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The test activates and I'm in a glass room with Jeanine Mathews. There are two bowls, one with meat, and one with a knife. "Choose wisely" She says to me, I know what I need to do, "Over my dead body" I pick up the knife and throw it, it hits her square in the chest and the light goes out of her eyes, next I use the knife to break the glass and jump out of the room, only to be met by my environment changing into a dark room.
There are computers lined along the wall, all of their screens showing the same thing, it says ERROR: TARGERT NON EXISTENT, I pull up a chair and put my hand on the monitor, I can feel all the waves of the electricity flowing into me, the information this thing holds, its amazing. I ask it a question in my mind, Who is your target? Immediately the screen changes, and says EXPERIMENT 28, that's me. Thanks.
The room changes, there's a door, the room has two people in it, one with a gun and one without, I realize the person with the gun is a guard and the person without is Crystal, "You have been conspiring with a terrorist, punishable with death without trial" His voice is even, emotionless. "Please, dont kill me, please, take me to prison but please don't kill me" She pleads, and he aims "NOO!" I cant let her be harmed, I jump out in front of the gun and take the bullet to my chest, The pain is short, the room changes.
In the room a man sits in a chair with some paper in his hand, "Hey, girl do you know this person?" He asks handing me the paper, I look at it and see a picture of Jeanine, "Actually yes" I say, "Thank you so much the man says, shakes my hand and walks away.
(A\N I didn't know how to do Amity, so if ya guys have any suggestions post em in dat review box and ill edit it in, thanks.)
I shoot up from the chair, "So, what was my result?" I ask, "Come on, let's go out the back, you're going to tell your family that the test made you sick" She says and ushers me out, "Hold on, what was my result?" I ask confused, "Abnegation, and Erudite, and Dauntless, and Candor, and Amity" She says, "The test doesn't work on you, it's extremely rare, they call it Divergent, you can't tell anyone, and I mean nobody" I'm baffled, "Wait hold on, so what faction do I choose? I need to know!" I demand. "I need you to trust yourself" She says and pushes me out of the door.
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While I walk back I bump into someone, "Sorry, I didn't see you" I say without raising my head. "What's your problem stiff?" At that I look up and see a big teenager, probably about my age, in a black vest, "Excuse me? What's your problem?" I say back and shove him out of my way, "You just dug yourself deep down in a hole stiff, guys come out" He says and three other people come out of the shadow, "Let's get this little stiff" He says and they charge at me, something in my mind clicks and my thoughts are clouded with pure rage, I reach out my hand and grab one of them by the neck, without touching him, I can't control myself, my actions are being controlled by something deep in my head, it throws the guy into a wall, "Dude she's magic or something!" The leader says, "Let's shoot her down!" One of them says and they pull out pistols, take aim and shoot.
Sorry for taking so long! Gahhh! Anyways, Cliffy cliff cliff! :D