Spiral

XI: Potion Commotion

A/N: Yes. I haven't updated in like a month, but I'm here now. I know I left the story was left off on a cliffhanger and I sure hope you aren't dissapointed by what really happened. Think back to chapter VII. That's the potion.

Important Annoucement: When this story reaches 65 reviews, I will post a story with my epically awesome poll stories. I will post the first chapter of the story. Then you guys vote which one I work on after Spiral. I work on the second on after Currently Untitled etc. Review!

Random Complaints: I don't like my Texas History class at all. One, my teacher's monotone. Two, we haven't done much in the long time we've been at school. Three, I'm one of those goody-two-shoes know it alls and are annoyed by those who act like idiots and flaunt themselves around, and I'm stuck between two of them. Four, it's after athletics so I'm tired. It's also the last period of the day and I wanna go home!

Review Responses-

Guest- If you read my story Dream Called Reality, you'd know I love cliffhangers. I had two and a mystery ending. 0.o. BTW: It's good to know my story is addicting. I work so hard on it.

dcp1992- Thank you.

Ladida- Ahh. A sword, yes.

Last time on Spiral...

"Stupid Neroz trying to steal my woman. Stupid stomach grumbling when I almost kissed her. Stupid fear of rejection. Stupid..." Gohan trailed off.

"Ah!" He heard Videl scream from behind a door.

"I've got you down and I've got a sword on you." He Neroz say, "What are you going to do now?"

"Help! Help me!" Videl calls out.

Gohan dashes towards Videl and Neroz and opens the door.

The two look toward Gohan. He did have a sword on her and she was on the ground, helpless.

But they were in fencing uniforms.

"You guys were fencing the whole time?" Gohan asked.

"Yeah?" Videl said, "What did you think we were doing?"

"Uh...just wondering..." Gohan lied.

The green-eyed Satan girl busted in to the room and screamed, "Videl! You have to come to this spa! It's so awesome!"

"But I don't like spas." Videl whines.

"Don't care." Lizaria says. She quickly grabbed her twins arms and begins to drag her away.

"Let-Let go of me!" Videl screamed, "Help?! Gohan-kun?"

"Sorry," Gohan apologies, "I don't wanna get in between you and your sister. Besides, I think you could use a spa day."

"I hate you." Videl grumbles.

"Girls only say 'I hate you' to the guys that they love." Lizaria says.

"Shut up, Liz."

Dear Journal,

The identity of the Chosen One has been revealed. Her name is Satan Videl. I hope she can defeat him. I hate it here. This area they call a room is colder than Refrige's heart. No I'm serious. His heart is 0 degress. I want to meet my father. Last word we heard from him, he was on Earth. He doesn't even know I exist but, I hope he will enjoy my company. What's his name again? Raditz...

Wondering,
Atrica

Dear Journal,

I am being sent to Earth to pose as Satan Videl. She can only be hurt by the one she loves and that is a half-Saiyan named Gohan. Maybe he knows about my father. I want to meet him badly. But I have to dress up as this girl, wearing a bathing suit to distract him. I wonder if he's a pervert. I have to put blueberry juice on him and eliminate him and with my newfound Saiyan powers, piece of cake.

Written by,
Atrica

Dear Journal,

Okay, father is dead. He was killed by Uncle Goku. Don't worry, my friend, he is good. My father, on the other hand, was not good. Tried to kill Uncle Goku he did. I was rescued by Videl's little sister, Naomi. Naomi is a sweet little girl with a big heart. Like Auntie Chi. I am currently living with Auntie Chi & Uncle Goku. They are very kind people. My cousins and a friend are in space with Videl. I hope I get to meet them soon.

Love,
Atrica

P.S. When was the last time I wrote Love, Atrica. It wasn't in the last six months. I am happy.

At the spa...

"...and that's why I-"

"I'm so hungry!" Videl whines interrupting her twin, "I can't wait to be a Human-Spiral instead of a Human-Saiyan."

"Yeah," Lizaria smiles, "It's a good thing you've only kissed Gohan once."

Videl's face falls.

"You did only kiss him once, right?" Lizaria asked.

"What happens if I kissed him more than once?"

"Vi, everytime you kiss him, it's another ten years of Saiyan-ness. You didn't answer my question. You did only kiss him once, right?" Lizaria asked again.

"I...k..."

"What?"

"Ikissedhimthreetimes."

"Sorry, Vi, didn't catch that."

"I kissed him three times!" Videl all but shouted.

"I hope you realize that you'll be a Saiyan until you're like, forty-eight."

"Yes, Liz. I am not stupid."

Neroz comes in and gives the girls drinks. "Two lovely drinks for two lovely ladies."

"Thank you." Both girls reply.

Videl looks over to where she saw Gohan hiding behind a large bonsai. She took a sip of her drink and then she drops her cup. She slowly walks over to Gohan.

'Dangit! She sees me. Her hair is...pink? That's in love, isn't it?'

"Gohan-kun." Videl began, "Stop hiding. No offense, but it's not your strong suit."

"Yeah, I'm not so good at-" He was cut off by her lips lightly but passionately kissing his.

"And now we're at fifty-eight. Neroz?" Lizaria said watching her sister make out with Gohan, "What did you do to my sister?"

"There is a slight chance that I may have accidently given her a love potion..."

Lizaria smacks Neroz upside his head, "A slight chance? She's making out like there's not tommorow! Uh, I have to leave before thay start French kissing."

Lizaria and Neroz exit the room.

Videl breaks apart and asks, "Would you like to get dinner with me tonight?"

"L-Like a date?"

"Of course, silly."

"How about...seven?"

Videl smiles, "That sounds great." She stands up on her tiptoes and kisses his cheek. She then waves and runs off.

"I've got a date...with Videl Satan. The prettiest, most amazing girl in the universe. Woohoo!"

Ten o'clockish...

Gohan flops on his bed. Tonight had been perfect. He combined three of his favorite things. Videl, kissing Videl, and food! Nothing could've made him happier. Did we mention Videl was his girlfriend now? Yes, Gohan was as giddy as Goten on Christmas morning or his dad at the Christmas feast. Even a camel on Wednesday. You know, hump day. Haven't you seen the commercial?

"Hey, Gohan." Trunks says as he and his partner in crime, I mean, partner in cuteness enter.

"Hi." Gohan said still speaking with a dreamy tone in his voice.

Goten goes and looks at his brother's face, "I see red kissy marks on you face. Did you and Videl do kissy kissy stuff?"

"Oh, yeah." He replies.

"Goten, Gohan and Videl went on date. Is Videl your girlfriend yet?"

"Yeah." Gohan nods.

Trunks frowns, "Great we can't tease you about it anymore."

A gentle knock is heard on the door. "Can I come in? It's me Lizaria."

"Come in." The three Demi-Saiyan call simotaniously.

"Goten, Trunks, I need to speak to Gohan." Lizaria says.

"Okay." The chibis say.

"Alone." She finishes.

"Fine." They grumble and they exit the room.

Lizaria sat on Gohan's bed.

"The date with Videl you had tonight." Lizaria began.

"Yeah, what about it?" He asked.

"Did Videl seem different in the way she acted."

Gohan thinks for a second before responding, "She acted a little more girly than usual I guess. Wait, what are you saying did I go out with her clone? Did I go out with you?"

Lizaria shakes her head, "No. You went out with the real Videl, just the real Videl that drank a love potion Neroz gave to her earlier. A-At the spa while you were hiding behing the bonsai."

"She...she was on a love potion? She doesn't like me?" Gohan asked.

"No. She does like you, Gohan. She just can't tell you." Lizaria explains.

"Why?" Gohan asked.

"The same reason you can't tell her." Lizaria explains, "She thinks you are out of her league and she's afraid of rejection."

"She's scared of rejection...? ...From me?"

"Yes." She said. She handed him a small bottle and continued, "She cares about you alot. Give her this tommorow morning and ask her on a date in the afternoon. You better be good to my sister. Do not hurt her phisically or emotionally. I don't care if I have to kiss Goten, Trunks, or Vegeta and then train for years and years just to knock you out once, but you will be good to my blue-eyed mirror. Do you understand, Gohan?"

"Yes, ma'am."

"Good. I have to go. See you tommorow. By the way, How many times did she kiss you on the lips on this date?"

"Four? I think..."

"That brings her to ninety-eight."

"What?"

"Ask her about it tomorrow."

The next morning...

"Gohan. You're so warm. I wish you could hold me forever."

Gohan frowns, "I wish I could hold you forever." He slowly takes the small bottle and hands it to her, "Drink it?"

"Why?"

"Videl, you...you drank a love potion... This'll snap you out of it."

"I don't wanna be snapped out of it. I wanna be with you forever, Gohan. Don't you wanna spend forever with me?" She asked, a tear threating to fall.

"I do, Videl. I wanna be with you forever and ever. But, I don't want you to love me just because of a potion. I hope you understand." A tear fell down his cheek.

"Okay. I'll do it for you. I'd do anything for you" She said she took a sip, "Oh my DENDE!"

"What's wrong, Videl?" Gohan asked.

"I don't have a splitting headache. It's more like a chasm." She whines, "I feel like I've been hit by a truck, ran over by it, it backed over me, ran over me again, and then I set off dynamite in a dynamite factory. And BOOM! What did I drink?"

"An antidote. Don't you remember?"

"The last thing I remember was me and Liz at the spa, I saw you behind a tree and..."

"...You drank a love potion." He sighed, "I've gotta go."

'Who did I fall in love with...?'

Later...

She found him in the greenhouse.

Gohan was sitting on the bench, sighing until Videl came up.

Videl sits down beside him.

"What?" He asked.

"I just wanna talk to you. I've missed you lately."

"I missed you to."

"Then say something to me."

'Okay, Gohan...It's now or never...or later...no! Now."

"Videl? Would-would you like to do a thing? At a time? At a place?" He asks loudly. He speaks loudly when he's nervous.

"A thing at a time at a place, huh?" She asks, "Son Gohan, are you asking me on a date?"

"Y-y-yes. Will you go on a date with me?"

"Yes. Yes! YES!" She screamed, "I mean...yes, yes I will."

Ring Ring.

"Videl? Do you get an intergalactic phone signal? I need your phone plan." He says.

"No. It's that device Goten had; Bulma's calling. Hello?"

"Videl! You have to get off Larips as soon as you can!"

"What? Why?" She asks.

"Long story short. There are two guys, Neroz and Refrige, they are out to get you and Gohan!"

"Why?"

"'Cause you're the chosen one!"

"Why Gohan?"

"No time to explain. You have to come home now. Well explain it all when you get back!"

Videl hangs up and turns to Gohan, "Neroz and this guy named Refrige are out to get us! We have to go back to Earth now! You get the chibis. I'll break the news to Mom and Liz."

"Okay."

"Mom! Liz!" Videl shouts. The other Satan women were drinking hot chocolate when Videl came in. "I'm sorry to leave so soon but, I've gotta go."

"It's okay." Astella says.

"No it's not."

The three look behind and see a counsilman.

"You may not leave. You are the chosen one."

"But I-"

"Will stay and help the people of Larips. No other way it shall be."

-NerdsRule

-9/29-13

-3:36 p.m.

Remember: When this story reaches 65 reviews, I will post a story with my epically awesome poll stories. I will post the first chapter of the story. Then you guys vote which one I work on after Spiral. I work on the second on after Currently Untitled etc. Review!