Hey guys AuthorSkills here to say that I Have completely fixed everything thanks for waiting for me it did not even take the days that I was expecting mostly because I decided to do it all now and not late Chapters 1-2 I had to completely rewrite and do again they were just too much like Wolfsalvo's story.
I did a few bits of editing in chapter three mostly with the fight seen and the I did a few in chapters four and five just fixing things that would not have much since due to the new edits.
Thanks for waiting the whole two or so hours it took me to fix these problems for now I am going to be tomarrow I will start work on chapter 6 but it most likely will not be out until the next day since I will be taking my time on it and make sure that it turns out good for my first chapter of me not having to go through and edit it. I have already sent an apology to Wolfsalvo about the problem and now that I have fixed that problem I can go to bed realizing now that I have fixed it and now have not copied from Wolfsalvo
(His main character buys and frees, mine kills them all and frees)
BIG DIFFERENCE
So this means now that I will see you either in the reviews or on chapter six I am still taking in suggestions and never will stop.
Now I plan on making this story stop at a point where I can make a sequel to it I have a few ideas for a sequel none that I will share with you now.
If you have any ideas I will be glad to look into them
This is AuthorSkills saying goodbye for now
-AuthorSkills