Hello! Though I only got one review it still made me happy :D This is probably one story I'll use my cat a a main character along with Greypaw being a main character. To stop the confusion I'm going to start using POV (Point of view) blah blah blah I've already used Snow paw in Warriors: The Collection, but she's not gonna die like that. I doubt she's gonna die at all in this story. But anyways to the reviews answering thingy...

Primrosebutterfly: Thank you for being my first review on this story! Your kind words have encouraged me to continue this story. And you're being to kind to me. My stories are utterly terrible c: Keep reviewing please!

Now onto the story!

A white she-cat flicked her tail irritably as the clan called out the new warriors names,

"Brackenflame, Redfeather!"

"Snowpaw, stop being so fidgety" he mentor scolded. Snowpaw glared at the silver tabby and continued to flick her tail.

"I'm not fidgeting Silverstorm. I'm just moving my tail." Snowpaw snapped as Silverstorm ran to the two new warriors. She heard a purr of amusement come from behind her as Brackenfoot hobbled past her. Snowpaw turned around to see her sister padding up to her.

"Somebody woke up on the wrong side of the nest" her sister chuckled.

"I know very well that you hate her too Greypaw" Snowpaw hissed playfully. "Plus I'm tired of her neglecting her mentoring duties just so she can moon over Brackenflame and his brother" Snowpaw spat.

Greypaw sat beside her and looked at the two warriors. "You've got to admit though that those two toms are pretty handsom especially for their age." Greypaw pointed out.

"You mean they look handsome for being kittypets." Snowpaw murmured as she stalked towards the group. "Out of the way kittypet!" Snowpaw hissed bitterly as she pushed past Redfeather and Brackenflame. She locked eyes with Brackenflame and nearly stopped dead, there was no hatred in his eyes.

The only thing that lingered was sorrow and another emotion she couldn't put her claw on. Snowpaw chuckled darkly as Redfeather hissed at them.

"Snowpaw! Is that anyway to speak to a warrior?" Silverstorm growled at her.

"Oh shut up Silverstorm if it were any other cat you would've laughed" Greypaw snarled as she and her sister padded out of the camp.

"I see what you mean Snowpaw" Greypaw meowed as they wandered the forest. "When do you think Brackenfoot will die? So that I can get a new mentor?" she asked asked curiously.

Snowpaw shrugged at her sister as they found their way to Sunningrocks. "That old flea-bag should've been in the elders den three moons ago" Greypaw chuckled.

Snowpaw let out a mrrow of laughter and jumped onto the rocks. "We should try and claim more land from those fish eaters" Snowpaw declared as she jumped past the scent lines and circled around a lone tree stump.

"Snowpaw! Get back here! We only have half a moon of battle training!" Greypaw hissed at her.

"Who cares? Those fish brains won't even know I'm here" Snowpaw crowed. Shadows loomed over Snowpaw and she spun around, her fur standing on end.

"Fish brains huh?" a burly tom mocked her. He was a solid silver color and gave her a wicked grin. "I think ThunderClan needs to be taught a lesson" the silver tom meowed darkly.

"Fishscale c'mon they're only kits" the only she-cat meowed sternly.

"Would kits have scars over their eyes?" Fishscale pointed out.

Snowpaw let out a yowl and jumped onto the tom, scratching deep into his flank. Fishscale threw her off and shoved her towards the river. Snowpaw let out a squeal of terror as she rolled into the river, trying to stay afloat. A huge paw pushed her head down and started to drown her.

Snowpaw thrashed around wildly, trying to get her head above water. She unsheathed her claws and continued to thrash, the oxygen slowly leaving her, making her movements sluggish. She felt her claws snag flesh and she ripped it open.

The paw on her head lifted quickly and Snowpaw feverishly broke the surface and gasped for air. Her lungs burning as she glared at the tom that held her down.

Fishscale had a paw held to his throat as blood dripped from it. Snowpaw chuckled darkly and lashed her tail.

"I would suggest not trying to drown me again or I won't miss your life vein" Snowpaw threatened. She marked the new scent lines and jumped on to the tree stump and yowled her victory.

"Sunstar will be so proud!" Greypaw crowed, jumping next to her sister. Their victory was cut short when Silverstorm crashed through the undergrowth.

"There you two are! I've been all over the forest looking for you. Brackenfoot is about to join the elders hurry!" Silverstorm panted running back towards the camp.

Snowpaw looked to Greypaw who looked utterly confused. "C'mon slow slug we're gonna miss your mentor naming ceremony too." Snowpaw purred, splashing through the river and towards their camp. Greypaw quickly followed her as they padded close together.

"Who do you think will be your mentor?"" Snowpaw asked, looking to her sister. "Hopefully not one of those newly named kittypets" Greypaw purred as they entered camp. Snowpaw spotted Redfeather sitting up proudly along with his brother Brackenflame.

Greypaw let out a groan of disgust as Sunstar ended the ceremony. Every cat was calling out Brackfoot's name proudly.

Snowpaw quickly began to groom her sister's fur before Sunstar turned to them.

"It seems that young Greypaw needs a new mentor, I will be the one to train her until she is a warrior. The entire clan was hushed into silence as their uncle jumped down and touched noses with Greypaw.

It was only on rare occasions that the clan leader took on an apprentice. Snowpaw scoffed as Sunstar laid eyes on her and glared at him openly. She didn't trust his actions even if his word was technically law.

Snowpaw turned her back to him and stalked out of the camp. Greypaw looked to Sunstar who nodded at the light grey she-cat.

Greypaw dipped her head and turned to chase after her sister. Sunstar slowly followed the apprentices more slowly as Silverstorm caught up to him. "Would you like me to take care of them?" she asked awkwardly.

Sunstar stopped and stared coldly at Silverstorm. "You are relieved of apprentice training Silverstorm. Snowpaw's defiance comes from your actions." He meowed flatly.

Silverstorm stopped cold and watched as her leader exited the camp.