Authors Note- Hey guys there is really no accuse for not updating yesterday. I could lie and say I was busy doing summer reading, or I could tell you the truth and that is that I was just not feeling what I wrote so I deleted it. Hopefully this time it will be better, well enough rambling on with the story.
Disclaimer- I do not own this story; if I did I would not be writing this story now would I?
Max POV
When I was done saying hello to everyone I knew I had to stop putting off, so I stopped holding Midnight, and I walked slowly into the room. When I was in the middle I looked around at all my friends and I smiled, my eyes still pouring tears out, and I walked over to the couch and I sat down. And I looked over to Angela, and nodded showing that I was ready to hear what was wrong, and why I was unable to speak.
"Child, I'm very sorry and know that if I could fix what the problem was I would." I stiffened when I felt her say that and I knew something terrible was most likely coming soon. "What I found through my quick search was that the waves your brain sends out to the different muscles, and bones. The wavelength that sends things out to your vocal chords is damaged beyond repair of a magician. With enough time it might repair itself, but I nor any magician can fix it without putting mental damage in your mind" Angela said softly with tears leaking out of her eyes. What I know and most others don't is that Angela sees me as a daughter and she hates it when I'm hurt. And then it hit me I couldn't speak! Not now maybe not ever, this is horrible, not only will I not be able to tell people how I feel, I might not be able to cast spells at this point either. "I did find good news though, your last attack was so severe that it sent all of your white blood cells to repair all of the other damage that there was previously. The pain you feel during the attacks is not from the attacks itself. Your body is trying to knock you out like it just did so it can focus its energy on repairing itself so the damage you suffered from Durza's attack is fixed your mind is stable but it will still hurt until that part that he damaged your thought are properly stretched. Think of it as you pulled a muscle and weren't allowed to move it for a long time, then when it's healed it hurts until it is used enough again." Angela told us all.
I couldn't take it anymore though; I put all of my thoughts to it knowing this would hurt. But it worked, I made a sound, or more like I screamed super loud. Showing them to stop talking for a moment and to pay attention. When I finally had their attention, I walked around in circles trying to figure out hoe to do it. I put up a finger, motioning give me a minute and I darted from the room, but while I left I heard Eragon trying to protest but I ran as fast as possible, in my weakened state though I wasn't fast enough, he caught me.
"Where are you going Max, I can't let you out of my sight out of fear you might have another attack? Why are you always like this running around all the time not even dropping a single clue!"
Knowing the pain I was going to cause myself I stretched my mind into his and I quickly dismantled his barriers and slipped inside and waited for him to notice me. When he did I used my mid and sent a thought paper and pencil (AN-Were there pencils back in this time period?) Then I sent one more, a person running. Then I retreated to my own mind. When I finally had my barriers back up I came out of my trance and shook my head, then did I realize he was talking to me.
"Max are you ok!? I'm so sorry why didn't I just trust you it's my fault. If I hadn't followed you and questioned you, you wouldn't be in pain. It's all my fault! Why am I so stupid." Eragon continued like this for a long time, and I was getting really mad for some reason. So I focused on that energy and I let it go, but how it came out surprised both of us.
"Eragon just shut up for one freakin moment so I can concentrate ok! I mean seriously it was just one headache. Just shut the hell up ok!" And then I saw him staring in shock and I was confused for a moment when it hit me. I had just spoken, then m vision gained black spots, and I started to stumble, but Eragon noticed and he caught me but I started to cough violently, and my eyes grew wide as I continued to cough and cough and cough when I realized I couldn't breathe. I started to hit him trying to get him to understand, but the big dummy known as Eragon didn't realize it until I stopped coughing and I reached for my throat made the chocking gesture and continued to hit him until my hits got super gentle and I stopped Then I blacked out with Eragon screaming no.
Eragon POV
When Max fell I rushed over and caught her but she started to cough violently. I was confused did she have a cold or was she clearing her throat. Then she started to hit me really hard and I was thinking what did she want. When she stopped hitting me and made the chocking motion and she started to hit me again. When I felt her hits start to get gentler it finally clicked she couldn't breathe. Then she stopped moving, breathing, and living she was gone. "NOOOOOOO!" I screamed so loud I am sure everyone heard. The first thing I did was check for a pulse I immediately started to do CPR. But it was not working but I continued to do this for at least 5 more minutes before I heard the gasp and the rush of air entering her lungs and I saw her chest rising and falling and I smiled she was going to be ok.
Sorry guys for the short chapter I m not just feeling it I have the basic idea of what I want to write I just can't seem to get it out either way though next chapter they are starting their journey to the elves majestic forest!
