Well, no suggestions for an actual chapter, and one's due. So have this! Keep the reviews coming, constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
This chapter dedicated to TailGatomonX3 for submitting the first OC! Yeah!
Ashfur was pacing around the WindClan camp along with Breezepelt, who looked like he wanted to claw the tom's ears off. Ashfur showed no difference, just a nervous expression outside the nursery. Every once in a while, both cats turned to the medicine cat's den to the nursery. This went on for a while.
Suddenly, a piercing shriek sounded from the nursery. Breezepelt pricked his ears and Ashfur twitched his tail-tip. Then both cats bounded to the medicine cat den.
Kestrelflight was playing on a doohickey he got from the Twolegs at the horseplace. "Kestrelflight!" Ashfur and Breezepelt yelled at the same time. "Nightcloud's kitting!" Kestrelflight didn't look up. "Hold on a second," she mewed, eyes glued to her device. "I'm just trading with Willowshine." Breezepelt grabbed the medicine cat and dragged he to the nursery. Seeing the black tom's sharp, unsheathed claws, Willowshine reluctantly padded into the nursery.
Breezepelt glanced back at Ashfur, he was playing Kestrelflight's game. "Aw yeah! I got a charizard!" Came the kitlike squeal from the den. Then Breezepelt shuddered. Hawkfrost had randomly revived and teleported to WindClan again. "Big deal!" The RiverClan warrior whined. "I have twenty-two and I have a Diancie, Hoopa and Volcanion! So there!" Breezepelt rolled his eyes and padded away to find a stick.
Jayfeather stumbled into the moonpool, back from his journey. He had found the Hunger Games and Katniss had given him 10,000 lives. Breezepelt saw him and decided to take his stick, but Jayfeather woke up. He was immediately aware of his situation.
"I'm not giving you my stick."
"Oh really?"
"Try me."
And that's how Jayfeather lost a life.
Breezepelt raced to the nursery, stick in his mouth. As he walked inside, he saw Nightcloud with two kits. A gray-and-black kit, and another with brown fur and a tattoo. "The gray one shall be Shapekit," Ashfur, who had stumbled in, decided. "And the brown one Lolkit." Finished Nightcloud. After a while, both kits were awake.
"Hi, lol! Can I have some lol candy?"
"Can I have some triangle candy?"
"Lol, we both want candy!"
"Yeah, I know! Trapezoids are awesome, aren't they?"
Nightcloud facepawed. Then Ashfur slinked up to her.
"Hey baby, you and me tonight?"
"No."
"Phooey."
Nothing much new except that OCs and chapters are still open for ideas! As always, please review. And for those of you wondering, my brother Baccakit has changed his name to Neptune And Poseidon. So check him out too!
