Ending the Night

Heyy so I stated working on this yesterday to make sure I could post today and honestly it was really hard. It's hard to make the story so interesting and keep all my readers happy this is why I ask that you review. Also please don't ask questions if you haven't read the story, I'm happy to answer but like it more when they are questions about the future of my story. Follow me on Twitter joddd14 and DM me any questions you may have. Another thing, a guest recently told me I should make writing a career and it really got me thinking. I would love to make writing my career and if anyone has anything I should write about or a way I can get into the business I would love some help! Thanks love ya guys!

Where we left off…

Loren: "Sorry for thinking that way, I was just worried." I said laying my head on his lap and looking up at him as we lay on the couch.

Eddie: Leaning toward her as she lay down I whisper in her ear, "Don't ever be worried about that," and then my lips meet hers and that little kiss takes us into a complete make out session in which I wind up picking Loren up in my arms bridal style and taking her to the bed with me.

Ian: …Mel was pissed and I didn't know exactly how to calm her down so I just stroked her hair back and touched her chin lightly and lifted it up so she was looking right in my eyes. "Love that took a lot out of you and you look exhausted. Why don't you go to sleep here and I'll be right on the couch if you need me?" She looked at me then at the bed and back at me. That's when she did the unthinkable.

Tyler: …And as I'm sitting here thinking this my phone goes off twice, two messages. I reach for my phone to see who has text me and I'm just shocked by the first message I read from a number I got a while back ago.

Nora: "Nope, sorry Max but my baby's gonna need a room to sleep in and I'm not getting rid of her room. I already was thinking of a plan."

Max: "And what' that?"

Nora: "Well, I have this huge backyard that we hardly use so…" I said and then my phone rang.

I can't believe…

Tyler: This text just kinda blows my mind, first I'm thinking who the hell is this, but then I realize who it is. It reads "Hey! So I saw you or your twin ;) going into a hotel today. What're you doing here and Chicago?!" How could she have seen me, I was with a group of people surrounded by paparazzi and their pictures aren't even posted yet. But honestly I forgot about her, Traci Madsen, and I don't even know how I could. She is the most beautiful and sweetest girl I've ever met, but Jake has her right? I had to think for a minute before I realized what I should say. "Hey! Wow, I didn't even know you were in Chicago. What're you doing back here? I heard your Dad wasn't doing well, is he okay? But to answer your question I'm hearing ACTUALLY about to start filming a movie with Osborne Silver, FOR REAL THIS TIME!" I can't believe that she would even text me, I was such a big flirt to her and yeah we had a good time at the bar and Aroma Café but damn I never imagined she would be the one to talk to me first.

Thinking a lot…

Eddie: As I lay Loren on the bed are lips never come apart. All I can think about is how amazing Loren is and how she is now the one who makes me lose my breath. I'm in love with this girl, but I still get those feelings like you do when you first have a crush on someone and everything you've ever wanted starts to happen. Maybe it's because I didn't get to see her for so long, but every feeling for her is just appearing every minute of every day and I love it! Even though all these things are running through my mind I can feel in my heart that this still isn't the perfect moment no matter how much I want to just make love with her, I know she's not 100% ready because I can still feel her body shake, even if it's just a little shake it's still there. And I know she loves me and I love her, but like we talked about earlier there is no reason this has to happen tonight. Finally I come back to life and slowly pull away leaving us both breathless and wanting more. I look into those big brown eyes of hers and smile so wide and she shows her amazing pretty smile and all I can think is I love you. Even though we haven't been together that long it feels like it's been years. "I love you so much." I say in a tone that suits the mood. I just had to let her know that. I can tell that she can tell that all I've been doing this entire time, well the whole night is thinking. She replies simply with an, "I love you too." I know she loves me so much, but if she would've said that then that would've got me talking and I can tell she's tired. We just know each other so well. I kiss her on the cheek as I cuddle up with her and she lays her head on my chest and I wrap my arms around her and lay my head back on the pillow and she pulls up the blankets just enough to cover her shoulders, but not completely there's this little space where I can still see her tank top straps. "Goodnight beautiful, sweet dreams," I say as she falls fast asleep. I'm tired but my mind is racing with more and more thoughts of how much I love my girlfriend. But finally as the sun begins to rise I fall asleep too.

Hoping you would…

Ian: I was hoping all night that Mel would do this and I'm so glad she did. It gives me even more reason to tell Eddie what I have to tell him. But anyways, Mel places her hands on my cheeks and just kisses me. My heart stopped, I guess because I wasn't expecting it, but it was the most breath taking kiss I've ever experienced.

Mel: After kissing Ian I can tell he has his hopes up, but not for sex. It seems like he just wants to be with me. And I don't want him to go. I whisper, "You don't have to go, I want you to stay right here and fall asleep with me…please?"

Ian: "I was hoping you would say that Love," I said to Mel as we cuddled up and were off to sleep.

30 minutes later (5:00)…

Loren: As the night ended perfectly I found myself waking up only a while after I had fallen asleep on Eddie's chest. Why is it that I can't sleep? I have no idea, it's not like I'm worried about anything but now that I say something I kinda miss my mom. Usually I would have to check in all night, but this time we are right down the hall from each other. I didn't want to get up and wake Eddie so I just lay here on his chest and think. Finally, I remember the one thing Eddie hadn't told me. I totally forgot about it all night and usually I don't forget things like that, but this night was just so amazing I had no reason to bring it up yet and of course it wasn't the right time. Lost in thought until I hear my phone buzz, it was a text reminder. I wonder who text me? I gently and slowly roll off of Eddie to get up and find my phone.

I know not much of a chapter, but you all will get a second chapter today in just a couple hours I promise. And if you can't tell, to bring in all characters a lot of things are at different times, but they will all tie together I promise! Please go back up and read what I've written and bold at the top on every story they are very important.

Anyways, what does Ian have to tell Eddie? Still who calls Nora and what do they want? What didn't Eddie tell Loren? And don't forget about Tyler, who's the second text from?

These will all be answered in just a couple of hours! Can't wait to see your alls reviews on this one and the next one!

M.L. #14 Jordan G.