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But there wasn't anyone!

'At last you can hear me!', a mysterious female voice said.

"Where and who are you?"

'Don't you know that? Please, come to me.'

Suddenly she was in a strange room. Everywhere at the walls were mirrors in which she could see different situation with her holding different things like swords, clocks, chairs, books, axes, pencils, bows and arrows, and lots more. What was this?

'At last did you come!'

"But where am I? And who and where are you?", she looked around: "And, I have to go back! I'm in the middle of a fight!"

'Don't worry. While you're here, I can stop the time. This is your inner world and I'm your Zanpakuto Mirāhenkan. I called you, because you don't have a chance against that Gillian alone. We have to work together!'

"But what should I do?"

'Sorry, I can't say that, you have to find it out by yourself.'

With these words the voice fell silent. What should she do? It had to do with the mirrors, that was clear.

She went to one and touched it, but her hand went to the glass!

Maybe her job was to choose a mirror, but which one?

She looked around, which thing would help her with her fight. In one mirror she saw herself with a scythe.

She didn't know why, but she got gravitated by this mirror, so she went into it.

Suddenly her reflection and the scythe blured and transformed into a person, who wore a dress which reached the floor with spaghetti straps which consisted of thousands of silver specular parts, which looked like little mirrors. Also she had a kind of mask, made of those silver parts, too, you could only see the eyes. In every part of the dress and the masks reflected all kind of different things.

The color of the left eye was a light but bright blue, the other one was dark brown. She hat long black hair, which reached her hips and she hat very light-colored skin.

"Good choice. Come to me."

As Kohana went to her, she transformed into a scythe and Kohana could take her into her hand, when she touched it, she suddenly stood in the room with the Hollow with her sword in her hand.

"Pave me the way to victory, Mirāhenkan" with these words her sword changed the shape into a scythe now suddenly the handle of the scythe grew longer, so that she could cut the Hollow deep.

It careened but didn't disappear.

Then now the Hollow shot a Cero again!

"Change!", Kohana said and when the fume was disappeared again one could see only something like a hill.

"Change!", Kohana said muted, the hill dissolved and transformed back into a scythe.

Kohana made the next hit and stroke exactly, so she cut through the Hollow and it disappeared.

She stayed a short time, then she went to the ground.

'You can hear me, can you?' she thought

'Yes, I can.', the voice in her head answered.

'Thank you, without your help I wouldn't have had a chance against that thing!'

'We're one team! We have to work together, so it's logic, that I help you.'

'Yes, that's clear, but many Zanpakutos don't think so, they only come then, when they think that their master is strong enough.'

'I'm sure, that you're strong enough to control your Shikai'

'Really? Thank you'

'Yes, you're welcome. But don't you think the captains will wonder, why your standing and staring in the air?'

'Oh, you're right, I should go to them.'

She went through the room and then through the corridor till she came to the door.

She heard the captains discussing again. After she opened it, she went out and kneeled down.

"Since when do you have you're Shikai? Your teacher didn't said anything about that!"

"I just got it"

"Ok. What is the ability of your Zanpakuto?"

"She can change her shape and function in nearly everything. The only things, which she can't change in, are living things, and I mustn't spend the things, she has changed in."

"That's a very special Shikai, I'm really surprised.", captain Ukitake answered.

"Thank you."

"What do you think of coming in squad thirteen? Our seventh seat would be free at the moment. You can think about it, if you want. Please tell me your answer tomorrow."

"I think, I don't have to think about that! Of course I will accept this offer!", Kohana answered with a big smile on her face.

"That's good. Come to my office tomorrow, then we will do the bureaucratic stuff and I can show you your room."

"Yes!"

"You can go now."

Still with a smile, Kohana stood up and went away.