Nerdycatgamer9999: I gotcha review. Ok I know that writing it like a movie script is annoying, but I'm pretty sure I don't do it proceeding from chapter 3.
But in the last chapter (Such talents) Peridot talks to herself, (allot) and I don't really know how to put that in dialogue because technically she isn't even talking. The layout of Peridot talking to herself is kind of like a movie script, I'm sorry.
If you do know a different way I can lay it out, that more people will enjoy, you can tell me.
Other than that, have a good, idk, life? Yea, have a good life.
