Chapter 5! review please!
"So Agent Lisbon, have you thought over my request more?" The man asks, having connected the communication. "I have and we agree to trade David Arch for Jane," She says, trying to keep a strait professional face. "Ah that's great, you will meet us at 756 Elm Street." The man instructs with a smile. "Be there in 30 minutes or Jane dies." And with that the video is ended, showing a black screen.
"Boss, we already tried, we can't get David Arch out of jail," Rigsby says, looking at Lisbon in shock at what she had told the man. "I know but I did some research on him and he is just about Cho's size," She says turning to the agent. "Where is this going?" Van-Pelt asks, not really liking what Lisbon is saying. "Okay my plan is, we are going to pretend Cho is David Arch, put a bag over his head so no can see who he really is. Elm Street it has tons of warehouse's around it I bet we could have a swat team send snipers onto the roofs, when they get the shot the men are down," Lisbon says, explaining her plan to the team.
"Sounds like a plan Jane would make," Rigsby comments. "Ya but don't all his plans at least get the job done, now let's go get our man back!"
The men lower the chains and Jane still doesn't put pressure on his injured legs that burn. The leader undoes the handcuffs but almost immediately re-cuffs Jane with his arms behind his back. James then gags and blindfolds Jane, much to his dis-taste but he doesn't struggle, to tired and to sore.
The men force him to his feet even though his calves are bleeding and stinging. The two men holding Jane force him forward to walk to who knows where. Suddenly Jane is roughly thrown into the what he can only guess if the van. His whole body in tons of pain, the men throwing him around like a rag doll not helping much.
Jane tenses as the van starts and drives down a bumpy road, throwing his battered and bruised body everywhere.
After being thrown around the back of the van, for what seems like forever the van finally stops. A man rips off the blindfold but keeps the gag in place. One of the men opens the door while another one grabs Jane and again roughly shoves him to his feet.
The men half force, half drag Jane out of the van and to the side of it. About 100 ft away Jane can see the familiar SUV, and the faces of the worried agents. He also sees a man handcuffed with a black bag covering his face, that must be David Arch.
"I'm glad you came to you senses agents now, send David here and we will send Jane to you," The leader instructs. "Okay fine," Lisbon says releasing David who slowly walks towards them.
The men shove Jane forward who nearly falls but somehow manages to keep walking. Once he's about 3/4 of the way there Lisbon runs over to him and supports him, carefully leading him back to the SUV where Van-Pelt opens the back door. Lisbon carefully sets him in the back seat, they couldn't risk calling an ambulance and getting Jane hurt or even killed.
"W-why did you do as they s-said," Jane asks, stuttering slightly, that's when Lisbon notices he's shaking, no shivering. "We didn't, Jane are you cold?" Lisbon asks. "Um ya a little," Jane replies honestly. "Here," Lisbon says shrugging off her leather jacket and carefully laying in on Jane.
5 gun shots ring in the distance causing Jane to flinch, and look around nervously. "What happened!" He asks, obviously scared. "Shh Jane it's okay we had snipers set up on the buildings, Cho posed as David Arch so we could get you back," Lisbon says trying to calm him down.
He relaxes, sinking into the seat, "Thanks for s-saving m-me," he says a small smile appearing on his face. "No problem, of course we would save you Jane," Lisbon says. "I-I was s-so scared," Jane says fear evident in his eyes. "It's okay now Jane your safe," Lisbon says.
"Lisbon w-why... why is it so c-c-cold," Jane asks shaking even more. "What?" Lisbon asks putting her hand to his for head to find it radiating heat. "Shit, call the ambulance now!" Lisbon yells.
Jane shivers more as he hears the distant sound of an ambulance siren. He closes his eyes wanting to just sleep, and leave the awful pain of consciousness behind.
"Jane keeps your eyes open," Lisbon commands tapping Jane's check. "No I want to sleep," Jane argues. "No open them now!" She commands harshly, Jane sighs unhappily but does as he's told. "There now keep them open," Lisbon commands. "I-it hurts L-Lisbon," Jane stutters.
"I know Jane but I need you to keep your eyes open," Lisbon says, causing Jane to groan. The groan then turns into a cough, causing Jane to drool. The taste of cooper informs him it's actually blood not drool.
He coughs some more causing more blood to flood from his mouth, his vision also starts darkening. "Jane!" He hears the distant sounds of Lisbon's voice, but another coughing fit causes him to be fully taken by darkness.
Lisbon watches in horror as Jane starts coughing up blood and then passes out. "God where are the paramedics!" Lisbon yells angrily. Almost as if by magic paramedics arrive next to her and she steps out of the way so they can get to work. They quickly put him on the gurney and start pushing him towards the ambulance, Lisbon and the agents quickly climbing into the SUV so they can be at the hospital.