Part 13 and this Story is almost over it is actually kinda sad that I'm almost done with this I practically will spend more time with on this than any other story (this is my only story other than the other one but that was a failed attempt because it was supposed to be done in one month but I was too lazy and it was left incomplete I may come back to it sometime in the future but for now I'm working on my main stories) in less if my second story is longer than this then this will be my shortest because I'm pretty sure all my other one might be longer or just might run out of ideas and get stuck with 2 main stories and 1 incomplete side story (which will be a horrible end for that one) but enough talking about the stories here is part 13 and let's see what will with Elsword's group and what will I criticize and Enjoy

The smoke of the Sniper shot cleared out and Chung and the rest of the group vanished the Shadow sniper chuckled at the sight of their disappearance "keep chuckling you dumbass" one shot to the mouth blow up the gem or whatever that is and killed the sniper with small explosion in its mouth "Raven are you all right over there"

"oh yeah I'm perfect just chillin' with one hand holding me up and the other hand holding up the girls so let me ask you WHAT DO YOU THINK"

"geez don't have be a dick about it" Chung helped Raven up from the ledge of the bridge (I did not specify that in the last chapter did I) helping up Aisha and then Rena saw a girl like figure try to grab her and she dodged it at the last second "guys we have company" they were surrounded there was weird dark purple creatures along with mermaids (the water spirits which obviously are floating mermaids) that floats on air the group gathered together and prepared for battle "Chung and I will charge in through you girls follow and take care of the enemies following"

"why not take them out now"

"I don't want any more of them piling up in one area let's just take them out as we move on we've got to get to our destination no matter what" they had no other choice but to follow Raven's plan they immediately agreed and prepared for a reckless charge "now let's go" charging in with his Sword first Raven pushed the ones he missed out of the way while Chung tackled them with his abnormally huge cannon and used his other hand to shoot in front of him (like how every anime breaks the laws of physics) while Rena and Aisha shoot arrows and magic at whatever enemies is behind them

Shock Wave Cutter

Bullet Blitz

Evoke

Cyclone (My least favorite technique to get hit by) Chung and the rest of the group were clearing out their path with their best techniques with big groups they dark shadow creatures were coming in large groups but that didn't stop them from clearing out a path eventually the whole area was a war zone

Meanwhile Elsword was still with the drones but they weren't in a conversation Elsword just sat there thinking hiding his eye's with his hands "Elsword are you okay…this isn't about Miss Eve's Code isn't it" Elsword removed his hands from his face and was about to speak but Penensio came into the room with a woman in blue Elsword's eyes widen by the sight of her "I would like to introduce you two to the Priestess of Hamel Sasha"

"Your that girl I bumped into not to long ago" Sasha stared at Elsword emotionless…again (some priestess she's not much of a conversationalist… how do people know God in this world…I'm just assuming that preaches at a church…I really hope I'm not making an ass out of myself) "you've met her already"

"yeah after Chung left the others I bumped into her she's not much of a talker is she" (no sh**)

"well she does speak a lot she's just not much of a conversationalist outside of the church"

"huh…well hey Sasha I'm Elsword Lord Knight of Ruben" Elsword held up his hand waiting for Sasha to Respond with a handshake "follow me Elsword I would like to talk you in private" She didn't shake his hand but she walked away expecting Elsword to follow "…okay sure" Elsword grumbled following Sasha "so while the two of them are out talking I would like to talk to Eve for a while"

"Miss Eve is out on the moment she went off to get Fresh air"

"alright then I'll get her while she's…" both Moby and Reby kept Penensio from leaving "it's better if you don't Miss Eve needs her privacy she hasn't been doing too well lately besides we have all of her information with us it's better to take from us" Penensio scratched his head in frustration "well even though we need Eve right now but we don't have time for this those Shadow creatures are growing bigger in groups and but taking information from you guys is better than nothing come on we need to talk with Denka" Moby and Reby followed Penensio feeling worried about Eve they kept following Penensio

Back to Elsword Sasha led Elsword to a random dark room Sasha lit up the candles (or turned on the lights I don't know Animes don't give a crap about what time these events took place I mean hell this could be taking place in the year 3000) there he saw a man covered in chains and locks "hey wait a minute I know you" the man kept playing with the cubes he had in his hand by throwing up in the air and catching them repeatedly "hello again Elsword"

"hey Glaive"

"it's been awhile since we last met you've been making my world a pain in the ass to live in with all the events going on in the past, present, and future"

"And how do we do that… never mind you wouldn't tell me anyway"

"I actually would've but if you say you don't want to know then I'll keep my mouth shut"

"wait then how?"

"no no you said it yourself you don't want to know"

"dammit"

Sasha breaks up the Completely irrelevant and pointless time wasting not funny argument by actually talking (wow she can talk go figure) "Are you two done we have important matters to talk about"

"oh right…but can you explain why Glaive is here"

"patience Elsword we'll get to that in a minute"

Elswords Sighs in impatience and leans on the wall, putting his hands in his pockets (he's not being childish he listens better like that it's a proven fact look it up) "as you may already know that Glitters have arrived in hamel and invaded the city and the Duke is missing (I never said that either in the previous chapters but okay Sasha start adding some stuff that's not even relevant to my story) and the Resiam is currently sinking along with your friends going there it's practically a shadow creatures nest at this rate"

"so is the whole point of me being here is just to make me worry about my team" (…basically) "no it's not that as you can see from one my space cubes in this world your friends are currently in a warzone with an army of Shadow creatures right now apparently under the orders of a certain someone who is controlling them"

"wait someone is controlling the demons"

"apparently someone who is the same species as them"

"who's controlling them"

"I would tell you but that would actually fracture the fabric of time and space"

"and why is that"

"do to the fact that time wants you guys to figure it out yourself"

"how if we have no leads on finding him"

"you'll figure it out shortly…it really takes no effort at all"

"uh huh…" trapped confusion Elsword, Sasha, and Glaive continue with their conversation (mostly Elsword and Glaive)

Meanwhile Chung and the others made it to the end of sunken resiam bashing open the giant door Chung and Raven quickly closed the door but the Dark Stinger pushed back keeping the door open with his heart exposed Rena shot an arrow into his heart Chung pulled out his silver shooter and shot 5 bullets into his heart and Raven shot a Cannon Blade into his heart finishing him off shutting it closed the group was alone in the room "well that was a pain in the ass" Raven rubbed his nasod arm "I think I used my nasod arm too much it's beginning to hurt again"

"nearly out of ammo for my pistols"

"low on magic"

"same here" (considering that both Rena and Aisha both use magic) thinking they're safe Raven get senses that their not alone "anyone else feel that…that presence that we're not alone" (do you guys not pay attention to the narrator HELLO I'M RIGHT HERE I'M NARRATING YOUR LIFE THATS EVERYONE LIFE LONG DREAM) "yeah I feel it too" closing the clip of his gun the Shadow Master shows himself "I'm guessing those things are being controlled by this guy (yes because that's what everyone would assume when they see a new enemy) getting their weapons ready for a fight Shadow mater surrounds them in explosive orbs "here we go again" pointing his gun to shadow master the rest of the group rushes towards him as soon as Chung pulls the trigger (the gun shot is like a trigger to anyone who wants to take down the boss first…don't lie you know you want to shove your fist in the computer screen and pin your partners to the wall and say "back the fu** up team I got this")

Meanwhile Eve was splashing water in her face (where I don't know….oh come on you know that was coming) she was breathing hard like she could barely breath she then began to feel her chest and it began to beat fast but there was no pain she saw herself in the reflection in the water and she saw an illusion of herself hiding her eyes in hair "so who is it that should die first" her reflection began to speak shocked by her reflection talking Eve checked her reflection again and her eyes were revealed showing her psycho murderous smile staring at her with her glowing blood eyes "maybe Raven you two seem close"

'that can't be…that can't be me' Eve was trying to shut out her illusion by closing her eyes but when she opened them her reflection's upper body was out of the water with the same face "or Rena she was the one who kissed Elsword" Eve stepped back and shut her eyes again and she felt a tap on her forehead and she opened her eyes again and saw herself again with same face…still…. Eve fell and she began to feel fear from herself "GET AWAY" she created a sword and slashed at her but the Blade went through her and she walked closer "Elsword maybe he is the one you love"

"no… no please you not real you haven't come yet"

"I can kill two birds with one stone just by killing Aisha getting Chung to come after you leaving him vulnerable and I can bring company for you in the afterlife after I devour their soul"

"YOU MONSTER" Eve's illusion grabbed her by the chin and her stare into her eyes to make sure she hears her words "Face it Eve there is no way you can get rid of me I came with the Exotic code which was hiding inside you since the day you were created so with that in mind do you know what that means… I've been with you ever since you were created and since the day you awoke the Exotic Code you've done nothing but made me stronger I know everything about you all of your weakness's, everything that makes you stronger, your biggest fears, and EVEN YOUR OWN PERSONAL INFORMATION" Eve freed her head from her hand and buried her face into the ground. Eve's illusion crouched down and began to whisper in her ear "you've brought this on yourself your anger and grudge against humans is what brought you to have me here and for that I thank you because if you have never chose to awaken your Exotic Code I would never have started growing from your emotions. And now I'm stronger than you in every way can't you see Eve your time is already up" She picked up Eve by her hair and she could see that Eve was crying in fear "times up Eve I'm in control now" the pain returned in Eve's chest and she felt something sharp inside her and it came out of her chest revealing a blade Eve's illusion was holding a sword that was stabbed through Eve's chest. "good-bye Eve" the illusion began to laugh and Eve was frozen stareing the blade stabbed through her chest blood dripping from the tip 'is…is this my blood' she placed her hand on the blade and saw her hand covered in her blood 'it…hurts…does that….does that mean I'm….dying….and…I never…told him…how I…' another tear fell from Eve's right eye she held up her hand as if she was reaching for Elsword know that she might never see him again "E…Elsword…I…" her last words were interrupted when her illusion pulled out the sword with a brute force and Eve couldn't speak she fell with her Eye's soulless and colorless and her forehead gem (or whatever that is….too soon) was colorless as well. she hit the ground with her last thought of the day she kissed Elsword she held up her hand up reaching again her lips moved but no words came out but it moved as if she had "Good-bye" her hand hit the ground and Eve was dead she closed her eyes and was on the ground soulless nothing but a corpes with only the last sound of her hearing is the sound of her illusion's laugh. Eve began to stand up and splash more water in her face she was panting heavily Eve's panting suddenly stops. Eve begins to smile creepily Eve sees herself in the reflection and her eyes were blood red and the gem was the same color "finally my time has come…maybe I can have a little fun with the time I have with her body" Starting off a chuckle Eve began to laugh psychotically and eventually the evil aura around her began to kill the plants around her

hang on I'm giving you guys a minute to scream no and go *looks at watch*… okay so now lets talk yes I made Eve get corrupted and have her die in her hallucination (which killed her) and now the Final battle is closing in you may have thought I was going to have Ran be the final fight well you were half right I originally was going to have Ran be the final fight but I decided to cut him out of the story (he might be in the next chapter but I'm still thinking about it) he will be mentioned but he might or might not be in it. So with that in mind Eve is now dead and now her all that remains is her dark side Elsword, Sasha, and Glaive are talking about who is behind the Shadow Creatures (who is obviously Ran) and Chung and the Group are currently fighting Shadow Master what might happen next find in the second to last chapter