A/N: This is going to be a long author's note sorry. First of all, I just want to say this to the guest who has reviewed about 15 times for each of my stories. I appreciate the positive things you're saying but you're also saying negative things that are infuriating me. Saying that the fluffy parts are disgusting, I would just like to point out that THESE STORIES ARE RATED T FOR TEEN. Teens do these things! If you are "nearly 13" and I believe you said, haven't even finished the first Divergent book, I am not going to take into consideration your negative comments. I'm not trying to be rude but don't read my stories if you don't like them. Okay, happier thoughts now! I got a flipping TON of reviews for the last chapter! Like over 50 and it's amazing! I also reached 800 reviews on my Summer Vacation story, and 200 reviews on this story! That is outstanding, thank you guys so much! I also need to address the fact that I really can't update more than I already do. A lot of you always say, "This is good but it'd be better if you updated more often." I promise that I update as much as I can. School literally stresses me out to an extreme, and then I need time to relax and I have church and homework all the time. I promise that once summer gets here, I'll be updating at least every 3 days. As of now, I update every weekend, usually Fridays, but sometimes Saturday and Sunday depending on my plans. Another thing, someone asked me if I liked writing these stories or if it just felt like a chore. Guys, I want you to know that I absolutely love writing these stories. Writing is my passion and I love it so much. I love all the sweet feedback I get, it truly makes me so happy. No, updating is not a chore for me, I look forward to it. I'm going to try to write a book this summer and make a website for the book or something, I don't know. I just want to give it a try because it won't harm anything, it could only help. Also, I tried to respond to most of y'all's reviews! I'll try to do that again this time! Lastly, the reader of the week goes to… 4655! This person left a really long review, telling me exactly what they liked about the chapter in a very detailed review and I loved it so much. So keep reviewing guys! Who will be the reader of the week next week?(; I apologize for the super long author's note! I love you guys so much! I hope you enjoy this chapter, I tried to incorporate your ideas!
Tris' POV
About 5:30, our friends start pouring through the door. First, Christina and Will show up, followed by, Marlene and Shauna. Arriving last is the crazy brothers, Uriah and Zeke.
As Uriah enters, he exclaims, "The party don't start 'til I walk in!"
I laugh as does everyone else. Tobias says, "I think the proper grammar would be doesn't, not don't."
Uriah simply flips his hand at him like it is no big deal.
"Alright guys, Four and I already moved the furniture so just sit in a circle over there," I claim, following my own instructions and everyone else does the same.
I sit down and Tobias sits to my left. Zeke sits down on my other side and Christina sits across from me.
"Who wants to start?" I ask.
"I will!" Uriah screeches. I look at him, amused, and shrug.
"Okay, so. Will, truth or dare?" Uriah says, calmer now that he gets to go first.
"Truth," Will says slowly, knowing that Uriah can think up some pretty evil things.
"Way to live life, bro. Starting the game off with a truth," Zeke mutters.
"What is the one thing you don't want anyone to ask you in this game?" Uriah asks, grinning wickedly.
Will looks fearful as he splutters his response, "I'm not going to tell you that because someone will ask me!"
Uriah just grins devilishly and I know that Will is trapped. He glares as he takes off his shirt and chucks it at Uriah's face violently.
"Wow," Tobias mutters. "That was really intelligent, Uriah. I'm surprised."
Uriah throws Will's shirt across the room and shrugs at Tobias. "Your turn now," I say to Will.
Will thinks for a moment, slowly looking at each of us in turn. Then, he says, "Marlene, truth or dare?"
Marlene quickly answers, "Dare."
Will grins and says, "I dare you to act out a particular commercial ad."
Marlene laughs and we all look at her, bemused. She shrugs and says, "Sorry, I was thinking about the one I wanted to do."
She rises from the floor and walks to where there is more open space. We all turn to face her. She stares intently at some point across from her and quickly slides her jacket off. Then, she pretends to take her pants off. She puts her hands over her head and tilts them, and I assume she's pretending to pour something over her. Then, she quickly kneels on the floor and leans forward so that she's laying down but kneeling at the same time.
She gets up and says, "Kay, I'm done."
There's silence for about five seconds before we all lose it.
"What was that?" Zeke chokes out through his laughter.
Marlene grins and says, "It was a Japanese commercial for sushi."
After we've all calmed down enough to continue, Marlene asks, "Shauna, truth or dare?"
"Dare," Shauna responds.
Marlene smirks, "I dare you to give an 'aunty kiss' to Four. I have some red lipstick for you to use."
Shauna glances nervously at Tobias who looks horrified and I can't help but laugh. Shauna then says, "Four, are you going to hurt me if I do this dare?"
Tobias smirks and says, "No, I don't hurt chicks. But no promises that I won't get revenge."
Shauna seems to mull it over and decide best not to do it because she whips her shirt over her head, revealing her baby blue bra. Zeke whistles and Shauna slaps his shoulder.
"Tris, truth or dare?" Shauna inquires.
I sigh internally, trying to think of the best option. History shows that most of the time, Shauna doesn't come up with good dares. Then again, this could be one of the rare times that she does. A truth would be easy, I say the answer and it's over, I don't have to worry about it again.
"Truth," I respond.
Shauna thinks for a moment, then grins as she asks, "Have you ever licked anything off of anyone? If so, who was it, what did you lick off, and on what part of the body was it?"
Well, going with truth was a horrible idea. I shift uncomfortably, "That's more than question."
"But they're all about the same thing. Answer them all or it doesn't count and you have to strip," Shauna quips.
I fidget in my spot and glance at Tobias. He's biting his lip like he's trying really hard not to laugh.
I glare at him menacingly, "Don't you dare laugh at me, Tobias. I know that you're thinking of the same thing I am."
"Well that answers the who part of the truth. Now what about the rest?" Uriah inquires.
I seriously consider just ripping off my shirt but then Zeke says, "I thought you weren't a prude anymore, Trissy."
I glare at him and realize that I can just say it quickly and hope nobody lingers on it. "Fine," I murmur. "One time, Four and I were eating pie and he got whip cream on his collarbone." I shrug, trying to downplay it and hide my embarrassment.
"Tris, you are so weird. That's not even that bad and you act like you licked chocolate off of his butt or something," Christina says, laughing.
I flush crimson and scoot closer to Tobias, leaning against him and hiding my face in his shoulder. He rubs the small of my back soothingly and I can feel him gently shaking with laughter. I peek up from out of his shoulder and say, "Can we move on? Zeke, truth or dare?"
"Always dare," Zeke says, grinning at me.
"Kiss someone of the same gender for one minute," I say, saying the first dare that comes to mind.
Zeke shakes his head in disgust and quickly swipes his shirt over his head, "Not happening."
"Four, truth or dare?" Zeke asks.
Tobias shrugs, still rubbing my back. "Truth because I don't feel like moving," He says, smiling down at me and I smile warmly in return.
"Such love," Zeke sighs, sounding mocking. "Anyway, okay truth. Hmmm…. What did you have for breakfast?"
Everyone stares at him as if he grew another head. "Um, dauntless cake…" Tobias mutters, bemused.
Zeke nods, seeming satisfied. I furrow my brows and say, "You're so stupid."
Tobias laughs but says, "Uriah, truth or dare?"
Uriah grins and says, "Dare. I am not a pansycake!"
Tobias hums for a moment, contemplating a dare. Then he says, "Tell us a funny joke."
Uriah smiles and says, "Alright. So there's these two fish swimming down a river. One runs into a concrete wall, turns to the other fish, and says, 'Dam!'"
I know the joke wasn't even really funny but I can't stop the uncontrollable laughter that bubbles from me. I clutch my stomach as I laugh hysterically. When I calm down a bit, Tobias grins, shaking his head, and asks Uriah, "What are you, 12?"
"And a half," Uriah replies, grinning back. Then he adds, "How old are you? Five?"
Tobias smirks and says, "No, I'm Four." Then, he tops it off by acting confused.
That sends me into another fit of hysterics. I fall over onto my side and curl into a ball, trying to stop the laughter.
Tobias glances down at me and shakes his head, chuckling, at me most likely. "I think Trissy needs some sleep. Go home guys, we'll see you at school tomorrow," Tobias murmurs.
Uriah mocks hurt and exclaims, "Your alacrity for us to leave really hurts, Four." He pounds a hand over his heart as if to emphasize his point.
Tobias just grins and raises his eyebrows, pointing to the door. They gather their things and head out the door, shouting goodbyes as they leave.
Tobias looks down at me where I'm sprawled across the floor. He laughs and shakes his head. "Trissy, why are you so giggly today?"
I grin at him and reach my arms up, wanting him to lay on the floor with me. He grins and kneels down on the floor, looking at me expectantly for an answer. I smirk and wrap my arms tightly around his neck, tugging him until he's hovering over me with his weight on his elbows. I drag his face really close to mine. Then, I answer his question. "Today was so much fun. I love you, Tobias," I whisper, my lips just barely brushing against his.
"You're tired and looney, Tris. Stop trying to seduce me so I can put you to bed," Tobias jokingly castigates me, smirking devilishly.
I grin wickedly and crash my lips to his. I teasingly tug on his bottom lip with my teeth and he lets out a groan.
"That's it, we're going upstairs," Tobias says, quickly getting up and swinging me up into his arms. I squeal as he starts up the stairs, but he quickly shushes me with a passionate kiss.
A/N: So, I hope you guys liked this chapter. That fish joke about the dam, my friend told me it and I literally laughed so hard that I almost fainted. It's not even that funny but I don't know, I laugh at stupid stuff. Anyway, I love you guys, I'm sorry about not updating sooner, I was busy and exhausted. Tell me what you thought of this chapter! Until next weekend… (;
