Disclaimer: Warriors belongs to Erin Hunter. I own this plotline and the characters.

Another thing: This story is told by Mudpelt in WindClan, and set in a future WindClan in a possible future. Please do not take this story as offence - I mainly wrote this as to see how a mary-sue/gary-stu is seen by the eyes of their sibling. Updates will not come quick. This chapter is short. You have been warned.

Chapter 1 - Muddy Water

I am the most grateful to have this opportunity to share my thoughts with you.

My name is Mudpelt, and throughout my many years I have been lingering in the dark shadows of my sister; Crystalgaze. Her name was puzzling right from the start; what was crystal? Yet I could quote many of my mother's words...

She seemed... almost special right from the start.

Wherever she went she left a trail of... evil stuff that turned the warriors around her into...

Oh, that's called OOCness? Yes. She did that.

On the fateful day of our apprentice ceremony, our leader, Gorsestar, took one glance at her and, well, his eyes slightly clouded over. Not that my sister noticed, of course. Then something magical happened. Our leader, as if in a trance, didn't even bother speaking the traditional words. He simply acknowledged Crystalgaze, Crystalkit, then, as his apprentice. Then he gestured for the crowd to disband.

As fate would have it, no one noticed his actions except me.

Oh, what did you say? Mary-sues are like that?

So after the meeting I rushed over to him and asked about my ceremony. Gorsestar looked pale. He lowered his head, not bothering to make eye contact with me, and just told me to choose my own mentor.

So I chose the medicine cat, Eagleflight.

Eagleflight was kind, and we spent many joyful hours sitting in the heather den, discussing Crystalpaw. She was delighted to have another who could see through my sister's evil aura, to overcome the power of the OOCness.

Two days after the ceremony Crystalpaw was summoned to fight a great battle between RiverClan and WindClan. I found this curious, as Eagleflight informed me that RiverClan had already agreed on a truce for 6 moons. What was even weirder was that only two warriors were told to go - Crystalpaw and another cat named Toadtail.

Ten minutes, that's right, ten minutes later, they, or should I say she, came back. My sister had come home alone.

I know, weird, right?

My mentor and I rushed to the scene, eager to tend to my sister. Pushing away the crowd, we carefully approached the 'wounded' Crystalpaw. Instead we found Crystalpaw sharing the information of the battle with the crowd.

What did she say? Oh, she told us about how Toadtail died at the start and she tried to save him, so then she avenged his legacy by slaying the RiverClan warriors. Brutal.

Gorsestar didn't even try to tell her that she broke the warrior code. He leaped up onto the Tallstone and called Crystalpaw up. She looked calm and composed, even when she was renamed. The new Crystalgaze meowed towards the crowd and a loud chant rose up from the crowd.

Oh, you think that's weird? Take this.

The next thing that happened was a burst of smoke that covered WindClan. Between coughs, I could make out the slumped bodies of my clanmates, lying motionless. Above them stood none other than my sister; Crystalgaze. The only other survivor was my mentor, my friend. Eagleflight.

Then in one swift move, she raked her claws across Eagleflight's body, spilling scarlet pools of blood.

Even now, I could feel the horror of yowling at my former sister, her eyes staring murderously at me.

But before Crystalgaze could leap out, a purple beam of light trapped me, and the last things I could hear were the voices of the ones that I loved - the leader, Eagleflight, my mother... and the others who had perished that day.

And to conclude my time with you, I really thank you all for transporting me from that savage wasteland to a flourishing woodland. Life is great here - everybody is an equal, everybody is well developed.

Where do I live?

I live in a land where the term mary-sue doesn't go among us, in a suited biome populated with well-developed characters.

Again, do not take this as an offence.