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Ally's POV

Chiron examined the glowing bubble of light aloft of my head curiously.

"Might child of Athena you are. Raise a praise for our new additions to our camp. Tomorrow you two shall meet in the Armory, and select your weapon of choice. Training begins tomorrow, sharply at 9:00. The Roasting is dismissed, night everybody."

He walked out of the scene and into the Big House, were he and and another Camp Director resided.

I trotted back to the cabin me and Austin had shared perviously and gathered all of my possessions. I sprinted towards the cabin marked 'Athena'. It was decorated with drawings of helmets and shields, journals and plans, and most importantly the gracious loom. I sighed, and quickly prayed that my roommates wouldn't be roughhousing, nor fighting, rather polite towards one another or studying plans. I opened the mahogany door slightly and glanced at everyone. I spotted a girl, around my height, with blonde hair, and grey eyes. She was writing in her journal before she spotted me and hid her journal under her pillow. She came down from the bed and opened the door partially.

"Welcome, Ally right? My name is Annabeth, also known as the head of this cabin."

She motioned for me to come in and I did. I looked around, bunks were everywhere and rosy red drawers were neatly placed at the foot of the beds. Girls were sprawled out reading or writing. I was starting to realize the resemblance I had towards these individuals.

"Would you guys, welcome Ally, our new sister?" she said while snapping her fingers at the girls.

The girls looked up from their books, and greeted me, with hellos and smiles.

"Alright Ally, the available beds are the top bunk of mine, or the bottom bed of Annie's bunk."

I looked at both, undecided at where I was going to sleep more comfortably.

"If I were you, I'd pick the top bunk of mine. Annie has the habit of falling down in the night, and crawling on the bottom bunk."

"So unless you would like Annie's bear hugs. I'd recommend my top bunk" She while laughing madly.

My endeavor to not laugh, failed because before I knew it I was also giggling wildly.

Annabeth gave me a warm smile before returning towards her bed and continued to write in her journal.

I set my belonging down onto the dresser, conveniently placed at the foot of our bed. All I needed right now was my journal. I unzipped the front pocket of the lavender bag and took out my leather songbook. I easily climbed up to the top bunk and laid down onto the bed. I began scribbling in my journal.

Dear Diary,

I can't believe the incredible events that led me to be in this camp today. I am no longer in the comfort of my home, I'm in a camp, known as 'Camp Half-Blood', and I think I'm going to have a wonderful time here. Trish, who wasn't at school last week is also, a demigod. I got claimed by no other than the powerful goddess Athena, the beautiful goddess of cleverness, crafts and of-course war. I would die to meet to her, and I think all the other children in this cabin would as well. However the rules forbid against it. Though there's a though that won't leave my mind, one that has been lingering since they told me I was claimed by Athena. One that scars my memories every single time I think about and it is...

MY DAD HAS SEX WITH ATHENA?!

It's even more disturbing because Athena is still a virgin, and that is because I sprouted from her head, just like she did from her father Zeus. I think I'm starting to like this place.

Interesting day,

~Ally, Now daughter of Athena 10/6/13


"Ally, Ally, Ally" a group of girls chanted excitedly

"Nooo, go away" I said croaking

I checked the time on my watch, It was only 6:00 AM and yet these girls were awake?

"It's only 6:00" I said closely my eyes, and snuggled in with my pillow.

"Ally we may be demigods, but we still are normal girls. We like to get up early to talk about the scoop, the gossip, and what book's we've read lately." Annabeth murmured.

As soon as I heard book's and gossip, I sprang quickly out of my bed, and joined the group of girls already sitting down forming a circle.

"Alright girls, let's say our names so Ally gets to know us better" Annabeth said enthusiastically

"Let's start counter-clockwise"

"Aubrey. Evalina. Arielle. Hope. Iris. Winter. Alana. Ally. Annabeth."

"Alright get's get down onto the gossip!" Alana squealed.

"Oh my god, yesterday I totally saw Piper making a move on Percy." Arielle gushed

"WHAAAT?! Percy is MINE. Wait 'till I get my hands on her." Annabeth said clearly outraged.

"Annabeth, calm down. Cleverness runs throughout our thick blood. We can help you teach Piper a lesson. Right girls?" I said

"RIGHT" yelled the rest.

"Okay. Ally, I'm starting to see you as my new bestfriend." Annabeth said with a enormous grin plastered all over her face.

"Alright girls, what's the plan."

Third Person POV

And hushed whispers spread evenly throughout the room while the girls, tossed and turned around ideas. It was Chiron who had to remind Ally that training was at 9. It was promptly about 8:00 when the girls had made their master plan, and as children of Athena, the spawns of war. No-one would want to get what these children would come up with. Piper flirting and twirling her hair at Percy, was war. And children of Athena, have never lost war.

The girls swiftly began to walk towards the Dining Pavilion, with huge grins all over their face, arms in arms, the children of Athena were ready to take the plan in action, and poor old Piper, had no idea what was coming her way.


Again other cliffy c:! Sorry this chapter wasn't as long as the one was, I promise Chapter 3 is going to be packed with action and long. Comment below what you think the revenge plan against Piper is going to be! Please comment/review, it really means a lot to me and hope you found this chapter not too boring c:.