Maharl100: Sorry for the long wait in updating this story. Finally managed to get away from Candle Jack.
Candel Jack: You rang.
Maharl100: Damn it!
Sanzo: (shoots Candel Jack banishing him)
Maharl100: Thank you Sanzo.
Sanzo: Didn't do it for you I did it for the story.
Taoren46: Yeah if he took you again the story wouldn't get updated again.
Maharl100: Point taken. But while I was there I got so good Story Idea thus if the story is a bit different from the preview that would be why, also may go back and edit the other chaps.
Goku: I thought you was lazy though.
Maharl100: I am, but they were already edited i just have to spell check. I'll just have Ren do it :3
Hakkai: I don't doubt you.
Maharl: Beside I'm the one typing the newer chapters. Because Ren rarely throws out any use able good Idea.
Taoren46: I do too.
Gojyo: Last Idea you gave out was demons attack, I don't think that qualifies as an Idea.
Taoren46: I don't see you giving any ideas.
Gojyo: sure I hook up with a hot babe.
Maharl100: that not any better the Ren's demon attack idea.
Goku: Ooh. What about we eat a feast.
Sanzo: How is that any better then the water sprites idea.
Goku: well do u have anything better, Sanzo?
Sanzo: How about you all shut up and start the chapter...
Maharl100: I like Sanzo's Idea. :D Enjoy Chapter 17 'Haunted Mansion Part 1. Mayhem'.
Chapter 17 Part 1
(Ren's POV)
I woke up feeling completely drowsy. I looked around the swaying room I did not recognize. Then the memories of what happened slammed back into my head demanding that I acknowledge them.
We were driving in a dark heavily thick wooded creepy forest.
"Boo!" Maharl shouted into my ears, grabbing on to my shoulders.
I screamed inadvertently smacking Maharl in the face.
Maharl fell back into her seat, holding her nose. "You hit me.."
Gojyo laughed. "What were you expecting to happen"
"I don't know but why would someone turn to smack a potential ghost." Maharl remained crateling her nose.
"You startled me, it was a reflex." Ren turned away. "Your such a trouble maker."
Maharl jolted forward as though she shivered. The jeep came to a halt as a mysterious fog began to set in. Maharl looked up and around.
"That's odd?" Hakkai looked around.
"This place is starting to creep me out." I took a hold of my bare shoulders. I had taken my jacket off do to the hot weather just a few hours ago.
"Cool! It's really foggy!" Goku began waving his hands in the air.
"What's that smell." I sniffed the air to get a better whiff.
Maharl's eyes widened, "Chloroform!?" She cover hers and my mouth.
But it was too late the smell had already took effect in making me drowsy. I helplessly watched Maharl try to keep me awake in vain. My head turn to a shadowed figure standing through the fog. His mouth curved into a smile I thought I heard talking but I could not be sure with my popping ears. I watched as he neared me before it went dark.
I cursed myself looking around. The others were scatter around the floor unconscious. I slowly crawled over, kneeling down beside Maharl shaking her violently calling for her to wake up.
(Normal pov)
Maharl stirred slowly. She looked at Ren sheepishly then around the room before rolling back over. "Wake me up tomorrow..."
"Get up!" Ren kicked Maharl's head reasonably hard.
Maharl sat rubbing her head, "Ow, didn't have to hit me so hard" she slowly got off the ground.
"Your not even gonna question where we are?" Ren looked at her sister.
"If I do will it change that were here?" Maharl made her way over to Goku.
"Right how could I forget." Ren replied getting up, walking over to Sanzo.
"Goku!... Goku!..." Maharl shook him. Her eye's lowered to his feet. She took one of his shoes off and placed it upside down on top of his nose. Only a moment later did Goku spring forward gasping for air. His shoe fell back on to his lap. He turned to look at Maharl who smiled with her tounge sticking out.
Ren stopped at Sanzo on the floor "Come on Sanzo, wakey wakey." She bent down and began shaking him. Finally sighed as the monk didn't stir. She took her book out and rose it up. Sanzo squinted his eyes slowly opening. "I said wake up!" Ren slammed the book down hitting Sanzo in the face.
"Aghh...why you little!" he sat up staring daggers at her while she returned it with a smile. He looked around. "Where the hell are we now?" He drew his attention away from her and rubbed his head.
"Hell, how should I know." Ren answered now walking over to wake Hakkai up.
Maharl slapped Gojyo around "GOJYO! WAKE UP! WAKE UP!" she yelled. When that didn't work Goku took over slapping Gojyo yelling "WAKE UP!" Gojyo slowly stirred sitting up. Goku let go of his collar. Before Maharl slapped Gojyo hard one last time.
Gojyo grabbed a hold of the red sport on his face, "I was awake." He looked at Maharl.
"Just making sure." She smiled.
With that Sanzo, Ren and Hakkai who had just woke up came over to them. "Any one see an exit?" Asked Ren.
"Why my dear pet, you are at my mansion there is no exit because none of you will be leaving." a menacing voice echoed in through the shadows.
Ren looked around."That be a lie cause if there's an entrance there an exit.."
Maharl folded her arm over her chest, "ooh a mysterious voice how scary."
"insult all you like but you all are at my mercy." Retorted the voice.
"What you gonna do narrate us to death." Maharl put her arms behind her head.
"... ..." Their was no reply.
Sanzo pulled his gun out checking the bullet and started down the only nearrow hall way.
"Sanzo where are you going?" Hakkai asked.
"To find the god damn exit, what else?" Sanzo answered.
The others looked at each other, with no better solution they fallowed after him.
Only a few minutes had passed, before "Come on out, where ever you are!" Maharl yelled out.
"Yeah we just want to kill you so we can get out of here." Goku added.
"Shouting for the man to come out isn't going to work." Ren commented on the two of there actions. Maharl glanced at Ren for a second then turned back as Ren leaned against a wall.
"Fine then." Maharl huffed they continue walking for a bit longer. "Chh chh chh, here bad guy bad guy bad guy." Maharl began making cat calls. Maharl stopped, she quickly turned around "Why hasn't Ren said anything?" Goku and Gojyo turned as well.
They slowly turned to Sanzo, "Sanzo?" They called. "We have a problem."
"What's the problem?" Sanzo asked annoyed.
"It's about Ren." the three began twiddling their fingers.
"What about her?" Hakkai and Sanzo asked.
"Well...we lost her..." they stated.
"What...How?" Sanzo yelled turning around with Hakkai.
"Well...she just disappeared." all three said in unison.
(To Ren in her pov)
In a blink of an eye I was on the other side of the wall. I quickly scrambled to my feet. Pushing on the wall desperately for it to turn back over but it wouldn't budge one inch.
'Just great.' I thought, 'Just like in the horror movies one get's separated just before they get killed.' With no other way to go, I hastily made my way down the corridors.
"Hahaha lost little birdie?" said that creepy voice from before.
"Who are you calling a little birdie?" My hastily walk became a jog then a sprint before a full out run toward the voice.
"Why you of course my little pet..." he answered.
A set of doors laid before me, I busted through them looking for the voices owner. A young child about 7 stood in the center of the round room. The vain on my forehead twitched. 'How dare this brat call me a little when he was even younger then I was.'
"Who are you?" I asked whipping out my swords.
He smirked, "Why my pet my name be of no importance." he gestured around him to the mansion.
"Well then I hope you don't mind your tomb stone being blank." I remarked.
The boy remained calm, "My what a interesting girl you are, my pet. I hope you don't mind if I take you." he smiled pulling a shiny clear orb out. "Lets see what your scared most of."
"Huh excuse me." I stepped back, confused. 'Is this kid coming on to me?' was my last thought just second before the room was engulfed in black.
'What just happened?' I looked around.
My eye's settled on Sanzo, Hakkai, Goku and Gojyo on the floor covered in blood.
I ran over to Sanzo and reached out to shake him. My hand jolted back as a blood drop spatter onto my wrist. Slowly my head shift up to see Maharl boned to what looked like a Magic circle with a sword that looked like one of mine parsing her crest. I screamed at the top of my lungs.
(Back to the Sanzo party, Normal POV)
"What are you doing Monkey gal?" Gojyo eyed Maharl who was feeling the walls.
"She's just probably being her stupid self." Sanzo stated.
"Aaaaaa no, the last time I saw Ren was when she was leaning against this wall." Maharl stated continuing to feel the walls.
"So, your basically saying that there's an spinning wall like in the movies." Sanzo replied.
"Exactly." Maharl said turning around putting her thumb up. "It's going to be just like Scobby Doo. Sanzo as Freddy, Goku as Shaggy, Gojyo as Daphne, Hakkai as Velma and Hakuryo can be Scobby."
"Well it's not like were in a movie right now... wait a minute did you just cast me as a woman?!" Gojyo glared at her.
"Well I also basically called Goku a hippie whats the...Woah." Maharl cried as she grabbed Goku's cape. forcing him with her when she fell bringing them on the other side. Goku was on top of Maharl very suggestively. Goku face went red, as he gulped.
"Now ain't the time for that monkey." Gojyo teased as the three of them came throw the opening.
"Shut up we fell." Was Goku's remark getting off of her.
"Your gay." Was Maharl's remark getting off the ground.
"Knock it off you imbeciles. Listen.." Sanzo hit the three with his fan.
A scream emanated from the distance.
Racing to where the scream came from the five busted into the round room. Ren was on the ground trembling before the young 7 year old.
Ren screamed one last time before toppling over.
The five pulled out their weapons readying them sleeves for a fight. the boy cursed, disappearing. "I'll be back for that body of yours my pet."
"Is he coming on to her?" Maharl questioned. "Why would he want Ren's body anyway?"
"Well she not flat chested for one." Gojyo stated.
Maharl vain twitched, "So, someone has to be a man out of the four boys here." she huffed.
"Right cause the size of you cheat make you a man." Gojyo replied making his way past her.
"Glad you see it that way, now when you get off that high horse your on you can make me a sandwich." Maharl ran past him over to Ren.
"You were casting me as a women then." Gojyo's eye's followed her.
"Gaaaah!?" Maharl quickly flipped back as Ren got up. Blood red thirsty eye's scaled around the room. Pointy ear peeking out from behind her long layered brown locks. Long sharp nail, with pealing off red nail polish. A crimson red butterfly with Sakura peddles tattoo on her shoulder, as though the ink were lava. A firer aura surrounding her.
"So, she's a demon too." Sanzo grunted.
"Sanzo, what should we do." Hakkai asked.
"The same thing we did for Maharl." Sanzo replied.
"Exactly the same." Gojyo questioned.
"Na uh I'm not doing it." Goku replied.
"...? Not doing, what?" Maharl's eye brow rose.
"Kmph..." Goku covered Gojyo's mouth."Nothing..." he told the confused girl.
"... No, your hiding something and I what to know what." She replied.
"Stop talking!" Sanzo yelled at them.
"Maharl, be careful Ren won't be able to tell friend from foe." Hakkai said.
"That fine I owe her for this morning anyway." Maharl summoned Punisher in it's first form.
"Well then lets get started." Goku challenged summoning his Nyoi-boi.
"What do you think caused her blood to heat up?" Gojyo asked summoning his Shakujyo.
"Gojyo, is now really the time?" Maharl and Goku said in unison.
Ren looked toward them. She raced her hand making a heat wave at Gojyo, forcing him to the wall. Ren appeared above him, ready to strike. Goku intervened blocking her hand with Nyoi boi. "Thanks monkey."
"Don't mention it Kappa, don't steel my food for a week and well be even." Goku smiled. Gojyo sweat drop, "Your worried about food at a time like this." Gojyo flinched looking down to his pants leg. Red hot liquid dripped from Nyoi-boi where Ren clutched. Nyoi-boi melted apart before them, leaving them open to an attack. The two braced them self for a hit. How ever Maharl had slam heads with Ren forcing her to the side. Maharl rolled away and got back to her feet. "..Thank you.." The two looked to Maharl.
Maharl looked to them. Blood trail down the side of her eye. "Don't mention it, that was pay back to Ren." The two turned to Ren, who also had blood trailing down the side of her face.
"Appears Ren's hand able to melt magical objects." Hakkai scanned Ren top to bottom for any weakness. "How do you suppose we get close with out getting burned Sanzo?"
"Simple don't let her touch you." came Sanzo's reply.
"Best advice I ever got." Maharl smiled, charging at Ren. Ren prepared to strike how ever Maharl dived to the ground sliding under her feet. Kicking her forward from behind. Ren stumbled forward turning to face Maharl who had quickly made it back to her feet.
"Maharl seems to be having no trouble avoiding Ren's hands." Hakkai smiled watching Maharl her self giggle.
"We use to play tag and they got violent."
Hakkai eye's trailed back over to Ren. Ren seem annoyed to how Maharl was toying with her. Her hand glowing violent Red. Pulling her hand together she swung her claws at Maharl causing five giant fire like scratch shape lines at Maharl.
"That's not good." Maharl stepped back. Hakkai ran in front of her putting up a chi barrier. Dust rose around them.
"Thanks Hakkai." Maharl smiled.
"Don't mention it, I don't think we will like what will happen if it hits one of us." Hakkai responded.
"Got that right" Maharl said looking at the walls that weren't protected by the Chi barrier. Maharl turned to Sanzo.
"Why aren't you helping." Maharl glared at Sanzo.
"I didn't think you needed it." Sanzo said dropping his cigarette crushing it under his foot.
Ren look toward Sanzo. A few minutes of silence passed before Ren decide to attack first.
"Sanzo!" Goku screamed watching Ren tackle him to the ground.
Ren's hands we're on Sanzo shoulders. Sanzo didn't even wince as there was no burning feeling.
"Now's are chance." Hakkai, Goku and Maharl grabbed Ren making sure not to touch her hands and pined her to the ground.
"Sanzo, now put a limiter on her." Hakkai shouted as the three of them struggled to hold Ren down. Sanzo quickly placed his hand on her forehead. The second he was about too put the limiter on her, one hand got free and grabbed Goku's wrist.
Goku yelped in pain, "Ow that's hot!" as he pushed Sanzo who's hand slipped and he grabbed on to Ren's ear and his other on her chest as to catch him self from completely falling. Three gold ear cuffs appeared as he removed his hand from her ear. His eye's trailed down to the hand cupped around Ren's breast before he got up off of her in a hurry.
Ren's eye's turn violent again and slowly shut as her grip on Goku's wrist loosened, her ear and nails went back to normal.
Hakkai sighed and quickly started to heal Goku burned wrist than moved on to healing the burn on Gojyo's leg. He fell to his knee as he finished. Gojyo help Hakkai back up. placing one arm over his shoulders he dragged him over to the others. Sanzo placed Ren on his back and stood up.
"Bastard thought breaking her would make it easy to take over her body." Sanzo cursed. "Let's hurry up and find the owner of that voice and get out of this place." Sanzo turned leaving through the wall Ren had made.
The four looked at each other and Goku made his way to the wall. Gojyo dragged Hakkai along with Maharl following behind them..
"Where is this guy?" Maharl started to complain.
"I'm so hungry." Goku joined in.
"Shut up!" Sanzo pulled a cigarette out then a lighter with one hand while the other held Ren on his back.
Maharl sighed she knew Sanzo was in a bad mood. Looking toward one of the painting on the wall the painting eye winked at her. "Aaa" Rubbed her eye's, blinking at the painting again. The painting winked again. Stepping back she hit the other wall.
"What is it now." Sanzo asked turning to her.
"The painting it just moved" Maharl moved closer to it to see if it would do it again.
The four looked at the painting she was looking at for a good long minute, "Your imagining things." Sanzo continued walking away.
"Gojyo, I should be fine now." Hakkai told Gojyo. He let go of him and Hakkai walked closely behind Sanzo. As they walked they passed many hallway and down many corridors.
"You five sure a proving to be troublemakers. Aren't you's." The voice replied.
"Don't go lumping up it to that class." Sanzo remarked.
"Don't worry you won't be around for much longer." The voice faded out.
The four continued on there way down the hall to find the man. Maharl walk down the hall fallowing the small boy in the opposite hallway."Hey hold up. I won't hurt you." She called out, falling him around the corner. How ever the boy stood at the end of the hallway like he was leading her some where. Finally the boy turned walking threw the door. Maharl didn't hesitate on entering. The boy stood by Hakuryuu and faced her. The room was small with a deck.
The only light source emanated from the candle. "Your a ghost." she wobbled into the room. Her vision had began blurring. "Hakuryuu that pen over there get me it." she point to the pen laying on the desk. Hakuryuu cheeped in confusion, however he got the pen like he was asked too. The two watched at she pull her legging up over her knee and scribble on her leg then cover it. She panted as though she was forcing her self to keep consciousness and was losing. "Hakuryuu watch over things.." As she faded out.
"Is Onee-chan okay?" The white glowing boy turned to Hakuryuu. Hakuryuu perched himself down beside Maharl in panic. He licked her hand hoping it would wake her.
The four walked down hallway after hallway. The halls seemed to go on for miles with no end.
"Hungry." Goku said holding his stomach.
"I told you to shut up." Sanzo said.
"But, I'm so hungry." Goku complained.
"I don't care, the quicker we get out of here the quicker you can get something to eat." Sanzo responded.
"Yeah, monkey that's the six time you've complained." Ren said still being carried by Sanzo.
"How long have you been awake?" Sanzo questioned.
"For about ten minutes now." Ren answered.
"Why didn't you say anything?" Sanzo asked.
"I didn't want to walk.." she answered just before Sanzo dropped her. Ren landed on her feet and stood up strait.
"What happened to me anyway? Why do I feel like I was beaten with a bag of bricks." Ren grabbed a hold of her head.
"As it turns out your also a demon, so we put a limiter on you." Hakkai told her.
"Huh? What do you mean?" Ren asked placing her hand on her forehead.
"Not there, check your ear." Sanzo said annoyed.
"Oh..." Ren replied tracing her hand to her ear.
"As for feeling like you were beaten by a bag of bricks your sister here seemed to enjoy slamming her head into yours." Gojyo replied.
"Speaking of Maharl where is she?" Ren looked around the four.
"Maharl's right..." Goku and Gojyo turned around not seeing Maharl. "Not behind us."
"You lost her?" Ren asked.
"We didn't lose her we temporally missed placed her that's all." Sanzo replied still going in the same direction.
"So, you still don't know where she is." Ren replied.
"Shut up and move, she knows to look for an exit so we'll find her on the way." Sanzo continued down that hall.
(Preview)
Maharl: Mmmm my head. Gah now where am I?
Ghost boy: You passed out.
Hakuryuu: Kuuu
Maharl: You found Hakuryuu.
Hakuryuu: Kuuu?
Ghost boy: Onee-chan is strange.
Hakuryuu: Kuuu...
Maharl: I don't suppose you know where my other friend are?
Ghost boy: Fallow me Onee-chan.
Hakkai: Sanzo? You don't suppose theirs a barrier here as well do you.
Sanzo: Tch only one way to find out. Monkey get your ass over here.
Goku: Why me, Ren's smaller then me.
Ren: I'm a girl and younger perverts, oh my bad pedophiles :P
Goku: Fine. I'll do it.
Voice: Welcome.
Ren: Shut up and show yourself.
Maharl: Ren! Guys!
Everyone: Maharl!?
Dam
Maharl: Ow.. Hey! Open this door now!
Maharl and Ren: Chapter 18 'The Red Vase Demon'
Maharl100: Now I have to figure out how to type Chapter 18 :D
Taoren46: Shouldn't be to hard you have lots of Ideas in your 4 note book.
Maharl100: All the Chapters are planned out, unless I go and add more.
Gojyo: Which you probably will.
Maharl100: Well Goku such a good inspiration. :3
Goku: She so mean. She make me do stuff for food.
Maharl100: Your the one who comes to me when your hungry.
Sanzo: Keep it that way. I'm enjoying the piece and quiet.
Maharl100: Haaah.. Sanzo such a good Idea... (Runs into room)
Sanzo: What idea?
Maharl100: (comes back out) Goku put this in your mouth. (hold up ball gag)
Goku: Help me. (Turns away) Candle Jack! Candle Jack! Candle Jack!
Maharl100: He not coming to help you. (Chase after him)
Everyone Else: Sigh...
Taoren46: Well that it for Chapter 17 see you all as soon as Maharl100 Types the next chapter. Bye don't forget to review.