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after Tris gets shot...
URIAH POV
I still can't open the doors. Nobody comes here. I'm all alone. I get nightmares nearly every night, usually when I think of Marlene, but sometimes I think of Zeke and four and dauntless before the war, those nights I sleep peacefully, I see Christina, tris and four, mostly they are crying, but when I wake up I find new things, games and pictures of my friends but never Marlene...
Tonight it is different, I don't see Christina or tris or four, tonight I see Zeke and my mum. They are crying. I can't bare seeing them in such distress. it reminds me too much of when my dad died. Maybe that's what's happened to me...
am I dead?
no
I can't be deaths that way
As I get up I examine the doors. Sometimes if I use enough will power I can nudge the life door open a bit, but it closes soon after.
Sometimes I can nudge the death door open if I calm down and slow my hart rate, but it always shuts again.
I walk back to my bed. But then I notice something. On the bed. There's a girl. well I think there a girl. They have short hair but they definitely have breasts.
I walk up to her. She opens her eyes. Blue and gray eyes.
tris
"TRISSY" I hug her so tight I think she's chocking. I let go "sorry" i say quietly
"Uriah?" she says "your alive!"
Alive?
Im not sure
"am i?" I say "I don't feel like it"
She laughs at that. Its so good to see her not crying.
I know its so short but I while ago I wrote this chapter but it didn't save so I apologize. I'll write more soon. Please comment/review.
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DHH