Hello world, it's supermariogirl! Sorry for the delay, it's just that I GOT MY BRACES OFF and I wanted to take a small break from typing. I have to wear retainers at night when I'm sleeping, though, but who cares? I GOT MY BRACES OFF ON WEDNESDAY!.

BTW I'm uploading a video on Youtube with drawings of some of my characters, so if you want to see what they look like you can check that out. Well, on with the story! This one's in Mario's POV. This one is a little short though.

The Disclaimer Song:

I make stories for me and you,

but I own nothing so please don't sue! Dum!

Except:

Eve(Human)-Age 10(Main character for these stories..)

Marylin(Toad)-Age 30(A toad who takes care of Eve)

David(Toad)-Age 33(Marylin's boyfriend. Nickname: Dave.)

Kevin(Ghost)-Age 10(Eve's best friend. They hang out almost every day.)

Shadow(Ghost Cat)-Age 3(In normal years, not cat years)(Eve's favorite pet and loyal companion. She found the cat on the streets when she was about 7.)

Mrs. Manabuni(Human)-Age ? (One of Eve's teachers)

Mr. Toadlerara-(Toad)-Age ? (Another one of Eve's teachers.)

Angelina(Ghost)- Age 14(Kevin's teenage sister.)

Gracie(Ghost)-Age 5(Kevin's little sister.)

Madison(Human)-Age 10(Eve's rival. She's popular and snobby. She act's like she's 16 even thought she's only ten.)

Diana(Toad)-Age 10(Madison's best friend. Being the second most popular, she is just as snobby as her friend.)

Judy(Ghost)-Age 36(Kevin's mom)

Twippie(Gracie's teddy bear)

Stephen(Ghost)- Age 15(Angelina's boyfriend. He is only mentioned a few times in the stories.)

Emily(Human)- Age 9(Eve's new friend.)

John(Human)- Age ?(Emily's dad.)

Queen Luna(Human)- Age 31(Queen of Evershade Valley, Eve's mom)

King Simon(Human)- Age 32(King of Evershade Valley, Eve's dad)

Liz(?)- Age ?(Kevin's unseen cousin who is only mentioned once in the whole story.)

Jason(Boo)- Age ?(He's one of King Boo's most loyal minions... or is he?)

Teri(Human)- Age ?(A nurse who lives in the village.)

Carrie(Boo)- Age ?(Teri's assistant.)

Various Unnamed People


After getting ready, we start our journey to Treacherous Mansion. Polterpup and Shadow decided to come along with us, so they're here right now. Now, we're in the middle of a dark and creepy forest. We keep walking until we see a huge gaping hole in the ground.

"What do we do?" I ask.

"Hold on a second." Luigi replies. He runs towards a fallen tree. "We can use this as a bridge. Polterpup barks in agreement while Shadow meows along with him.

"Okay then." I simply say. I come over and help Luigi lift the tree and we put it where the hole is. We walk over the tree and get past the hole. While we walk, Luigi starts to talk.

"So, how's Peach doing?" he asks. Peach is my love, and Daisy is his love.

"Good." I say. "I took her to see a movie the other day."

"Really?" he asks. "What movie was it?"

"Chasing the Wind." I tell him. Chasing the Wind is basically a movie about this Toad couple who find out that nobody wants them together, kind of like Romeo and Juliet.

"Ah, nice." he says. This journey might just be unnerving, I don't know why, it just has that feeling, maybe because we're in the middle of a dark forest.


After a while of walking through this forest, a familiar looking boo appears.

"Mario! Luigi!" the boo says. He looks familiar.

"Bootler, is that you?" I say.

"Yes, it is." he says. "We need your help!"

"What is it?" Luigi asks.

"A bunch of King Boo's evil minions are raiding Bow's summer home in this forest, and they won't leave her alone either! They keep terrorizing everybody!" he says.

"What?!" Luigi exclaims. "That's terrible! We have to stop those minions! Come on, bro! Let's go!" Polterpup barks and Shadow meows.

"Let's stop them!" I say in agreement.

"Okay, follow me!" Bootler says.


After a few minutes, we arrive at the mansion.

"Okay, the minions have the area on lockdown right now, so I know a secret entrance. It's this way." Bootler says. He moves a large rock and reveals a tunnel.

"Okay, so where will this lead?" Luigi asks.

"Straight to Bow's room where she's being held hostage." he replies.

"Alright, got it." I say as Luigi, Polterpup, Shadow and I climb through the tunnel. I hope Bow's safe.


So, will the Mario Bros stop the minions? Will Bow be safe? Why are King Boo's minions raiding Bow's mansion? Find out next chapter!

I'm so tired right now, I was afraid I was gonna fall asleep while typing this.

Question of the Day: Isn't Pocky awesome?