make things right with Eddie if I didn't tell him everything.

For what?...

Eddie: Loren and I had a passionate make out session until Tony arrived. I took Loren's hand and had the blanket in the other as we walked towards the limo. Loren had the picnic basket, which contained everything else, and the guitar around her back.

Tony: As they found their seats, "To the store near the hotel, right Mr. Dura- I mean, Eddie?"

Eddie: "Correct-a-mundo!" Loren looked at me all confused. "Lo, I told you we had to make a pit stop," I smiled.

Loren: "For what exactly?" I figured that I knew what Eddie needed to get, but wasn't too positive.

Eddie: "Oh, ya know just some romantic items," I smirked.

Loren: Leaning in for a kiss, "Sure."

Eddie: Pulling away from the kiss, "It's true." The rest of the ride was silent as Loren and I held hands and were lost in thought.

Loren: Pulling in to the parking lot, "Can you even go in there?"

Eddie: "It's 1 in the morning, hopefully nobody will recognize me."

Loren: Hopefully, "I whispered before Eddie gave me a kiss and opened the door. "I love you Eddie, but I'm really, really ready to love you more."

Eddie: "Yes I know. Oh and trust me I am totally more ready!" I laughed and then went into the store. I bought some chocolates and a few other things, if you know what I'm talking about. Luckily, no one recognized me! As I got back into the limo Loren started talking.

Loren: "So, what'd you get?" I asked curiously.

Really?...

Nora: Max had just hoped in bed right beside me, didn't even wake me up like I asked! "Uhhh, Max!"

Max: Jumping at the sound of Nora's voice, "Huh, what?"

Nora: "I told you to wake me up!"

Max: "W-well, I just f-figured we had all day tomorrow to talk."

Nora: "But, I wanna talk now."

Max: "Fine. What do you wanna talk about?" Laughing at Nora who sounded like a little kid.

Nora: "Don't laugh at me! And I wanna talk about us, and what you asked me on your terrace the other day."

Max: "What about it?"

Nora: "Do you really wanna move in with me?"

Max: "Of course I do!"

Nora: "But there's no space in my house for all your stuff."

Max: "Well, like you said I will have to get used to spending my weekends at department stores. We are just going to have to renovate the house."

Nora: "You really wanna do that? Can't we just hire someone?"

Max: "What are you scared to get a little dirty?"

Nora: Smiling, "Of course not! I just had no idea that you would actually want to do all that work."

Max: "I know this may shock you, but us former Rock Stars pick up new hobby's after we leave the business."

Nora: "I don't want you to leave the business; I want you to keep making songs."

Max: "Ya know, I have been thinking about writing music."

Nora: "Really?"

Max: "Yeah, ever since you came along."

Nora: Smiling and leaning in to kiss him, "Well, I'm so very honored."

Max: Pulling away, "You have no idea how glad I am to have you in my life."

Nora: "I am so glad to have you in my life too. You keep me sane and you love our kids."

Max: Smiling, "Well, now I'm tired. Let's talk in the morning. I'm gonna take you somewhere special."

Nora: "Where?"

Max: "It's a surprise," laughing at Nora's face when I wouldn't tell her, "G-goodnight Nora."

Nora: "Max?"

Max: "Yeah?"

Nora: "I-I love you."

Max: "I'm glad to hear that."

Nora: "Uhhh…" I can't believe he didn't say it back! Is this all just one big mistake! "Really?!" I thought.

Max: Looking into Nora's eyes, "I'm just kidding Love. I love you too!"

Nora: "Oh thank goodness!"

Max: "Of course I love you!" Snuggling up with Nora and kissing her on the cheek, "Goodnight."

Nora: "Goodnight."

I wanna know…

Eddie: "J-just some stuff, you will see later."

Loren: "Uhhh, fine! But now we only have one thing to talk about."

Eddie: "Why talk? We can just do *kiss* this."

Loren: "But I wanna know…"

Eddie: "Everything that happened when I was gone?"

Loren: "Yes that, but right now I just wanna know why you had a guitar with you?"

Eddie: "Oh, well see I was gonna do something for you, but then I got a text from Ian so now you have to wait."

Loren: "But, aren't we going to the hotel?"

Eddie: "Not yet." "Tony, Central Park, please."

Tony/ Driver: "What section?"

Eddie: "Where Ian and Melissa went to."

Tony/ Driver: "We will be there in less than 10 Mr. Duran."

Eddie: "Thanks Tony."

Loren: Pulling out our phones as we heard a buzzing, "Was that me or you?"

Eddie: "Uhhh…uhhh…uhhh…me." I said in between reading the text.

Loren: "Eddie, what's wrong?"

Just hang on…

Mel: At first it was really hard for me to film Ian, but with his help I got the hang of it. We had been filming for about 30 minutes and it was getting late. "I think I'm good for tonight."

Ian: "Wait Love, just a few more minutes. I have one more thing for you to film that will make this perfect."

Mel: "What is it?"

Ian: "Just hang on Love."

What this, what that…

Eddie: "He-he was there, in the car Lo!" I yelled as Loren pulled me into a tight embrace.

Loren: "W-what did he say?"

Eddie: "I-I can't read it Lo, it-it's too much."

Loren: "Come on Eddie, you have to be able to talk about this with me. How do you expect me to share all my feelings with you, if you don't do the same with me?"

Eddie: Silent for a moment, "Lo it's just that I can't believe the guy I used to call my best friend was in that car!"

Loren: "What happened between you two anyways?

Eddie: "A-a lot of stuff Lo, stuff that should have never happened. But Lo?"

Loren: "Yeah?" I asked sweetly and calmly.

Eddie: "I don't wanna even think about him right now, okay? I don't wanna ruin the night. I just wanna kiss MY GIRLFRIEND." I said moving in close to Lo and then kissing her.

Loren: Pulling away, "D-did you just use the G word again?"

Eddie: "Huh? What? I don't know what you are talking about."

Tony/ Driver: "We have arrived at your destination."

Eddie: "Come one we have to go film."

Loren: "Film what? Wait, seriously Eddie! Tell me what's going on!"

Eddie: "No way, you will just have to wait and see Miss Tate."

Loren: "Ughh," I moaned as Eddie got out of the Limo. He then reached for my hand and I took a hold.

Eddie: "I need my guitar," I said tapping the trunk so Tony would open it. I grabbed my guitar and held it in its case in one hand and wrapped my other arm around Loren's arm as we walked towards were Mel and Ian were filming.

What's going on?...

Mel: "Ian, tell me what it is!"

Ian: Pointing the other direction as I heard my surprise for Mel arriving, "Look over here."

Mel: "Ian there is nothing over here!" I said as I heard laughing and footsteps. "What's going on?" I asked as I turned around.

Girl: "I'm as lost as you are Mel."

Man: "Just turn your camera on and film this amazing ending to your love story."

Mel: "What are you doing here? How did you know I was filming a love story?"

Ian: "Because my Mate and I have had this planned since the restaurant when you ladies went to the bathroom."

Man: "See we told you, you didn't hear the whole conversation."

Mel: "Lo, remind me to never leave these two alone."

Loren: "I will try my best, but I have to remind myself."

Ian: "If you are done ladies…"

Man: "We would like to get this show on the road, it's getting late and I still have plans."

Loren: "Eddie what else could you have planned it's almost 2 in the morning?"

Eddie: "Just listen you two!" I said as I sat down on a bench and began strumming. Ian had pulled out his camera and was taking pictures, but not before he told Mel that this was the end of her film. As soon as he told Mel that I guess she seen a vision because she started placing me and Lo places and telling us what to do. She really is going to make a great director!

Again sorry it has been so long! I still love you guys! I'm hoping to post another chapter today! Please review and let me know what you think! Do you all like the story so far? Any suggestions of things I should add?

M.L. #14 Jordan G.