I'm so sorry to the guys who expected a new chapter.
Luckily this isn't one of those IRL issues that renders me incapable of updating... well it plays a part bearing the name of laziness. But i digress (Is that how the word is used?) I rewrote chapter one, doubling its word count and adding depth to Jaune as i felt it was a bit short and rushed.
That's all well and good but i came upon another problem, i need a Beta... my head is teeming with ideas and possible plots yet i can't seem to write them down so i thought a Beta might help
So if you know the source, have good grammar and imagination... i beg of you, please help me. This is really killing me, having lots of ideas that i cant write in fear of making something sup-par.
In summary, i updated chapter 1 so please re-read it and i also need a Beta who have knowledge of the fiction and adequate grammar.
P.S - Lot of the complex words (at least for me) are ones i learned from the daily word, am i using them correctly?
