Hey guys I'm back with chapter 3 and do send me your oc in the reviews if you want to be in the story *MWHAHAHAHA*

Oc's I own Jake, Najee goes to Najee, and Asher

Chapter 3 YOU'RE DEAD

While I looked at the ceteia I got a sick smile. (Slap) "WHAT THE **** TWILIGHT!" I yelled in confusion. "NOPONY IS GOING TO THE PRINCESS UNTILL I SAY OKAY!" she shouted loud enough for everyone to hear. "**** twilight clam the **** down." Najee said with a stern voice. As the princess heard this she came to see what the confusion was about. "Buck cletia heard me." twilight said while pouting. But it felt like I was struck by lightning. "**** tha-..." that was all I could say before I passed out from the pain.

? Point of view

'He's mine ALL MINE' I wanted to just kill him and get it over with "WAKE UP! WAKE UP BUCKING DUDE!" I yelled at this creature to wake up but it was not working. *Sigh* "DUDE WAKE UP!" at last the creature woke up. "WHERE THE **** AM I!" The creature yelled in fear. "Hey sweet lips." I said seductively and he fell for it. "H-h-hi t-t-there." The creature said while shaking like a rock. "So how about you come here and find out who I am." I said teasing this creature. "My name is Jake w-what's yours." I was shocked that he could talk because most of my victims couldn't even speak after I lured them in.

Jake's Point of view

'DUDE WHAT THE *** ARE YOU DOING! **** STOP' and I somehow snapped myself out of the trance, but still faking I said. "Kiss me baby." as she closed her eyes I got my knife and slit her neck (no that's not the end) as she bled I ran to find myself in some forest. I saw an old path with grass in the stone so I followed the path to find a railroad track. "What the **** is this." I asked in confusion. But as I saw a train coming I jumped on the train.

20 min. later

The train stopped as I saw a grand castle and I got off the train. "HOLY **** IM AT A **** CASTLE." To my surprise I found myself face to face with the princess. "**** GET **** OUT OF MY FACE!" But I soon realized that it was the princess so I slapped myself "oh I'm sorry princess celsita can you forgive me." I said as I bowed down to her and celsita blushed at this. "My dear you don't have to bow to Me." celsita said to me in a motherly voice. I blushed deeply. "Your highness I didn't mean to yell at you. I just got scared that's all." She looked at me confused. "Well please don't do it again." she said. There was a long pause between us I broke the quiet. "So your highness how do you get to rainbow dashes house." I asked with worry in my voice. "Oh call me celsita please you don't have to call me highness. And to get to ponyville you take that train." I turned to see the train leave. "**** there goes the train." I said depressed I looked at my phone to see a new text message on it saying 'where are you' so I texted back saying 'I'm in a castle with the princess' and clesita looked at my phone confused. "What is that device I might ask?" "Your high-I mean clestia it's called a phone." she stared at me with amazement. "Um can I help you princess." and instantly snapped out of her trance. "Oh sorry. How does it work?" she asked with such care in her voice and I could see why she was the queen. "Well you see-" "YOU THOUGHT YOU KILLED ME DIDN'T YOU." I was taken by pure fear now (gulp) "I DIDN'T KILL YOU HOLY **** NOOOOOOOOO!" then the princess's horn glowed white and a laser was fired at this pony yet the pony dodged it and fired back with a blue laser. I pulled out my sword and slashed at this evil pony. Rainbow dash was fling by when she hear the noise. "Oh no not the princess." she flew down and got in the throne room. She was shocked to see me fighting a pony "AHHHHH!" I shouted out as I swung my sword at the pony. "Stop Jake that's my friend." I froze and dropped my sword. "No no NOOOOO!" I yelled in terror as I was about to kill a pony for no cause. She grabbed my sword and drew it on me. "Take that you bucker!" the pony yelled at me. I pulled out my knife and cut her legs. "OW YOU SON OF AN APPLE" she yelled as I took my sword out of her mouth. Rainbow dash looked at me shocked then after a while she slapped me. "WHAT'S WITH ALL THE **** SLAPPING!" I figured that she slapped me for hurting her friend. "Asher is you ok?" the black pony glared at me with anger in her eyes. I started to feel fear well up in me. Her eyes stared in my soul as I held my sword up.

Asher's point of view

'Buck that guy is strong. I'll have to sneak to him and kill him from behind.' as I thought about my plan to kill this creature it hit me like a rock. 'I got to take his sword from him.' "Oh the pain, ow-ow-ow my legs." I faked I could stand the pain. "I'm sorry but you tried to kill me and I don't like it when someone tries to kill me." I tried to lure him closer to me so I could take his sword but no luck so broke into a full sprint for the sword. "GIVE ME THAT SWORD!" I yelled at the top of my lungs but he outsmarted me and the sword turned into a chain sword I stopped at this and tried to run but by the time I turn he whipped me. "AGH BUCK THAT HURTS!" I saw cut and burn marks where he whipped me. 'oh apple that's not good' I said to myself as my costume burnt off they were all shocked but not this creature who seemed to be as ruthless to kill me so I teleported to safety from this creature. "Whew that was close. Glad he's gone. I don't think that I can kill him that easy." I sighed a big relief and thought about the plan one again 'I think I should leave him for now' I thought to myself.

Jake's point of view

"WHERE ARE YOU SON OF A ****!" I yelled while in a fenzey. 'That'll teach her not to mess with me.' I thought to myself in anger. "Celesita what was that creature?" I asked awkwardly. The princess blushed at that question and did not answer for a while. "I'm not sure." that answer struck me still (face looks like O.O) "W-w-what?" I said in confusion. Then rainbow dash hit me like lightning I flew back and hit the throne. "**** man what was that for rainbow." I yelled in pain as she raised a hoof at me I only prepared for pain but instead felt pleasure as she rubbed her hoof on my member. She pick me up went at supersonic speeds and a rainbow circle bursted out as she started kissing me passionately I kissed back. "Rainbow...dash I... love... kissing you." I said out loud not thinking. I slipped out of rainbow's reach. "NOOOOOOO!" rainbow dash yelled in fear for me. She did another sonic rainboom and miraculously saved my life. "Let's get a room next time ok?" I said sarcastically. "Deal Jake. But for now let's rest my lover." I snapped out of my trance. "HOLY **** DID WE MAKE OUT!" I yelled in fear. She looked at me and giggled. "Yea we did and at supersonic speed too." she said seductively. As the noob was I fell for it. "Ready for round 2." I said looking into her eyes lustfully. "This time in the room hehe." (Warning sex scene you have been warned) I chunked my clothes across the room. "I'm ready dashy." I said seductively. She jumped on me pushing me on the bed. "So… good… mmph you… a mmph good… kisser…" she muttered out. As my member hardened I flipped her over and now I was on top. "Ready for this." I said with a sly look on my face. 'Yes yes YES' I yelled in my mind with pure joy and lust. I started to thrust in and out causing rainbow dash to moan with pleasure. "YES! SPANK ME JAKE!" rainbow dash yelled loud enough for the whole world could hear us. I slapped her flank causing her more pleasure. She flipped me over and started to ride me. "OH DASH! OH COME ON!" I yelled in pure pleasure. (Lazy brony skip)

3 hours later

"That was awesome." Rainbow dash sighed with joy. "Never had that before. MAN THAT WAS AWESOME!" I yelled in excitement. I grabbed my clothes and put them on and walked out and saw the mane 6. I went wide eye and blushed instantly. "Um your probably wandering what me and dash were doing." I said that only to blush even harder. "Oh no we already know right dash." Twilight said. a pony with a cowboy hat on its head stood next to twilight. "Who's that standing next to you twilight?" I asked with confusion on my face. "Howdy there I'm apple jack and I hear your name's Jake right?" the pony asked me. "Yea m-my name's J-Jake apple jack." 'OH MY GOD THERE'S A REDNECK PONY HERE' I thought in my head.

Asher's point of view

"so he met the mane 6. hum this could be to my advantage." I said to myself.

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