Hello world, it's supermariogirl! Chapter one one is here. Nothing much to say again. Pretty much same old stuff. Also, I'm a little sad that summer's almost over. I don't want to go back to school. I want this summer to last forever. Well, here's chapter 11. This is in Eve's POV.

The Disclaimer Song:

I make stories for me and you,

but I own nothing so please don't sue! Dum!

Except:

Eve(Human)-Age 10(Main character for these stories..)

Marylin(Toad)-Age 30(A toad who takes care of Eve)

David(Toad)-Age 33(Marylin's boyfriend. Nickname: Dave.)

Kevin(Ghost)-Age 10(Eve's best friend. They hang out almost every day.)

Shadow(Ghost Cat)-Age 3(In normal years, not cat years)(Eve's favorite pet and loyal companion. She found the cat on the streets when she was about 7.)

Mrs. Manabuni(Human)-Age ? (One of Eve's teachers)

Mr. Toadlerara-(Toad)-Age ? (Another one of Eve's teachers.)

Angelina(Ghost)- Age 14(Kevin's teenage sister.)

Gracie(Ghost)-Age 5(Kevin's little sister.)

Madison(Human)-Age 10(Eve's rival. She's popular and snobby. She act's like she's 16 even thought she's only ten.)

Diana(Toad)-Age 10(Madison's best friend. Being the second most popular, she is just as snobby as her friend.)

Judy(Ghost)-Age 36(Kevin's mom)

Twippie(Gracie's teddy bear)

Stephen(Ghost)- Age 15(Angelina's boyfriend. He is only mentioned a few times in the stories.)

Emily(Human)- Age 9(Eve's new friend.)

John(Human)- Age ?(Emily's dad.)

Queen Luna(Human)- Age 31(Queen of Evershade Valley, Eve's mom)

King Simon(Human)- Age 32(King of Evershade Valley, Eve's dad)

Liz(?)- Age ?(Kevin's unseen cousin who is only mentioned once in the whole story.)

Jason(Boo)- Age ?(He's one of King Boo's most loyal minions... or is he?)

Teri(Human)- Age 22(A nurse who lives in the village.)

Carrie(Boo)- Age 15(Teri's assistant.)

Various Unnamed People


I wake up and I'm back at the small room I was in before I escaped. Just great. I'm back where I started. Ugh. I'm really starting to miss my parents and everyone I know. I don't even know what time it is. Seconds later, the door opens and King stinking Boo comes back.

"You really thought you could run, didn't you?" he says.

"I did, didn't I" I reply.

"Yeah, but you didn't succeed, did you." I glare at him hatefully. "I thought so."

"I'm looking forward to when Mario and Luigi defeat you." I tell him.

"You're a really optimistic, annoying brat, aren't you?" he says. "You think that you're gonna get out of here. How cute."

"You're really gonna regret saying that when you're inside a vacuum cleaner where you belong." I reply.

"Haha, just you wait. Once I defeat those plumbers, your kingdom is mine." he says.

"You will never, ever rule Evershade Valley." I tell him. "You will be defeated."

"We'll see that, the Mario Bros only have four hours to rescue you." he explains. Wait, what did he mean by "four hours to rescue me"?

"What happens in four hours?" I ask. Something tells me I shouldn't have asked that question.

"Oh, well you'll find out soon." he says. I'm really worried about what that meant. "Let's just say that these might be your last four hours." Oh no... he can't be serious... can he? He's joking, right? I don't think anyone would joke about something like this.

"You're not getting away with this!" I shout with tears in my eyes.

"Oh really? I remember a girl named Tabitha Garthway saying the exact same thing to me in 1945. I think you know what happened to her." Tabitha Garthway? That girl who led the Evershadian Revolution? The one who died to make Evershade Valley free from King Boo's tyranny? That same Tabitha Garthway?

"You wouldn't dare." I reply.

"Oh I can, and I will if I have to, you stupid girl." he says. "I'm already thinking about it."

"You are an absolute monster!" I cry.

"I've been called worse." he replies. "Oh and on more thing." he says. Then, he does something totally uncalled for. He takes a stick and hits me in the face with it. Oh my gosh, he did not just do that. It really hurts. I can't believe he just did that. "That is for trying to escape and being a brat." he says as her leaves. I sit down as tears flow down my face like a waterfall. Why is this happening? What did I do to deserve this? I shouldn't be here. I should be at home with Mom and Dad. I should be hanging out with Kevin, with Shadow on my lap, and listening to Taylor Swift and Kyary Pamyu Pamyu songs. I should be with the people I love, not here. I just sit and look out the window.


After a few minutes, I hear a familiar voice.

"Eve?" the voice says. I turn around and see Jason. "He found you?"

"Yeah, I didn't think he was going to. I was far from here." I tell him.

"I'm glad I'm betraying him. That jerk needs to be taught a lesson." he replies.

"You're right." I say. "He'll be sorry when he's trapped in a vacuum."

"Yeah," he says. "The Marios will be here in no time." I sure hope he's right.


Poor Eve! So, will the Bros rescue Eve in time? How will Jason betray King Boo? Find out next time! Also, this is probably the darkest chapter I have ever written. This isn't like the humor ones I did when I first started making stories. This story is a serious story. The next story I make won't be as depressing, I can assure you. Anyway's I'm tired, so I'm gonna go to bed now.

Question of the Day: Should I go back to making humor stories or should I keep making more serious stories?