A/N I've read the first six chapters, and I think they REALLY need redone. It may take a while, but I really think it will be worth it. Please review and say what you think about it now.
Harry's POV
"Hermione!" I called. She was nowhere to be seen. Ron came running up, and shook his head.
"I couldn't find her anywhere," He said.
I sank to my knees. We'd last seen Hermione at tea time yesterday. The whole school was looking for her. And then I remembered. The last time we'd seen her, she'd told us she was going out for a walk. Now I knew. She'd been kidnapped.
"Ron!" I exclaimed as I jumped to my feet, "That's it!"
"What?" Ron asked, a look of hope on his face.
"Something's kidnapped her. Let's go and ask Lavender and Parvati, they might know something."
Ron nodded and followed me up the staircases to Gryffindor tower. We came to the portrait. "Password?" The fat lady asked us.
"Balderdash," I said in a clear voice. The portrait swung to the side, revealing the common room. We ran in and up the girls' staircase.
We ran into the second year dormitory. Lavender and Parvati were sitting on Lavender's bed crying.
They looked up, their eyes red and puffy and tears streaked down their faces.
"Hermione was taken by a centaur," Parvati Sobbed.
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Third Person:
Hermione woke with a fright. She was riding on the back of a Centaur, in the woods. All she remembered was falling and banging her head, and then darkness. What was happening? Where was she? And why on earth was she on the back of a Centaur?
"Oh, Hermione, you're awake. A Minotaur attacked you and I am taking you somewhere safe," The centaur said.
"How do you know my name?" Hermione asked.
"I know many things, demigod."
"Where are we? And what on earth is a Demigod?"
"Long Island, New York. Demigods are people who are half god, half mortal."
"What?" Hermione exclaimed. "Long island? How did we get so far? And I'm not a demi…" She fainted right there.
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Hermione woke up in bed. Her first thought was she was in the hospital wing at hog warts. She felt dazed and scared. She opened her eyes fully and saw a girl around her age with curly blonde hair and stormy grey eyes sitting on the edge of her bed.
"You okay?" The girl asked with an American accent.
"Yeah, I think," Hermione replied. "Am I in America?"
"Yeah," The girl replied. "You're at camp half blood." Hermione nodded.
And then Hermione remembered the centaur. And going out for a walk after tea, goodness knows how many nights ago. And then she remembered something else. A Minotaur, knocking it out with a spell. And then the must have fallen and hit her head, because after that all she remembered was the centaur.
She snapped awake. "What's going on?" She asked the girl.
"You were attacked by a minotaur on your school grounds. You are a half blood, meaning half girl half god."
"I'm not a half blood!" Hermione said. "The centaur went on about that. I'm a witch! And anyway gods aren't real."
"You're both," Annabeth said. "Many aren't but the Greek gods are. My Mom is Athena."
Hermione looked taken aback. "What about my school?"
"Chiron's telling your school right now."
"Okay." Hermione was a half-blood as well as a witch. "I'm Hermione by the way, Hermione Granger."
"I'm Annabeth Chase."
"Okay," Hermione said. "Annabeth?"
"Yes?"
"This is a summer camp right?"
"Yes."
"So why am I here at this time of year, I mean it's a month until the holidays."
"I know, but some of us stay here all year round, like me. You can go back in September,"
"So I'll be here until September?"
"Pretty much, yeah," Annabeth said. "Unless you get offered a quest which is highly unlikely,"
Hermione got out of bed. Her legs were a little shaky but she could walk properly. Annabeth gave Hermione a tour of Camp Half Blood. She showed her the armoury, the stables, the big house, the mess hall, the canoeing lake, the strawberry fields, the Climbing wall, the Forest, the archery range and the bonfire pit.
"Wow, it's a really cool summer camp," Hermione said.
"Wait until you see the cabins," Annabeth said.
When they got to the cabins, Hermione stared in awe. Twelve miss matching cabins were in a U shape in the middle of a field.
"Wow," Hermione said.
"You'll be staying in cabin eleven until you're claimed. That shouldn't be too long but some kids have to wait years until they're claimed. Some never are," Annabeth stated.
"Okay," Hermione said. She walked over to cabin eleven. It looked like a normal cabin really, but the only thing that made it look different was the caduceus on the front with two snakes round it.
"Hermes," Hermione muttered under her breath.
"Yep, the god of thieves and travellers, go and make yourself at home."
A/N Sooo, what do you think? Was it worth it to redo it? I added 200 worlds on too, so it is a bit longer too. Chapter two redone will be up tomorrow.