Hey everybody who reads this story! So somebody asked me a question about how fast I write my stories and how I update them daily and do I give no thought to my stories?
Well, the answer to that is yes, I do give thought into my stories. My stories are pre-written and pre-planned before I write, such an example is Humphrey's Parents. I have written Both Humphrey's Parents and Peril around late 2011 and mid 2012 and officially published them in early 2013. I was previously thinking about publishing them on Fanpop, until I had heard about this website. I then wrote Humphrey's Parents and Peril during my time as a member on Fanpop and during my time as a member for Fanfiction, same with Red in The Wilderness. Red In The Wilderness was planned during Humphrey's parents and during late 2012. As well as Brother's, this story was actually planned in late 2011, but was dropped due to Portuguese not a very recognizable language on this website. The Original Brother's was supposed to take place in Sao Paulo, Brazil with a whole different storyline, Character names, setting and language. But later was brought back up to my view and I re-wrote it during the time I toke writing Humphrey's Parents and Red In The Wilderness. So overall the answer to this viewer's question is, yes I do give thought into my stories and I write them quickly because I have a lot of free time on my hands and the reason they are considered written poorly at times is because my English level is quite low, so it is a burden I must carry until I reach my full potential in the English language. So there is your answer, but other than that. Here is Chapter 11!
Enjoy! :D
Black Screen: Chapter 11 Assassination #2
AYDENS POV
"At least we don't live in a shack anymore…" I say to Lilly softly
"Yeah…" She says putting her arms on the table drinking a glass of wine
"Aren't you underage missy?" I say chuckling
"Aren't you too?" Lilly says giggling drinking some more
"I look outside or sliding door and the sky is grey raining hard, with winds strong making the trees sway back and forth and it is also very cold and it is 7:53 PM"
"I then look at Chop in his dog house chewing on his Tennis ball"
"Come on, let's go get warm and watch TV…" Lilly says smiling drinking the rest of her wine placing the wine glass in the sink walking towards the living room
"Alright then…" I say smiling
Black Screen: Tomorrow
AYDENS POV
"I wake up on the couch with Lilly and the TV still on and I look at the clock next to me and it reads 9:21 AM"
"I start getting up and I see a story on the News about Detective Steve Haines and Gerald Shepherd"
"A story this morning involves MI5 Detectives Steve Haines and Gerald Shepherd providing Lethal Aid to the Assad Regime, MI6 Agent, Henry Mercer. The provider of the photo's proving that the two are involved in this scandal… "The news reporter says
"Won't be much a scandal anymore after today…" I say getting up turning off the TV heading upstairs to get dressed"
"I look down at Lilly who is sleeping cutely rolled up in a ball keeping war"
"I smile and I rub her grey hair kissing her cheek"
"I then hear my phone go off"
"Hello…" I say answering it seeing that it is Detective Haines opening the door to me and Humphrey's room and I look over at Kate and Humphrey sleeping in each other's arms
"Listen, we have been following Henry since 7, and we think he is starting to catch on to us. Get that rifle and get to the vantage point…We are planning to have you take him out earlier than expected…" He says as I start walking towards my closet opening the door
"Right now?" I ask putting on my black dress pants and grabbing my
"Yeah right now. Hurry up..." He says hanging up
"I then put on my black dress shirt with a black suit"
"I then reach in the closet for my Grey Trench coat"
"I start putting it on and I start running downstairs towards the living room grabbing the rifle off of the table"
"I write a quick note to Lilly and I leave it on the table"
"I walk out the door"
"I then walk towards my car and I throw the rifle in back of the car"
"I then walk over to the driver seat and I open the door and I put the keys in the ignition"
"I start driving to the vantage point of the address given to me"
Black Screen: The Mercer Home
HAINES POV
"I reach in the back and I grab my Walther P99 9mm handgun"
"What is that for?" Shepherd asks as I put it in my pocket
"You never know…" I say
"Why are we parked out in the open like this?" Shepherd asks
"I got the windows tinted for a reason, Shep…" Haines says looking out the window spying on Henry Mercer who is sitting on his table in the kitchen drinking Coffee
"I then see Ayden's car pulling up at the mountain in back of us"
"He's here, get clear of the house…" Shepherd says as I drive off
AYDENS POV
"I get out of my car and I look at the view of Manchester on the mountain I stand on"
"Beautiful…" I say smiling
"I then hear a roaring of a plane and I look up and I see a huge Boeing 707 plane fly over heading towards the Airport with two F/A-18 Superhornets flying on both sides of the plane escorting it. Flushing out any sound made"
"Whoever is in that plane must be important…" I say grabbing the suitcase opening it
"I start putting the rifle together and I lay on the floor and I take aim through the Ballistic 12x Scope"
"I zoom in on Mercer's head while he drinks his coffee"
"I then hear my phone go off"
"Hello?" I say answering the phone to Haines deploying the Bipod making the rifle more steady
"Remember, don't miss the shot. Line up the shot and get a nice clean shot on his head and get out of there and meet me at the Café and I will dispose of the rifle…" Haines says
"Alright…" I say
"Take a deep breath… And squeeze…" He says
"I've done plenty of Assassinations for the English Syndicate… I know what I'm doing…" I say lining up the shot
"Good…" he says hanging up
"I take a deep breath"
"I then see Winston, Lilly and Kate's Father enter the kitchen"
"What the hell?" I ask myself holding the shot
"My phone then goes off"
"I answer it and I see it is Shepherd calling"
"Why the fuck is my girlfriends Father there?!" I ask
"Who?" Shepherd asks
"Winston Richard Mills… Why is he here?" I ask
"I hear them typing on a laptop in their car"
"Winston Richard Mills, an owner of a Private Military/Security Corporation known as Sector 7 Security…" Shepherd says before I interrupt
"Yeah! I know that! Why is he here?!" I shout
"I aim in the scope and I see him talking with Mercer drinking Coffee"
"Uhhh…" Shepherd says typing
"Sector 7 Security is protecting him today… From people like you…" Shepherd says
"So, he is not a target. But I would advise waiting for him to leave… That mountain you are on, they will most likely see you if looking towards you're general direction…" Shepherd says
"Alright…" I say aiming at Winston's head
"Hey look Mr. Mills! You are on my crosshairs…" I say laughing
"Stop playing kid, before you actually shoot him…"Shepherd says
"I then aim over at Mercer"
"If only I could hear what they are talking about…" I say
"Next time we will fit your scope with a recording system…" Shepherd says as I put him on speaker and I put my phone next to me
"I then see Winston leaving towards the hallway in the Mercer home"
"Do it now kid!" Shepherd says as I fire the Rifle hitting Mercer in the temple making him fall back on his chair
"GET OUT OF THERE!" Shepherd shouts
"I hop in my car throwing the rifle in there as well as the suitcase"
"GO TO THE CAFÉ!" Shepherd shouts hanging up as I run towards the driver seat
"I put the keys in the ignition and I drive off"
Black Screen: The Café
AYDENS POV
"I drive into the parking lot and I park my car next to Haines and Shepherds car"
"I get out as fast as I can"
"I open the back door and I grab the rifle and I throw it inside their car"
"They slam the door and walk over to me"
"Here…"Haines say handing me 12,000 Pounds
"Give your Mother a nice funeral…And we will talk more at that funeral…" Haines says getting in the driver seat and Shepherd getting in the passenger seat
"I walk over to the driver seat of my car"
"I start the car up again and I start driving home"
Black Screen: The Freeman Home
HUMPHREYS POV
"I lay on the bed with Kate watching SpongeBob Squarepants on TV with Kate in me and Ayden's room"
"Firmly grasp it!" The character Patrick Star shouts impaling Squidward's hand with the Jellyfishing net
"I let out a few chuckles"
"What's funny babe?" She asks me smiling
"Firmly grasp it…Think about it…"I say
"Shut up!" Kate says giggling uncontrollably at the sexual joke I pointed out
"I laugh as she gets on top of me"
"I think you are crazy…" She says poking my nose
"I think you are crazier than I am…" I say laughing
"She then kisses me passionately"
"I start rubbing her hips as she kisses me"
"She then removes everything on top of her"
"Kate, do you seriously want to do this right now?" I ask her
"Yes…" She says
"Alright…" I say
"She then takes off my shirt"
"Ahem…" Lilly says giggling
"Oh shit!" Kate shouts blushing putting everything back on
"I then put my shirt back on blushing"
"Can you knock please?!" Kate shouts
"Sorry…" Lilly says giggling holding a plastic bag
"I brought us some food…" Lilly says
"Thank you… I'm real hungry and I am too lazy to make something to eat right now…" I say laughing
"Get your lazy ass up and make something!" Kate and Lilly say laughing
"Prettyboys with SWAG don't need to make anything for themselves…" I say laughing
"Shut up Humphrey…" Kate says laughing
"I then hear the front door open and I hear someone running up the stairs"
"I then see Ayden walking in the room"
"Ayden!" Lilly says hugging him
"Hey babe!" Ayden says kissing Lilly holding her sides
"I then see Ayden pull out a stack of Pounds"
"This is enough to give Mom a proper funeral, Brother…" Ayden says smiling
"How much is it?" Kate asks
"12,000 Pounds…" Ayden says
"Plus the 4,000 that Valencia gave me…" Ayden says
"That's great!" Lilly and Kate say at the same time
"Yeah…" Ayden and I say softly
"I then hear someone knocking at the front door"
AYDENS POV
"I walk downstairs towards the door"
"I unlock the door and open it and I see MI5 Agent Timothy Evans"
"Ayden…" He says
"What is it?" I ask
(End Of Chapter 11)
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