Trains, Sol had issues with trains. Perhaps it was from memories of Dudley teasing him with a train set. It was an antique from their grandparents. On the box of the set in black marker was written, to Harry. In a way, he had become desensitized by that point but reading his name was a different matter.
That was one of the first times he fought for something that he knew was his by right. It was the first time he struck out and punched Dudley. It was also the first in long line of heavy beatings from his delightful Uncle.
As he boarded the crimson red topped train car the memory wouldn't go away. Flashbacks they are called he realized. "It is unhealthy to think on the past when close to so many potential enemies." Hakai his staff said.
He had made his way to an empty cart. It was far away from the others and hopefully he could relax here. That was until Lilith kicked the door open and walked in.
Her hair was braided into raven pig tails that made her red eyes pop. She tossed her luggage on one of the racks and jumped into the seat next to him. Lilith twirled her wand and shouted nox.
The lights in the room disappeared. "That's better I so hate the light. Big brother how was your summer?" Just as Sol was going to answer she continued.
"My summer was great. Dad and I went hunting for werewolves. Did you know there are like fifty colonies in Britain? Because now there are 49. We sent them to a man called the skinner he makes all the best fur clothing. I am getting my first crimson cape can you believe it. Dad said I am old enough to show that I am a true Dracula." She went on like that for a few hours.
Their door slid open. "Hey I heard that Lilith Potter was on the train. Hey my name is Cedric Diggory." The boy smiled one of those weirdly guilty smiles. "Um, I just really wanted to meet the girl who beat you-know-who." Sol starred over at his sister.
Her eyes had gone big. He felt strings of magic so subtle that if he didn't have divine power he would have missed them. They were pouring out of the Cedric kid. Then suddenly a massive red thread burst from Lilith's very soul. It snaked after the Teen.
Sol had enough at that point he thrust his staff down and created a barrier around his sister. Her eyes flashed at him then back to the human. They turned a deep sinister red. "You did something to me. Messed with my feelings. You almost made me. I will kill you." The boy attempted to run but shadowy tendrils gripped his ankles.
"Stop this Lilith he wasn't the cause of this." She starred at the boy a few moments longer.
"Those emotions they made me feel whole human even. How could something make me so weak?" Sol starred at her. He could see the small threads of mana create patterns designed to target his sister.
Honestly Sol didn't like how Cedrick treated his alternate self. The boy could have save his other plenty of heart ache. Then again, he wasn't in the business of killing children.
Sol put a hand over his sister's shoulder. "It isn't over even if this one dies, I am certain you will be targeted by another. Spare him for now he isn't a threat to you, puppets never are." She let go of him and Sol thrust his staff out. He had to delete this memory and alter it. Only he had never really used this magic before. Mind reaving wasn't his favorite art after all.
It worked somewhat and Cedric bumbled his way back. Sol let out a sigh. Mind magics weren't his favorite.
Later another opened the door. It was a young girl with long messy brown hair. Her name was Hermione Granger and her eyes were filled with fear. When her eyes locked on him she inched forward.
"Thank you for saving me. Would you please be my friend?" She was indeed talking to him. He looked at Lilith to make sure.
"Awe, look at her she is so cute. Brother, you have to make her your apprentice." Sol looked her up and down. She was indeed the brightest witch of the Harry Potter series and in canon destined to become the minister of magic.
"Tell me Hermione Granger do you want to become powerful enough to fight ghouls and even greater threats?" She nodded and sank to her knees. That just made him feel bad.
"It won't be easy I won't just give you power as I would my normal followers. Though, I will point you in the right direction and make certain books available to you. Hand me your wand." She handed it to him without protest.
"What is a wand Hermione."
"It's what is needed to use magic."
"Training wheels when you don't need them anymore you should discard them. Then again you could do as I have and evolve it into a more useful form." Lilith rolled her eyes.
"That point is neither here nor even in the next year. Why don't you teach her a spell or something you have a ton of those?" Lilith said. Sol shrugged and pulled out one of his journals. This one was about shielding and the various ways to connect points of magic to create barriers. It was would teach her how to make barriers on the fly. He tossed it to her.
She immediately started to read it. Sol sighed and pulled out a Gameboy and started playing pokemon red version. "Ooh you have one too I thought I would be the only one." Lilith said.
Hermione looked up. "I have green version my dad got it for me before he passed, it was only made in japan." Sol raised an eyebrow.
"Did you bring it with you?" Hermione shook her head.
"Electronics don't work in Hogwarts too much magic." Sol nodded.
"Yea the gama rays are a bit terrible. A few magic draining runes seems to do the trick though. Can't wait to make real Pokemon." Hermione seemed to stare at him.
"Why couldn't the professors have mentioned that. I could have brought my generator, VHS player, and all my monster movies." Sol thought about it.
"We can make a run to grab what we need tonight after we're settled in." Hermione turned a page in her book.
"Did you write this?" He heard her ask. Sol nodded. It was one of his projects a few weeks ago. Defense was just as important as offense after all.
"There are a lot of grammatical errors and lots of run on sentences. What was that you were talking about earlier real pokemon." Hermione said.
"I plan on messing with the genome of magical creatures splicing them together and creating my very own monsters. Then maybe I will create an easy way to contain them and ensure their obedience. Want to help me with this project." Hermione nodded then took her wand out.
Hermione tapped thrice in the air and a shimmering triangle shield appeared before her. "I thought that you needed words and wand movements to do magic." Sol nodded.
"Those are just methods of focus. The shielding style you are using is simple and effective. Though it does deal with dimensions. As far as the protection part goes the more mana you put in the protection the better you will be protected. Shape is also important." Sol said.
"How will this protect me from ghouls?"
"It won't not really. Ghouls are about 3 to 4 time stronger than your normal human. They are also fast and resistant to magic. The best you can do for now is put up a strong defense and hope Sol or I can reach you on time." Lilith said. Sol looked over to see she was playing her own Gameboy now blue version. She was battling misty with a level 25 Charmeleon.
"How long before I can fight them myself?" Sol looked at Lilith. The woman sighed.
"Fine, Hermione has this life become too much to bare has the thought of aging to death troubled you. Have you ever thought of becoming a creature of the night? I can give it to you the black gift." Hermione stared at Lilith for a time.
"Girls aren't supposed to play with each other's butts." Lilith looked like someone had shot her in the heart.
"What that's not at all what I was talking about. The black gift, the forbidden blood, and undeath I'm talking about making you a vampire like me." Sol rubbed his face.
"Oh, um you're a vampire." Lilith smiled revealing two perfectly white fangs.
Hermione reached out and started to touch them. Sol avoided doing the same. He knew better she would bite him.
"Five minutes till Hogwarts."
Hermione jumped up. "We had better put on our robes." Sol sighed and began to undress. "What are you doing?"
"Putting on my robes."
"You're a boy go wait for us to get changed outside. Then we will do the same for you." Sol rolled his eyes then snapped his fingers. He was now in his robes and he walked out.
In the hallway, he waited for them to change. "Hey is this where Lilith Potter is?" Sol turned to a red head boy covered in freckles.
"Nope, I think she is down to the right." Sol then went back to waiting.
"Hey, I already checked there you were trying to fool me." Sol looked up at the boy. If this wasn't Ron Weesley he would eat his sister's dark gift.
"They are changing in there give them some privacy." The red head went red in the face.
"Liar how can I trust anything you say. I bet they kicked you out for lying and you don't want anyone else to try and be their friend." He went to push Sol out of the way but of course he might as well have tried to move a mountain.
"Get lost I want in there." Sol pushed him and the boy went flying. Just then the woman with the Trolley came out.
"What did you do to the poor boy?" She went to grab ahold of him but Sol just dodged. He had left his staff in his room. He would have to do this the hard way.
With his staff, he had far more control over what he was doing. Without it well he just hoped they had some memories left. He started with the woman. "What are you?"
She suddenly knew no more and Sol flinched when he found he had erased everything. There was literally nothing left not even her first steps. She was a vegetable.
The door opened behind him. "Well it looks like there was a problem. What happened?" Sol sighed.
"The red head wanted to watch you two change and the woman didn't like me holding him back." Lilith looked down at the woman and placed her hand on her head.
"Well I was going to erase the relevant memories but it seems you did it already and then some. I wouldn't do this to my worst enemies. A complete memory erase that takes someone sloppy." Sol sighed.
"We are going to have to tell a professor. It was just an accident right." Sol sighed. Without a wand, they couldn't trace his magical signature for the spell. He picked up the woman walked over to an empty room and tossed her in.
"Problem solved," he said. His eyes had spotted the same spells reaching out from his core to attach to his sister. Taking the red head's wand, he cast the memory erasing charm on a conjured bird. Picking the kid up he tossed him in the trolley with the woman. He then pulled the woman's pants down and put the red head on top like he was mounting her.
"I don't know he is eleven do you think this is enough to incriminate him." Sol grabbed the read head's wand and cast a crusio and imperios. Hermione at this point was hyperventilating.
"This is so evil." Sol nodded.
"Yea your right." Sol removed Ron from the woman and snapped his wand just because he could. He then vanished the woman. With no memories, her soul wasn't particularly attached and there were worst places to go in death than the void.
They locked the door and left with the rest of the students. "We are going to be in so much trouble." Hermione said again.
"Hey did we even erase his memories?" Lilith said. He heard Hermione's breath hitch. Sol calmly patted her on the back.
"He didn't see anything and I wrote a suicide not for the trolley lady. She apparently couldn't take such a life anymore and threw herself into a river." Sol said.
"Very sad don't you think so Hermione. Isn't it sad how she couldn't take living anymore." Hermione looked at us both.
She took a calming breath. "I will miss the way she never reached us or offered us food from her Trolley." Sol grinned at her.
"At a girl, you will make a great apprentice yet. We must get you an enhancement ritual to increase your physical power. I think I remember one we just need a few troll parts." Hermione smiled a little too much but he didn't begrudge her timidity.
"I'm telling you Hermione one bite and you're a vampire just like me. You could be my little sister and that would make Sol your brother. Our orgies will be incredible." Lilith said.
"Uh are you a vampire as well Sol." He shook his head.
"No, I'm not a vampire Lilith and I are twins, I just changed my appearance. If I were to revert to my fully human state, we would look just alike I think. Lilith, did you change any of your features?" Sol said.
"Not really, I mainly just make myself older when needed. Like when I want to use piece maker." She pulled out her ivory hand cannon and twirled it.
"Is that a gun. Hogwarts charter states that muggle weapons aren't allowed here." She nodded and twirled it again.
"Yea bro made it for me. It doesn't use bullets at all. Think of it like a blaster form Star Wars. The magic equivalent anyway." Hermione's eyes brightened at that.
"Can you make me one too or maybe a lightsaber." Sol shrugged sure I will see what I can do.
"Four to a boat first years follow me." They happened to get a boat with a blond-haired boy. He was Draco Malfoy.
"Hey I remember you. You killed that ghoul in the store. The name is Malfoy. Draco Malfoy I would like to thank you on behalf of house Malfoy." Lilith chuckled.
The boy glared at her. "Oh, you are just a treat. My name is Lilith Potter, the boy you're fawning over is named Sol Nyarlathotep, and this is our protégé Hermione Granger. We are thinking of leaving her here as governess of Britain once we take the place over." Sol rolled his eyes.
"Really governess she could manage the planet with the right government in place. Why would we bother ruling the world? It's so much easier to control it with debt." Sol had a few plans but he needed to do away with the goblins first.
"What mountain of gold do you have to start up our own banking system and what is to stop the government's from busting any organization we make. Sol I can't believe you are so short sighted."
"Are they always like this?" Draco asked Hermione.
"I just met them but it seems to be the way their dynamics are set." Sol and Lilith pretended they couldn't hear the two whispering.
The great doors to Hogwarts burst open revealing prof McGonagall. "Hagrid, I see you have brought the first years as scheduled."
"Aye, McGonagall yer have it from he're."
"That I do now if you would like the headmaster wants you to investigate the forbidden forest." The half giant nodded and lumbered off."
"Can you believe they let someone like that work here. If my father had his way."
"Mr. Malfoy that is quite enough of that. You may not like our grounds keeper but that is no excuse to gossip. I understand you had a hard time dealing with a dark creature recently. Otherwise you would have detention with me on your first day."
They were lined up single file and the names were called. Through Sol's eyes he could see the hat in all its glory. It sent tendrils into the minds of those that put it on. Other than that, he couldn't tell if it had any other functions.
"A hat, a ruddy hat. Here I thought that we would have to battle a troll."
Sol glanced back at Ron so he did make it off the train after all. He added a new layer of barrier protecting his sister form mind magic. "Hey brother want to play a game."
"What kind of game?"
"You know the kind where we mess with people. Ok here are the rules we can only use metal skills and whoever drives the hat closest to breaking wins. The winner gets the first Pokemon we create." Lilith said.
Sol nodded and looked at Hermione. She was listening to them but barely. Most of her concentration was on her book.
"You know if you break the hat it will take even longer to get to the feast and then to our rooms. Hey Sol it mentions 3 dimensional constructs are those created with additional points beyond the initial shape."
Sol looked at the page she was on. "Here this is the index. Sorry I forgot that I didn't put one in that book."
"Wow page 30030 why is this book so large?"
"Sorry again, most of the book contains practices to help increase your casting speed. There are also many diagrams for stances to increase the speed your body regains mana. The book isn't all my writing a lot of it was pieced together from other somewhat forgotten works."
"Hermione Granger, you're up." She took his index pocket book and closed the relatively larger book. When the hat was sat upon her head her eyes glazed over.
"You have quite the ambition." The hat said. "Your hunger for knowledge is only surpassed by your desire for power. What's this hmm I see you have a greater desire for reliable friends. Better be Slytherin." The hat bellowed. Tendrils left Hermione's mind and her eyes returned to focus.
"Sol Nyarlathotep," McGonagall said. He walked as calmly as he could towards the stool. When the hat fell upon his he felt it pull him deep within his own mental realm.
"What an interesting place." Light was blinding to a degree beyond sight. The only solace to be had was within the iron castle. Sol sat upon his throne and stared down at the hat.
"I cannot begin to find your memories in this place. I can feel it the mana within you. It's stronger than even the mana that I have stored over a thousand years. Tell me what house do you desire and I will put you there."
"I had thought such a sight would drive you to madness hat. My sister and I were playing a game you see. Looks like she has the win. I suppose I could show your forbidden sights and curse you're with madness. Unfortunately, I am playing by our rules. Send me to Slytherin I want to keep Hermione company."
"If I were to act as if I had gone mad what would you gain from it? What could you give me in return?"
"I would gain the rights to the first pocket monsters we create and bind to ourselves. I suppose I could grant you a metal body that fuses to your hat. What would that be worth to you?"
"A body of my own. How generous of your better be Hufflepuff." Sol blinked as the hat was ripped from his head. He saw the twinkle in the beaten-up things eyes. That hat had tricked him a freaking hat had tricked him.
His robes changed and he gained a badger insignia on them. He wanted to snarl and blast the hat with unending hellfire. The twinkle in the headmaster's eye stopped him.
"Hey I'm Nymphadora Tonks but call me Tonks if you call me by my first name I will hex you. Welcome to Hufflepuff." Her face changed to that of a duck and she began quacking at the table. Sol grinned slightly before he went back to glaring at the hat.
"Lilith Potter," the hall went quiet. Sol was just happy they weren't acting that way with him.
"Better be Gryffindor. Oh, my god what's that." The hat then turned into a jittering mess.
The hat didn't recover so we were given a once in a life time opportunity. "If any first years would like to change their house speak now or forever hold your peace." Sol jumped up and ran over to Slytherin. Snatched Hermione up and they made a beeline for Gryffindor.
"Well if anyone else would like to change. Anyone at all. Well as headmaster I now pronounce that whatever house table you are sitting at is now your house. Now your Prefect will lead you to your common room where your trunks have been taken. I suggest you all get a good night's sleep classes will start early in the morning."
After getting settled in the girls and he were sitting on one of the couches. Hermione was still reading now taking notes as quickly and precise as she could.
"Slow down Hermione it's not going to get up and crawl away." Lilith said. Sol whistled a bit. The book was made from eldritch wood grown in the forest of malcior 9 it could very well walk away. Though with all the phoenix feathers it took to bind the plant fibers together it may well just burst into flames.
"I have to learn this if I don't get this down now than when will I get the opportunity to. We are starting classes tomorrow. I also have to give our texts a look over before midnight." Sol sighed didn't matter what universe Hermione was a scholar.
"Hermione breakfast is at 6 and you're a growing girl get to bed at 10 at least." Sol said. "I promise to find a way to get some extra time. Oh, and what do you want for Christmas. I was thinking about getting you a book on familiar binding for the pokemon experiment."
"She isn't going to listen to you." Lilith took a sip of a crimson liquid. Some of it dripped down her chin before her long tongue curled down and collected it. The sad thing, it was blood carbonated and canned. There was an industry for canned carbonated blood.
"Don't talk about me like I'm not here. Thank you, Sol, for caring. I need to study though. If I don't pass with perfect grades, then I could lose my grant." Sol nodded he was technically on one of those grants as well.
"Don't worry about it Lilith and I are loaded. If anything happened to your grant we can pay for Hogwarts." Technically only Lilith was loaded. Sol just had access to space travel. He could theoretically go off to the kipper belt and mine a few asteroids for precious metals.
"Thank you. The two of you it means a lot to me but I want to do this. I want to prove to this wizarding world that despite everything I can make it on my own." Sol sighed he didn't feel like fighting his new friend on this not on their first day.
He saved his game and stood up. His pokemon team consisted of Alakazam, Zapdos, Lapras, Gengar, Nidoking, and Charizard it was time to collect creatures from the forbidden forest and experiment with them.
"Hermione how large is the forbidden forest, in diameter?"
"About 10,000 kilometers due to a network of expansion charms and ward stones to hold the charm in place. Over the years, the area has expanded due to the age of the ward stones. Though no one has managed to travel to the other side of the forest and reach the ocean it is agreed that 10,000 kilometers is about the right size. Source sited Bilgor's travel with Johton giants. I found it in the book store a great read if you're interested."
"We are keeping her." Lilith said. Sol was honestly surprised that the forest was that large. Who knew what insane creatures were in there. The forest was larger than the US.
Sol decided he could wait before he went exploring. Maybe he should look up ways to navigate the forest first. A thought occurred to him Hagrid. That man had traveled more of the forest than any man alive.
The next day they had completed breakfast and got their time tables. Now they were in McGonagall's class. "The most important part of transfiguration is the thought process. One cannot simply change one thing into another instantly one must visualize steps in between." Sol just tipped his staff and the match turned into a ruby incrusted needle with white gold embroidery.
"Beautiful work Mr. Nyarlathotep 5points to Gryffindor." Lilith got hers next then Hermione had to work to get hers done." They left the class room with a warning about transfiguring food, air, and water. Sol wondered what was the need for poisons when you could just trick someone into drinking a wooden desk.
"Think your something special don't you Nyarlathotep. You think just because you killed that ghoul that we should worship the ground you walk on." Sol turned to Draco Malfoy.
"What Nyarlathotep we all know your nothing but a mudblood. Even if you are as powerful as merlin himself you still won't be worthy of scrubbing my bathroom." Sol blinked then went back to walking with Hermione and Lilith.
"Hey you can't talk to people like that Malfoy."
"Oh, you hear that boys the blood traitor thinks he can talk back to his betters." Sol sighed this was going to make it a long day.
"I bet Sol could take you and your goons on in a duel."
"Oh, it looks like I have been challenged. Alright Nyarlathotep bring it on. I will be waiting for you at the trophy case at midnight.
They made their way towards their next class. "Of course, you're not going to show up right. I mean it is obviously a trap." Sol nodded.
"Normally, I would find a way to trigger the trap in a way that would harm Malfoy. It unfortunate that I don't have such an option right now. I could refuse but that would set a precedent allowing others to take advantage of me. My best option is to go in guns blazing and take out anyone he has as back up. Be they student, teacher, or nefarious creature I should win."
"That's not the point if you show off how powerful you are and how unwilling you are to hold back your power. Don't you think you will get the wrong attention? I've read plenty of stories where huge displays of power end with the powerful one getting manipulated." Hermione said.
"Will you two knock it off. You're like an old plotting couple. Brother should be able to handle it and if not then we are in reserve for back up. What's important is if he can tank the trap or not. If he survives this encounter we can counter attack." Lilith said.
"We don't even know what Draco has at his disposal and what was the word he used Mudblood. I can't imagine it's flattering." Hermione said.
They were making their way towards the dungeons now. It was to be their first potions class. Sol couldn't wait to see who Snape picked on first.
"No, it means that I have dirty blood because my parents weren't wizards."
"Lilith did you just call Sol brother? Because if that is just what you call him because your best friends I understand. Should I start calling you my sister?"
Lilith chuckled. "No Hermione Sol is indeed my brother. We are twins. Let's just say it's complicated and leave it at that."
They sat down relatively close to each other. Sol sat next to a Daphne Greengrass he methodically took out his potions ingredients. The blackboard already had the ingredients needed listed so he quickly took them out. He halted when the heard the rustle of fabric.
"Hello my name is Professor Snape and I will be your potions master. I can teach you to bottle fame, stopper death, and possibly pass my class. If you aren't a group of dunder heads like my last few classes, we shall get along quite well."
He swept through the class and observed the various students. On occasion, he paused and put ingredients back and took out what was needed. Soon enough he returned to the front of the class.
"Potter what would I get if I added Wyrmwood to fiend blood?" The class waited. Hermione put her hand up.
"If I'm not mistaken fiend blood is alive in a very real sense. When mixed with Wyrmwood it should regain sentience and attack whoever mixed it." The class waited and Draco started to chuckle.
"That isn't wrong Fiend blood is a very volatile substance and if the correct precautions aren't taken then that will indeed happen. In a potion lab, there is a ward net in place to prevent such an occurrence. The mix will grant a slight healing factor 5 hours after ingestion. I see that the front row is writing this down, I hope the back row does the same. Pull out your book and turn to final page there you will find the reaction table. Today we will make a simple boil cure potion. I expect you to have studied your reaction table for your next class."
Sol blinked then blinked again. This world was quite different from the canon world. He and his lab partner worked quickly to put the potion together. After seven clockwise turns their potion turned a mucus green color which signified completion.
"We did it, I thought we messed up when it was still brown on the fifth turn." Sol nodded to Daphne and the girl looked at him with a sour expression. She turned her nose to him and began packing up.
An explosion rang out through the room followed by red smoke. Sol quickly went to Hermione ripped a piece from his robe and put it over her mouth. Every student the gas touched spasmed before collapsing.
"That will be enough of that." The professor waved his wand and the gas cleared. "Mr. Longbottom Fifty points from Gryffindor. I had thought this would be my best class of the day but you simply had to ruin it. You will have detention with Filtch tonight."
Sol took a gander at the boy. He was young and short for his age. His hair was straight, black and he looked to be a bit pudgy. The boy was also covered with red soot and crying.
Meanwhile back in Tokyo Japan 2016
"We don't agree with your methods. Ghouls and humans are just too different and our citizens won't support this Bill. I'm sorry Mr. Satan but there is nothing we can do."
Herold Satan stood before the Prime minister of Japan's desk. The man was sweating like a pig before his mighty presence. Herold thought it fitting that the man sweated like the pig he was.
"I suppose your citizens know about this." He pulled out a picture of the man sleeping with Tiger mask. The masked man had a smile on his face as the minister sat on his knees.
"With the new food, Potter Inc, has been engineering ghouls and humans can indeed coexist. We will lower prices to ensure all ghouls can get the food they need to survive. All you have to do is sign this act into law."
"What about the children with young ghouls be able to keep their hands off our own. The CCG will fight this with their every breath not to mention Satan day. A new Holiday where the government closes, really. I can't pass it no matter how much dirt you have on me."
Herold took out a final photo and showed it to the minister. "Fine I have no choice then. I will sign it into law but I'm moving Satan day to the day after the new year."
"Very good minister, as a consolation prize you may have this. A Gourmet's guide to fine cooking. By Tsykiyomi and Herold Satan. Why is your name in such large print?" The minister looked around the Mr. Satan was gone.
He met up with a mint haired beauty. "Was that really all it took to grant ghouls equal rights with human's? A freaking picture of the Minister and Tiger mask doing it while Tiger mask fed upon a young Japanese boy." Herold shrugged.
"I didn't believe it either especially when Tiger mask came forward and gave me the pictures himself. About Jason I held my end of the bargain its time that you held yours."
"All support for Jason has been removed he is now vulnerable. I suggest your take him out now before he goes into hiding."
"My best people are on it. That is not why I am here. There is something more important than business we need to discuss."
Mito sat down on the king size bed in their hotel. She took up a spread-eagle pose. Herold for the first time found that the carpet matched the drapes.
Chapter end
Hey guys been a while I know. I've just been busy and I have started up a new story. This one a more Naruto centric story with rail like plot. It is possible that Sol Satan had a son with Kushina when he visited the other universe.
This was basically my attempt to follow rails and give Harry Potter the chance to flesh out more as a character. Over all I hope to end year one next chapter hope you all liked it.
Please review they feed my desire to write. If I had the time I would write every day.