Evey watched as her daughter ran quickly and disappeared behind the wall. Just as the men were about to begin chase after Vivienne, Mr. Finch and his men gunned down almost all of them, leaving one to fall on his knees and shout something in German, putting his hands on his head.
"Evey what in bloody heavens are you doing up there?" Dominic asked, his eyebrows contorting in confusion. She only replied with a shake of her head and jumped down, landing next to Dominic and Finch.
"I was trying to distract the men from shooting Vivienne. They shot at her! We need to find her! She could be injured, or dying, and even-oh god- finch she could be drowning in her own blood for all we know!" Evey panicked, her hands flying to her temples and she rubbed them vigorously.
"Don't worry Evey, we'll find your daughter." Finch spoke with the most amount of reassurance he could, but he was still doubtful himself, and it was somewhat presenting itself on his facial features.
"You three! Look down the east corridor for any marks or traces of Evey's daughter or a women dressed in a black dress with a blue sash across the waist. And you four look down the south corridor. We'll take care of the west." Dominic shouted orders, glancing at Eric to make sure he was fine with them, only to be somewhat surprised to see him already making his way down the west corridor with Evey.
Mr. Finch looked for any evidence of Mrs. Creedy making her way through here. She had barely made a clean getaway, and Finch didn't find the little note from V indicating that he had captured her. Finch sighed, feeling ever more frustrated at all the stresses piling up on him.
They continued to walk for what seemed an eternity when Mr. Finch spotted something red dotting the floor in tiny little puddles. He bent down to inspect it. Blood.
"I'll investigate this alone. You two will look further down this hall for anything else that seems suspicious. If you do find anything, wait for me to catch up with you. Understood?" Finch exacted out.
"Understood. Let's go for Vivienne, Evey." Dominic stated with a seriousness to his tone. Evey only glanced at Finch before jogging to catch up with Dominic.
Eric sighed internally, trying to alleviate as much stress and anxiety before he knew what he was going to find. He followed the blood trail that led down a small corridor and stopped right in front of an exit door, opening it up to find a massive blood puddle, but no body to accompany it.
Eric stared in shock as he wondered who had possibly died here, and if not, where they ended up and who took them. Although finch knew it was probably Vivienne's blood and that V might have gotten his daughter in time, he had the sickening feeling that someone else had gotten her, and was going to use her for despicable things.
He grabbed a glass tube and dipped it in the blood, before wiping the glass clean with a napkin and sealing it shut.
"Be careful Vivienne…" Finch whispered.
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