Hi Guys.
So glad you are all liking my story.
Now I have good news and bad news.
Last night I tried to upload chapter 4 as a bonus chapter to chapter 3. Fanfiction just would not work for me last night so I could not upload it.
Chapter 4 was only 1500 words so it was only going to ever be a bonus chapter. Because I could not put it out yesterday, I have added chapter 4 to chapter five for this update so you have 2 chapters rolled into one.
That unfortunately means that this is now a 5 part story and the conclusion will be uploaded tomorrow.
Thats the bad news.
Good news is will be participating in the writing contest on the Facebook group and I have already sent in my entry. You just wont now which one it is until its all over and the winner is announced. Then I will post my entry as a one shot on fan fiction.
Also, now that this one is out of the way, I can get to work on my other story.
Hope you like this up date ;)
Cheers
GG89 xoxo
Christians POV
I make my way upstairs and I am half way between laughing and being angry. I knew that banner would enrage her. It took me ages to make it last night but it was so worth it.
It takes me a good five minutes to calm down enough and stop laughing when I think of her reaction. What a fire cracker she really is. I bet shes a real wild cat in bed. My dick stirs at the thought but then I get angry.
I can't be attracted to Ana Steele! Shes so stubborn and argumentative! But she is hot. There is no doubt about that. But she could never be what I need. Not in bed or out of it.
Because of my touch issues I have to hold my bed mates hands during sex or use handcuffs. Most of the women I have been with have been OK with it and most love it but there have been the odd few that have called me a freak.
The only woman I have ever had more than a one night stand with is Lelia. She was the girl I lost my virginity too when I was 19. Over the years we have hooked up at parties and sometimes when I am really horny I will call her and she comes running but Lelia knows that it's just sex. I know she has other men on the side just like I have my one night stands. We are not boyfriend and girlfriend and she knows that.
Maybe I should call Lelia and have her come over? I could use a good fuck. I pull out my phone and call her but it goes to voicemail. One minute later I get a text from her telling me she is in Vermont with her boyfriend but she will be back by next weekend.
I don't bother texting her back. Instead I head over to my room and change my clothes. If Lelia is not coming over tonight then I need to go out and get laid. I have so much built up frustration because of my back and forth sparring with Ana over the last week.
I get into my R8 and head towards the city. Just knowing I will be balls deep within the hour gives me a rush and I press my foot down on the gas.
It's good to be me sometimes.
What the ever loving fuck!
I have been in this club for over three hours and so far nothing! Every single woman that has given me the come on I have brushed off.
They have all been beautiful women but I have found fault with all of them. Too tall, Too short, Wrong color eyes, wrong color hair. What the fuck is wrong with me? I don't have a type. Blonde, brunette, redhead I don't give a fuck but tonight its like I am trying to search for something I am not finding.
Felling well and truly frustrated I down my drink and head towards the door only to be stopped when I hear Elliott.
"Yo! Bro! Where are you going?"
"Home Elliott. I'm just not feeling it tonight"
"Really? That red head was all over your dick. What happened to her?"
"I just wasn't into her"
"Well whatever. I am going to head back to my hot blond and I'll call you tomorrow" He points over his shoulder and its then that I see Kate Kavanugh leaning on the bar.
"What the fuck, Elliott! That's Kate Kavanugh"
"I know who she is bro. We hook up all the time" He shrugs likes its no big deal.
"But shes the ice queens best friend! What happened to Bro's before Ho's"
Elliott shakes his head in exasperation and scowls at me.
"First of all, Kate is no Ho. Second of all, Are you still on the "Ana is the root of all evil" shit? Shes one of the sweetest girls I know. You need to let whatever vendetta you have against her go"
"She's the one who has the problem with me. Shes argumentative, moody, stubborn and icy!"
"Wow, you just described yourself" Elliott laughs and I stomp away from him.
"Bro, wait! I think I know what your problem with Ana is" I turn around and cross my arms over my chest. This should be good.
"And what is your professional opinion, Elliott?"
"You like her" He grins at me.
"You are off your head! I do not like the ice queen! I would rather fuck a pencil sharpener than fuck her"
"Good" He claps his hands together "So you won't mind if I make my move?"
My heart almost stops.
"Make your move? On Ana?"
"Yeah. Shes beautiful and she has that innocent look about her but you can just tell shes a tiger between the sheets. I've been wanting to slam that for years"
Slam that? Like fuck he will!
"Stay the fuck away from her Elliott!"
"Why? You don't want her. Why can't I have a pop at her?"
"Just stay the fuck away from her!"
"Why?
"Because I fucking said so!"
"Well, that's not a good enough argument for me to stay away from that fine piece of ass because.."
I slam him into the wall with force and get right in his face.
"Don't you ever speak about her like that again!"
Instead of looking scared he starts belly laughing until I let him go.
"Tell me again why you don't like her? You have never given a shit who I go after. Hell last year I fucked Lelia and you didn't bat an eye but I say I am making a play for Ana and for the first time in years you lose your cool"
He's right. I have never lost my cool like that over a girl.
I let Elliott go and he puts his hand on my shoulder.
"Listen bro, why don't you go home and put your cards on the table with Ana? Tell her how you feel. You never know, she might shock you" He softly punches me on the shoulder and walks back towards Kate.
I get in my car and drive slowly home. I think of all the things Elliott said and all the things that have happened between me and Ana over the years.
I almost get home when realization hits me and I skid my car to a holt.
"Holy fuck! I like Ana!"
MEANWHILE BACK AT THE CLUB
"Well? Did you get a confession?"
"Yes and you were right. My brother is head over heels for your best friend"
"I knew it! Ana is so into him but she is too stubborn to make a move. What do we do?"
"Well I just floated the idea of me making a play for Ana and He slammed me into a wall so I am thinking jealousy is the way to go with Christian"
"Ethan is in town or I can give Jose a call?"
"Call both and then next weekend I will get my brother to come out and you bring Ana, Jose and Ethan"
"Sounds like a plan. Now...Your place or mine?"
God I think I am in love with this girl!
CHRISTIANS POV
It's been a week since I realized I like Ana.
How have I not known this before? It wasn't until Elliott said he wanted to slam Ana did I realize how I felt.
I don't want her with another man. I want her. I am not sure if I just want her to fuck or if it's something...more. Something deeper.
This last week has been hell. I have only seen her a few times and once when I smiled at her she asked if I was constipated.
Around me she is the ultimate Ice queen but I have observed her on the CCTV monitors when she talks to Gail and she is always laughing and happy. Yet when I walk into the room she becomes closed off and hostile.
I think ten years of rivalry have taken there toll.
I will get her though. Whether its just for a night or something more than that. I will have her. I am going to use my A game.
Tonight will be a start because I am going out clubbing with Elliott and he texted me today and told me Ana will be at the club tonight with a couple of her friends.
I wonder If I flirted with one of her friends would she be jealous?
I will give it my best shot.
I finish putting on my outfit and check myself out in the mirror. I am wearing blue jeans with a tight black tee shirt. I have left a bit of stubble on my face because I overheard Mia saying last week that men with stubble are now hot.
I squirt on some aftershave and then I am ready.
Prepare yourself, Miss Steele.
Mr Grey is coming for you.
A FEW HOURS LATER.
Who the fuck is this asshole!?
Some Latino frat boy is all over Ana.
When Elliott said Ana was coming with her friends I thought he meant girls. Not Ethan Kavanugh and this Jose jerk.
As soon as they walked in, Ana gave me a cool look and then turned her attention to this fucker. She hasn't even looked at me.
The Kavanaugh fucker is now all over my little sister who showed up at the club an hour after us. Elliott's is wrapped around Kate and I am like the seventh wheel.
Well fuck that!
I stand up and make my way over to a red head girl who has been eyeing me all night.
I buy her a drink and flirt it up with her. When I look over her head I catch a glimpse of Ana glaring at me. Hah! I knew making her jealous was the way to go.
The red head girl, I think her name is Maggie or it could be Sarah...No...I think it's Jade is waffling on about something so just to shut her up I swoop down and kiss her. She gasps in surprise and then kisses me right back.
I keep my eyes open and I watch as Ana looks furious and then she grabs the Latino fuckers hand and walks out of the Vip section.
Where the fuck are they going?
"Excuse me, Gemma"
"My name is Lisa" She tells me but I am gone from her before she can finish.
I sprint out of the VIP room and out the club doors and watch as Ana gets into a cab with the fucker.
"Taylor!" I scream and just like Lerch he appears behind me.
"Sir?"
"Get the car quick and follow that cab!"
We jump in the car and he drives like a bat out of hell.
She's heading towards the house.
There is no way on this earth that I am letting that fuckbag get his filthy paws on my girl!"
ANAS POV AT THE CLUB
I don't know why he is here but dear Lord...Those jeans give that man an amazing Ass.
This last week has been hard.
I despise that man...well, that's maybe a bit strong. I should say I dislike him. Greatly.
I remember the first time I met him.
I was 13 years old and I was sat in Mary and Theo Trevelyan's house on the Sound.
We had just moved to the area after my father Ray won a big contract for his timber company that he owned.
Mary was showing me a first edition of Weathering Height's when this tall boy with bronze hair walked in.
I was stunned. He was so handsome and he became my first crush.
I started hanging out with his sister Mia a lot at her grandparents house and I would always try to be in the same room as Christian.
I think one day he got sick of me because he screamed at me to leave him the fuck alone.
After that, whenever we were in the same room as each other we would glare and snipe at each other.
I was so shocked when I read Thoe's will. I knew he was leaving me SIP but having to move into his house with Christian? What the hell is that all about?
I am trying to make the best of a bad situation but like I said, this last week has been hard.
I thought that I would hardly see Christian in the house but he pops up everywhere.
If I am in the kitchen he is there. I go into the back garden and he is there. I can't escape him and over the last couple of days, the 13 year old girl who had a crush on him has resurfaced.
I don't know if its because I am living with him or if its just because I am a 23 year old virgin and I am basically horny but just looking at him does something to me.
Tonight, Jose has been around me like a blue assed fly. I can't get rid of him. Kate and Elliott are making out like there is no tomorrow and you can cut the sexual tension with a knife around Mia and Ethan who are flirting up a storm with each other.
Christian has not spoken to me all night. Probably because no one can get a word in edge ways with Jose practically glued to my lap.
While Jose is groaning on about some shit that I have no interest in, I watch as Christian drains his drink and then walks across the VIP area to a busty red head. It's not two minutes later that he has his tongue down her throat!
Bastard!
When he opens his eyes while still kissing her he looks directly at me and I can see the smirk in his eyes.
He's doing this on purpose.
I'm not sure why but he is.
Maybe to make me jealous? No, that can't be it because why would he want that. We are just glorified roommates that have a strong dislike to each other.
My green eyed monster rears its head and the 13 year old girl who has major Grey crush is itching to walk over to the red head and scratch her eyes out.
I don't want to watch him hump this hussy anymore.
"Jose, I am not feeling so good so I am going to go home" I grab my purse and he stands up with me.
"Can I crash at your place? I don't want to be the fifth wheel" He points at the two couples who are now both making out.
"Sure" I grab his hand and lead him out of the club.
We grab a cab and make it back to the house. When we get in I quickly run up to one of the guest rooms on my side of the house and I make sure Jose will have everything he needs.
I quickly change out of my clubbing clothes and into my sweats and a tank top and then I walk back out the room and find Jose lounging in the TV room.
I love him dearly as a friend but I get the feeling that he wants more than that but the thought of kissing Jose or having sex with him makes me sick. He's like a brother to me.
"What you watching?" I ask as I flop down beside him.
"Something about polar bears. I would love to photograph them in the wild" he says wistfully.
"I would love to see them too"
He suddenly sits up and looks me in the eyes.
"Ana, why are we not together? We have the same interests. We are both attracted to each other. We are both unattached. Why don't we give it a go"
I am stunned by his words and when he leans forward to kiss me I just sit there frozen. Before I can come to my senses and push him away from me, the loudest noise known to man erupts around us causing us both to cover our ears with our hands.
"That's the fire alarm!" I scream over the noise.
Before either of us can react, Christian burst through the door and makes a beeline for me. He scoops down and throws me over his shoulder and then bolts from the room. He runs as fast as he can with Jose trailing behind us.
Why is the fire alarm going off and why does Christian have me over his shoulder?
We make it out side and when we are about 100 feet from the house, Christian gently puts me on my feet. He starts patting me up and down like he is checking for flames.
"Ana, are you OK?"
"I'm fine. Why is the fire alarm going off? I didn't smell any smoke"
I start to shiver in the cold night air and I see Jose slowly take off his jacket but before he can get it off I am engulfed in Christians leather jacket. It's massive on me and it smells like him.
It smells nice.
Get a grip Steele!
"It came from your side of the house so I think you better stay over my side tonight until Taylor can see what happened. It's probably just a glitch in the wiring" He tells me and then turns to Jose.
"Unfortunately my side of the house only has one guest room so Sawyer here will take you down the street to the hotel" He's not asking Jose. He's telling him.
It's kinda hot.
"Um, OK. Ana, I will see you tomorrow?"
"Um, sure" He bends down and kisses my cheek and then walks with Sawyer over to a waiting car.
When did the car get here? And what is Sawyer doing here?
"Do you think it's safe to go inside? Perhaps we should call the fire department?"
"It's OK, Ana. Taylor will check it out and if he thinks we need to leave then we will go" He surprises me when he takes my hand and leads me back into the house and towards his flight of stairs.
His side of the house surprises me because its very warm. I expected his side of the house to be cold and clinical.
It's only now does it click to me that Christian saved me. Granted, there is no fire but he swooped in like a white knight and scooped me up and got me the hell out of there. What if there had been a fire? Would he have still risked it?
"Do you want something to drink, Anastasia?"
"Yeah, sure. Wine would be good"
I take a seat on his sofa and admire the view from his side of the house.
"Here you go" He hands me a glass of white wine and then he sits next to me.
"Thanks. And thanks for saving me from the...fresh air" I giggle and he smirks.
"I was being a gentlemen. I heard the fire alarm and wanted to save the damsel in distress" I can tell just by the look in his eyes that he is hiding something.
"I am not a damsel in distress but thanks anyway" I take a sip of my wine and almost orgasm from it.
"I think you did need saving. Especially from that limp dicked fucker" He growls.
"Hey! That is my friend you are speaking about!"
"Well, he may be your friend but he's still a limp dicked fucker. He wants so bad to get into your panties that he is a walking hardon with his little shrimp dick"
"No he is not. Jose is like a brother to me"
"Yes but he does not think of you as a sister. What was all that "Ana, why are we not together? We have the same interests. We are both attracted to each other. We are both unattached. Why don't we give it a go" crap?
"That was just the alcohol talking and he...wait! Just wait a minute. How did you know what he said?"
Christian looks like a deer caught in the headlights.
"I...I overheard him when I came to get you because of the fire alarm"
"Bullshit! We had the door closed so unless you had your ear pressed against the door then there is no way you would have heard him"
He rolls his eyes and huffs but he does not argue the fact that he had his ear against the door.
"Oh My God! You had your ear at the door? Why?" I put my wine down and stand up.
"Why would I have my ear to the door? I heard the alarm and I came to get you and I heard him"
"The alarm went off after he said that..Wait..WAIT JUST A MINUTE! Did you set the fire alarm off?" He squirms in his seat and I know my answer.
"Why the fuck would you do that?"
He stands up angrily and gets in my face.
"Because that limp dick wanted to fuck you. Is that what you wanted? A quick dirty fuck with his three inches?"
"If I did that is my business, not yours. I didn't say anything about you humping that red head in the club"
"Who? Molly? All I did was kiss her. I had no intention of bringing her back here to fuck. You on the other hand brought him back here and the only reason would be because you wanted to get fucked. I don't know what the fuck is going on with us but you can't deny the sexual tension between us this last week. If you want to fuck someone then I am right here and I promise you, I have a lot more than three inches for you!" He screams and then kisses me hard.
What the fuck?
I start kissing him back and then I roughly grab his hair and it makes him growl like an animal.
What the hell is happening? This is CHRISTIAN! We don't like each other so why is his tongue in my mouth and why are his hands on my ass?
Well, In all fairness my hands are on his ass and I am kissing him back.
We have to stop. This is crazy!
I pull apart from him and we just look at each other in shock. He rakes his hand through his hair and looks at me in as much shock as I am in.
Has he always been this...alluring?
Am I only feeling this way because he is the only man to ever kiss me like this? I'm a virgin. I have waited for my first time to be with someone special. But why not have my first time be with Christian?
Theres no denying the passion that we both felt in the kiss. There's no doubting the fact that I am attracted to him and him too me it seems.
I'm 23. I have a man that looks and is built like a god so why the hell did I stop him again?
Oh fuck this!
I jump towards him and in less than a second my legs are wrapped around him and we are once again kissing.
He slams me back against the wall and starts trailing hot, hungry kisses down my neck.
I grasp his shirt and start undoing the buttons but my hands are shaking so much that I just rip it open making the buttons fly.
He moans deep and then he starts moving us towards what I suppose is his bedroom. On our way we bang into walls making pictures fall and then we almost go stumbling on the rug but he manages to steady us.
When we make it to his bedroom he leads us to the bed and then he goes into what I can only describe as animal mode.
He rips off my shirt and bra and before I can even blink he has me naked.
I stop kissing him long enough to point out that he's wearing far to many clothes.
"If I'm naked then you should be as well"
"With pleasure, Miss Steele"
He leans back on the bed and makes a show of removing his shirt and pants. He stands up and takes off his pants leaving him in only his boxers.
Wow! The bulge in his underwear is...well, I'm pretty sure it's going to kill me.
"Like what you see?"
"Are you always that...aroused?"
"I'm a big boy but no. I've never been this aroused. But then again I have never been this frustrated or wanted someone so much before" He peels his underwear off in one smooth move and my jaw drops.
My first ever real life penis.
This is going to hurt so bad. Granted my down below is currently like a slip and slide but he is huge. I've watched porn. And he's bigger than all the ones I've seen on my laptop screen.
He crawls back onto the bed and starts kissing my legs.
By the time he gets to my thighs I'm panting with want.
"I've wanted to do this since that day you were wearing those little tight yoga shorts in the gym the other day"
"Wanted to do what?" I look down at him and he just smirks.
"This"
He Leans forward and swipes my pussy with his tongue.
"HOLY HELL!"
Oh my god! I've never felt anything as good as this! How do woman ever just go about their day if they have a partner that can do this!
I wrap my thighs around his head and when he keeps purposely avoiding the spot he first licked, I grab his hair and guide him to what I want.
I explode in pleasure not a minute later and I am sure that I can be heard all across the greater Seattle area.
"OH MY GOD, CHRISTIAN!"
When I come down from my high I look at him and his eyes are almost black with lust. He leans over and opens a drawer and grabs a condom.
No is the time to tell him Steele.
"Christian? Please go slow"
He rolls the condom on and then smiles at me.
"Slow? Why?"
"Um...I've never...I've never had..."
"A cock this big?"
"I've never had a cock"
He frowns at me and then looks at me strangely.
"Ana, what do you mean by that?"
"I've never...had sex before"
His eyes bug out of his head and he gets off the bed.
"You've never...you're A?...And this will be?..." He starts mumbling.
He paces back and forth and I am impressed that despite the shocking information he's just been given that he does not lose his erection.
"Ana, we can't do this. You're first time is supposed to be special. Not with someone you call a Jackass on an hourly basis" he sits on the end of the bed and tells me.
"I want it to be with you. I don't know why because you infuriate me like no other person on the planet but I want this. I've waited 23 years years. Please don't make me wait another minute"
He stares at me for the longest time and just when I am losing all hope, he leans forward and captures me in the sweetest, softest kiss of my life.
He shuffles us back up the bed and when we are eye to eye.
"Are you sure about this? There's no turning back the clock once you give me this gift"
He called my virginity a gift? That's kinda sweet.
"Im sure. I've never been more sure"
He starts kissing me and then very slowly he starts to slide into me.
When he reaches the barrier of my virginity he softly whispers that he's sorry. Then he breaks through and I cry out in pain.
I screw my eyes shut but pretty soon it's turned into a dull ache and he starts to move.
"You feel so good, Anastasia"
He starts sucking on my breast and I tangle my fingers in his hair.
I start to build and it's like a raging Fire inside me.
"Christian...Oh My God...it feels so good!"
"It's about to get better" he whispers and then he swivels his hips and hits something inside me that makes me scream out in pleasure.
He starts going faster and faster and I cant hold it anymore. I place my hands on his back and rake my nails down his skin and then cum with a scream.
"You're squeezing me like a fist...Oh My God I'm gunna come" he screams and then he jerks and stills.
Hes panting and sweating and then he lands ontop of me and squishes me into the mattress.
We both calm our breathing and then he slowly eases out of me and gets rid of the condom.
He leans over me And brushes my sweaty hair out of my eyes.
"How was that?"
"Well worth the 23 year wait" I wink at him and he laughs.
"You are the last person I ever thought would be in my bed but I'm glad you're here"
"Me too. So...what happens now?"
"Well I could do it to you from behind or you can ride me or we could do it in the hot tub or there's..." He keeps listing different positions and places for us to do it.
"Whoa, whoa, whoa. I don't mean as in the sex right now. Although I want to come back to the hottub idea. I mean what happens tomorrow morning? Do we go back to irritating each other? Do we become fuck buddies? Enemy's with benefits? Is this a one night thing?"
" This is so not a one night thing. I want you over and over again. How about we become friends with benefits? It's exhausting arguing with you all the time" He winks at me and I giggle.
"OK. Friends with benefits. Wow. That's going to be some adjustment"
"It's going to be fun though. Instead of fighting we will be fucking. I think it's a win win all around"
He starts kissing my neck and I have to agree with him.
This could be kinda fun!