Important Author's Note

A lot of people are telling me that I underpowered Naruto and am underestimating the Naruto-verse or know nothing about it. While I'll give a pass to those who were told me in a gentle way; I'm not giving a pass to you assholes who gave a temper tantrum coming out the wetworks; each and every one of you know who you are. Also, to the guest who are looking for asking me to work on my grammar and find a beta, I'm a new author who has less than a years worth of writing fics. Do you think I would be able to find someone who's willing to beta me? This is also how I talked so it's going to be difficult for me to use proper grammar.

Also, I don't care if you hated this fic and I lost your interest. I write for my pleasure and if you enjoy it then good for you. If you don't like it, then you know where the back button, the red X and other ways to get away. If you have constructive critisism then I would appreciate it but I don't like Flames just because most flamers don't have anything useful to say.

Granted, they are a few who are good but their tempers get the best of them and I get those guys from time to time. After a talk, they cool off and explain what made them so pissed.

Chapter 6 AN:

If you haven't read my AN clearly for the first time. Go back and read it, I specifically state if it was PURE HAND-TO-HAND and PHYSICAL STRENGTH. Will it be that way? HELL NO!

First off, shinobi are trained to lie,cheat and used under-handed methods. It's dirty fighting but it's still fighting. The Masters of Ryozanpaku and Yami are all honor-bound by the martial arts code of honor such as Wu De and Bushido (The Way of the Sword.) Yomi always follow the code of conduct to a certain degree but they always include killing those fall to their fists.

It's the reason why Yomi was the one who fought against Kenichi and not the masters themselves. Weird form of honor but still honor all the same.

The second reason lies with the the Chakra Pathways which will be talked about in the next segment.

Chakra Pathways:

How did Naruto, who's the dead-last and the idiot managed to outrun grown Chunin and Jonin along with ANBU in some of the fics I've read? So I searched for an answer that was at least scientific and what I came up was thanks to the Korean Manwha, The Breaker along with it's sequel, The Breaker:New Waves.

So here's my theory, in The Breaker, they had something called a Ki center. It was used to strengthen their bodies and used for combat purposes along with their marital arts. When the main character's Ki center was broken, he lost his ability to actually use and sense Ki. He reverted back from a tanker who can take damage from men twice his age that can kill a civilian with a pinkie to a person that only can fight against civilians or people who don't know how to use Ki.

Using this as my basis, I hypothesis that the chakra pathways are always active, the body subconsciously use chakra to enhance the muscles of the people of the Elemental Nations. The denser the chakra is, the more the strength is enhanced. Lee is unable to use Chakra outside of his body but his body was strong enough to allow even more chakra into his muscles thanks to his inhuman by the shinobi standards training. It'll probably be better for this theory if his chakra was dense as well.

The body is a wonderful thing, it wants to live to the fullest that it will do nearly anything to survive including shutting off all non-essential body systems to increase efficiency in essential body systems such as brain,heart and lungs. The body must realize that chakra will increased it's chances for survival and evolved itself to using the energy to the point where it's always active.

However, this leaves the question of how the body knows about how much the muscles are able to handle. My guess is that the body is able to instinctual knowing how much is needed and how much it can handle but this factor is overwritten to conscious decision-making process.

Thus, without chakra most of the superhuman feats are not possible. I don't know if this is cannon but it's my theory for this fic and I'm following it to the very end.

Ancestor of The Shinobi People of The Elemental Nations:

Now, there's a plot hole in Naruto I would like to be answered. According to the Wiki, Hagromo Otsutsuki was the one who spread the use of Chakra to the world. That means very few if anyone at all was using Chakra or a form that was similar to it meaning no one was using chakra as we know it. What I would like to know is about the original shinobi ancestors.

I loved to study the history of a people which is why I'm curious about the ancestors of the shinobi people. All I know about them is that they were warriors and caused wars to happen nearly constantly. If I knew about them, I can at least judge the evolutionary process which allowed their superhuman feats or so of their descendants. Until then, I'm going to treat the shinobi as a humanoid species with enhanced strength,speed and agility but they will have their physical limits.

A second question is if there any other forms of energy that was used such as magic or Ki that fell out of practice due to Ninshu appearing? This is something I really would like to know. I'm sure shinobi humanity would know about different ways to war especially if they're war-hungry like the Sayians of Dragonball Z.

Shinju and Chakra relationship?:

According to Darwin's Theory, thanks to the Sage of Six Paths. Shinobi had a new weapon to wage war with, Chakra. As such, their bodies evolved to better handle this energy which led to the Chakra Pathways along with Eight Gates and Tenketsu to the point where they can no longer live without it such as the case of Chiyo who used all of her chakra leading to her death reviving Gaara.

However, according to the Wiki, all chakra originated from the Shinju so I would like to know why Chakra is made of Physical and Mental Energy of a person from the Elemental Nations if it belonged to the Shinju. If it was something like, borrowing from the Juubi's chakra from high up in the sky I wouldn't mind as much since it was originally the Shinju before the whole Juubi thing. I still cannot understand the relationship between the two. I've looked around in forums,discussion threads, etc... nor do I know about the relationship between Chakra and the Juubi.

Faster than Light Speed:

I don't know why lots of authors like to do this but they loved to have people faster than light speed despite how physical bodies should not be able to handle that kind of speed no matter how much training you've had if you have a physical body. Bleach gets a free pass on this since it mostly deals with the soul through I will complain on how Uruahara created a device that switches your physical body to make it your spiritual body in season 1 and the mod souls but that one is a nitpick. Do you people know what faster than light actually means? It's means that it's faster than sound.

I would like you to watch this video on YouTube, /watch?v=gWGLAAYdbbc. It's actually an educational video on a jet going supersonic. Then, I want to realize that shinobi are according to the temper tantrums throwers and the kind people who are telling me I got it wrong, are telling me that children at twelve years of age at the very least or even younger can go faster than that with no . Tell that me that's not bullshit if you're did look at it.

Assassination Classroom has a thing called Koro-Sensei that can go at Mach 20. I would like to call bullshit on it but at least they had the decency to take in the sound barrier among other things at going at high-speeds. I know that the Elemental Nations is different but it should have the same laws of nature even if they give the middle finger to nature.

Reaction Reflex:

This one I won't chew on since I agree with you guys on this part. A person's reflex is usually made of two things;intuition,instincts and the ability to take in information as a whole through your senses.

That's all I can think for the moment and I have to sigh at the extremism that people showed. Seriously, you make a small mistake then they're out to murder you in your sleep. Since Fanfic rules stated I can't have a non-entry to the story, here's a small chapter cause I'm so pissed that I can't make it bigger.


Chapter Start

Naruto was walking down a road to the nearest park after a meeting Odin concerning him and his men. He didn't liked this world at all; too much technology and not enough forest and wildlife. He may be biased but he loved the environment that he was born in except for the villagers who would always ignore him due to the furball inside of his stomach. As he walked, he could feel someone was watching him.

He could feel amusement, sarcasm and bloodlust coming from the person. As he walked, a blue-haired man wearing a jacket that exposed his chest. The strange thing was that he had bird motiffs on his clothing to a bird tattoo just under his eye.

As the two walked past one another, the bird guy turned around and a straight punch as Naruto blocked it by catching it. The bird man looked like he was in joy,"Not bad, perhaps you're not a insect that I thought you were. So you've been upgraded from insect to weak dog."

Naruto for some reason was reminded of his Aburame friend,Shino and his Inuzuka friend, Kiba who would be insulted by this guy,"And who are you?"

The bird guy then performed a round-house kick,"Those who can't fly don't need to know my name." Naruto blocked it with his forearm as before he snaked out and grabbed his arm but the bird guy wasn't there. Instead, he was behind in the air as he spun for a kick while looking majestic. Naruto dodged by bending his back.

The ninth Fist turned around and grabbed the leg before using it to pull himself closer in order to initiate a knee attack into the chest. While it connected, the bird guy also landed three punches with one hand into the jaw as the other tried to stop to push him away. As both landed away from each other, the bloodlust increased heavily.

The bird guy grinned,"I'll admit, I didn't expect a dog with weak fangs like you to be able to even land a single attack on a bird like me. You should at least learn my name then. It's Shou Kano." Nauto merely spit out some spit as he looked unimpressed,"Is that you got cause I'll be disappointed if it was."

Kano was pissed that he was written off by someone who was underneath him that he entered a stance,"You know I was being a nice guy letting things go easy but if you want me to get a little serious then you're going to get it then." Naruto could feel the same kind of energy that was flowing through his body going through his enemy before Shou disappeared from sight.

It was what remained of Naruto's reaction reflexes that he dodged the kick before it was followed up with another kick. Kano was surprised that the the dog was able to block his kick and looked into his eyes and knew that he wasn't facing a dog but something that had more fangs. Naruto then grabbed Kano and brought him closer to go for a kill strike against the neck.

Kano twisted his body and received a light bruise on his chest. Kano stumbled back a bit as his eyes widened. This was the first time that he received a wound not from a master or someone who was older than him. He didn't know what was going on, usually this was where his opponents fell to his fists. But then again, this was someone that Yami wanted for some time now.

Kano entered a karate stance as he rushed forward with a spinning hand knife as he called out,"Jinenken-Nejiri Nukite!(Spinning God Hand)" and actually landed the hit causing his opponent to stumble as he pierced through the right shoulder. Shou smirked that the move had worked but the smugness ceased when one of Naruto's hands grabbed Shou's arm.

The blue-haired boy looked in an surprise as he saw a bastardized version of the Jinenken-Nejiri Nukite from his opponeent and roared as the knife-hand went into his gut. Shou gasp as he fell to his knees and Naruto prepared to finish him off by aiming the knife-hand right into the neck.

'He's not a weak dog nor an insect. Rather, he's something else, something I've never seen before.' Sho thought as he closed his eyes and accepted his death as was the custom of losing a fight.

Naruto was going to finish this foe off when his dulled senses could tell an immense amount of blood thirst coming for him. He jumped backwards as a black trenchcoat wearing man with glasses and long pointed ears took Shou and grabbed a ladder as a helicopter floated from above turned on it's lights and started to fly away as the man climbed up the ladder.

Naruto gave chase and wondered if the energy inside him now could be used similar to chakra. He knew from using it earlier that he could strengthen his body but he didn't know could he use it to wall-climb or boost his leg strength at the critical moment. Well, no time like the present to test it out, Naruto then jumped from one of the side of the house and grabbed the ladder; it then slacked and the Ninth Fist fell to the ground.

When he reached the ground, Naruto looked up to see that the pointy-ear man had entered the helicopter and was just closing the door. He knew that they were out of his range along with a feeling that they would meet again and when they do, one of them was going to die and it was probably going to be him. Through, perhaps it would be best to sharpen his instincts and fighting strength again if he was going to be fighting people like the pointy-ear man and those people from the dojo again.

Naruto didn't like the place, it felt peaceful and he was sure he would've loved it if he was younger but he was a killing machine now; peaceful times were nothing more than a itch to him that he just had to scratch.

Naruto looked at his hand and practiced his imitated version that he nicked from his latest opponent. He didn't know the specifics of how he could steal taijutsu techniques like this except that he could. Most of the techniques that he stole worked with perfect accuracy to the point that body size and weight didn't matter, he was able to change it to suit his own body size. But for some reason, this technique along with a few moves that he learned from Hermit when he was throwing a temper tantrum didn't work as well for him.

The only reason he was able to pull it off was because ROOT had a move that was very similar that didn't require any chakra, only pure strength. Naruto continued practing it for a bit before he realized he was bleeding. Removing his jacket and using his shirt as a quick bandage, he nodded at his work. It should hold until he reached Hermit's place, he shouldn't mind if he borrow some first-aid equipment.


Helicopter

Akira Hongo had set his student into one of the chairs as he removed the jacket in order to disinfect the wound. Shou was barely conscious as he continued losing blood,"Master,why did you save me? I lost, don't you remember what it means?"

Akira just applied bandages tightly to Shou's abdomen,"I never forgot but what you did was never a formal match. It was reconnaissance on the fighting strength of a potential agent. He was stronger than you anticipated and you had to back out and called it a draw."

Shou began to fall deeper into unconsciousness,"When you carrying me up to this abomination, I saw it Master. On that boy, he had wings but he was not a bird. He had fangs and talons as well. I want him..." Shou then fell unconscious as he slumped over the seats.

God's Hand merely gave a sigh as he finished bandaging,"Perhaps this will teach you that there is always someone more skilled or stronger than you. You should always go all out even if they are weaker than you."


Done, How Naruto was able to imitate moves from other fighters will be better explained later but it's entirely possible for it to happen. Now,seriously I have a headache and have to lay down.

Fun Fact about this: I had two other scenarios to tell you people about this. One was a first-person where you were trapped in a room where I would instruct as you were strapped into a chair military-style complete with a video, a person ranting and raving how shinobi were gods compared to humans and Zeltrech from Type-Moon.

The second scenario was where you had opened your Browser but it took you to a video of me where I offer you the choice of looking at the link or just thinking it was a scam. Then,I died as ROOT Agents killed me on screen.