Hey guys AuthorSkills here with the fixed version of Chapter 2

I will be working on Chapter 3 next they are the ones I noticed the most to have the most references in them

Chapter 2

The tiger stood extremely still with the fact in her mind that this human had just taken off her chains. She looked at him strangely for a second before walking up to this man and hugging him. Jack just patted her on the back accepting the hug he did just he guessed saved her life. Jack just stood there and then finally said, "Well now that we are finished with the whole chains off slavery is wrong stuff, what is your name?" The tiger looked at the man still not fully trusting him yet but then slowly answered, "Nara, my name is Nara." Jack nodded his head this poked a memory but he did not want to bring it up right now. He then told Nara, "Well hello then Nara, my name is Jack." Nara nodded her head not wanting to say much he guessed that she was extremely tired. Jack turned around and went to go set his things down on the ground by the wall. Reaching down on the ground he grabbed a pair of sweatpants and a t-shirt out of his bag and walked over to the small washroom that was in one corner of the room. Jack took off his boots and his BDU and set them on the counter. He then threw on his sweatpants and t-shirt and walked back out of the washroom. When he got out of the washroom he saw that Nara was lying on the ground asleep. He walked over to his bag and set his BDU in his bag. He then walked over to Nara picked her up and carried her to the bed. Nara woke up in Jack's arms and had a scared look in her eyes. Jack the said, "Did you really think that I would make you sleep on the floor? Well if you did you were completely wrong I will be sleeping on the floor you madam get the bed." Nara was going to argue but did not have enough energy to do so and she was way too tired. Jack walked over and pulled a bedroll out of his bag a laid it out on the ground and then hoped on top of it closing his eyes. That was the longest feeling day in his life.

Jack woke up and heard the birds chirping outside of his window. He sat up to see that he was laying on a bedroll meaning none of what happened the day before was just a dream it was all real and there. He then looked over at the bed where he saw Nara still sleeping it brought up a memory but he suppressed it. He packed up all of his things and got dressed in his BDU again and put all the rest of his things on. After that he walked over and woke Nara up she slowly got up and got ready and after a few minutes they set off. They walked downstairs and Jack paid the innkeeper. The innkeeper had something on his mind but Jack could not read what it was so Jack just walked out of the door. The innkeeper then walked over to a guard that was nearby and said, "That man that just left my inn has freed his slave." The guard jumped to his feet saying, "Men lets go kill us a Keidran Freedom lover!" His men agreed with him as they exited the inn. Jack didn't stop for any supplies he had plenty from the Slavers that he would not need any more supplies until the next town. They kept walking until a guard stepped out of nowhere and swung his sword at him. Jack barely dodged it as the guard yelled, "Die you Keidran Freer!" Jack just started running dragging Nara behind him he realized that he was being followed by five guards and there was three coming from in front. Just the perfect number that is how many rounds were in his 1911's magazine. He pulled out his pistol and told Nara, "Cover your ears." Nara did what he told her to do and covered her ears. Jack turned around and fired five shots in rapid succession each hitting its target as the five Guards dropped to the ground dead. Jack then turned around seeing the three more Guards advancing. Jack fired three quick shots and two hit as one went off in a random direction and killed some random farmers pig that he was trying to sell. The last guard kept running at him in rage of his fallen brothers. As the last guard drew near Jack holstered his 1911 and drew his combat knife. As the Guard went for a huge sideways slash Jack blocked it with his knife and twisted around the guard slitting his thought afterwards. Nara looked surprised at his skill and Jack said, "Come on we need to keep moving." Nara and Jack kept running through the streets towards the exit. Jack could see the exit as it was in his grasp and then an armored hand came out of nowhere and smashed into his face. Jack dropped to the ground and the guard hopped on top of him. Little did the guard now that Jack was holding the knife and it had dropped from his hand right to Nara's feet she picked it up ran up to the guard and stabbed him in the back. The guards face went pale as he realized that he had just been stabbed Jack threw the guard off of him grabbed Nara and started to run again. Jack and Nara had made it passed the gate guards who somehow had no clue that any of this was happening but shortly after started chasing them as well. Jack and Nara kept running as fast as they could they got to the woods and still kept running they ran until they ran out of breath. Jack looked around and saw that no one had followed them. Jack then saw that it was starting to get dark, they must have been running for a while. Jack started to set up camp starting with a small fire not wanting to attract any unwanted attention to them and then he started to set up their tents. Nara sat by the small fire and watched as Jack kept setting up the tent she had no idea how to set up a tent she had never done it before she would always sleep under the stars. Jack then turned around after finishing setting up the tent and walked over to fire pulling up a log to sit on.

Hey guys AuthorSkills that was the end of Fixed Chapter 2

If you liked please tell me I am going to go work on Chapter 3 the hardest one out of all of them.

-AuthorSkills