Hello everyone!
I want to answer some questions that have been asked, Not to seem like I'm a mean person but I would like to point out that this is my story and I know what I am doing. I planned this story with excellent detail. Everything is revised and Re-uploaded once completed.
Some things are not answered until later chapters such as the questions:
Fanfiction readers:
"R:I would have thought the demons in this story would smell Kagome's blood and pinpoint where it was coming from, as well as her impurity (if she was already r***). And why didn't Sesshoumaru hear her scream, he is a demon who can hear miles away (as soon as she entered and got something to drink the abuse started, so it's a short timespan, enough for a demon who was just there to hear her scream). Need some work with those holes in the story, good luck."
My answer: Yes, the demons in this story should be able to do all that. There are holes in the story that are explained in later chapters that will answer the question as to why they didn't know. As to whether she was already raped, the answer is no, thus far for she is still pure.
"R: :Woah, did he r*** her while she was unconscious and was she r*** at the age of 7 by her father. OMG this is just too much."
My Answer: No, if you read through chapter 3 it answers both your questions. As for the too much comment; There is a warning on the summary that this story did contain Rape, Self-harm and Abuse. I won't even remind you to read at your own risk because it only gets worse from here the deeper into the story you get.
"R:Awesome story so far!"
My answer: Thank you, glad you like it. I see that you are not uncomfortable to the untold story of Cause and Effect.:)
Dokuga Readers: Thank you for you reviews, I will continue the story but it may take some time. I am a very busy person so I don't get to do a lot of writing.
If there are any questions unanswered that you would like answered I answer PMs or reviews every few chapters.
Sincerely,
KeikoTakataxx12
