It's kind of hard writing 2 stories at once so please understand that I sometimes might focus on Once Upon a Divergent (my other fanfiction which is a crossover between Once Upon a Time and Divergent) for a period of time and sometimes I'll focus on this fanfic for a period of time. If you're looking for a fanfiction which updates more, make sure to check out Daniagogo's How it All Began. She's a great writer (I know her irl) and she's been getting some hate. I want to get her as many views as possible and I want good supportive reviews. Supportive reviews don't have to be "I like it." . You don't have to like it. All Daniagogo needs is suggestions. You could tell her "Maybe Sam could eat macaroni." She'll accept your suggestion and think about putting it in her story. You could even say "This style of Divergent fanfic isn't my type but I have some suggestions for your story." So go check that fanfic out. Sometimes, we brainstorm ideas for each other's fanfics. Like in the last chapter, those pranks were her and her brother's ideas. If you read How It All Began, you could be reading some of my ideas too.
And finally, for the part where I talk about my story. Writing this fanfic is so much fun I'm thinking of creating a sequel. Not sure what it will be about so on the last chapter of this first story, I will be asking for suggestions on what should happen in the sequel. I have a general idea but it could use some tweaking.
Chapter theme songs:Part of Me by Katy Perry, Ain't it fun by Paramore
Jake woke up with a gasp. "ANTS! GET THEM OFF ME NOW!"
"What's wrong?" I asked hiding my smile. His pink hair blew in the wind.
"ANTS! WAS I SLEEPING ON AN ANT NEST? I HATE ANTS!"
"Aww! My ex's afraid of ants!" I laughed.
"Aww! My ex's also afraid of ants!" Mikayla giggled.
"GET THEM OFF OF ME!" Tears were streaming down his face. Behind him stood Sam, Carly and George. He turned to face them. "HELP!"
"Can't do that, ." Sam said.
"Cheater?" He gasped.
"That's what the writing on your face says. Thought I'd believe it." Sam shrugged. "By the way, nice moustache."
"And I really like your hair colour. The pink really brings out your eyes." Carly laughed.
"In case you didn't get the message, Mikayla and I aren't easily fooled." I said. For some reason, I just don't feel sad he's done this to me anymore.
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"Everyone remember the plan?" Sam asked.
"Wait! I can't wait alone!" Mikayla said.
"I'll stay with her." George smiled.
"How do we enter the building?" I asked. We hadn't really discussed it.
"You need special permission from someone inside the building and we've got that." Jake smiled.
"How?"
"It's a long story."
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"What is this place?" I asked. We had went through a door behind the dumpster. I stood gasping at the huge room we were in. Everywhere we looked, we saw metal. It was some sort of laboratory. There was a metal chair far from rusting.
"Hello." A woman said. She stepped out into the light.
"7456." I gasped.
"It's Fury, now." She said. "Everyone except pink hair and 7498 leave go through the door behind me." They walked out. "So, what do you call yourself?"
"Free."
"You'll never be free." She said darkly. There was something odd about her. "Jake, what happened to your face? It's all red. I have scissors in the washroom if you want to get rid of the hair." They know each other? Jake walked out too.
"So." I cleared my throat.
"See this?" She said pointing to a scar on her nose. "You did it to me. You ruined my moment. That's why I call myself Fury."
"I call myself Free because I'm finally free to be who I want to be."
"Sit." I sat on the chair nervously. She pressed a button and out of nowhere, I was tied to the chair. "His name isn't Jake. His name is Titan and he's been spying on the factionless for us. Of course, this secret's gonna die with you." I'm confused, really confused.
"Hello." A man stepped in. I instantly recognized him as Jacob Prior. Kendra looks so much like him. He kissed Fury on her forehead. "Introduce me, Fury."
"Jacob Prior, government official, leader of Sharp, Divergent hunter and my husband." Husband? HUSBAND? "And we're gonna kill you right here, and right now." Titan walked out the washroom bald. "Welcome back, Titan. I was just about to explain to her the plan. Have you ever heard of Cancer?"
"Yes. Isn't it an old illness?"
"Not quite as old as you think." Jacob said.
"When the government was making people genetically damaged, it discovered how Cancer runs in a family. It's something in the DNA code. They also discovered how to alter the DNA code so the Cancer kicks in immediately and stronger than ever. That will be our last resort today. We want to see how you'll react to the Death Serum. Only one Divergent has ever resisted it and she died right after from a bullet." Fury smiled. "Goodbye, Free."
I was left alone in the room. Leave this horrible world. Leave them to deal with all these problems. You can go to a world where you don't have to worry. No. I want to help them. Why? They'll just let you down like everyone does. I don't want to be like those very few people. I'm not gonna let them down. I won't. Leave them! You'll be happier! No. I shook my head. It was over. None of it was real. They walked in again.
"Cancer it is." Fury smiled. I was put to sleep. I couldn't feel it but they were altering my DNA code. I woke up. Everything hurt. I felt like I was being ripped apart. I was weak. The thoughts that were put in my head from the death serum returned. I can't resist. I can't control any of my bodyparts. I'm dizzy. Everything's spinning around. I feel nauseous. I'm dying.
Cliff hanger! Anyways, I don't know what exactly happens when you've got cancer so let's just pretend that because it was made stronger, this is what happens.