Legend of Korra: Chief Beifong's Child (Old)

by Zero Sukio

LoK AU: What if Chief Lin Beifong took in a young girl she would name Jun. A Modified following of Legend of Korra focusing around Lin, Jun, Mako, The Beifong Family and someone unexpected. What trouble could possible happen, and how will Jun's appearance affect those around her. ((Short First Pairing OCxMako)), (Second Pairing OCxKuvira)(Being Revamped)

5. Author's Note

Author's Note

Hello all, do not worry I am not deleting this story but I will be revising it and updating it. After re-reading this story, I noticed a few major flaws I had set in to it with the way I set out with the story, and possibly the reasons why I have hit a brick wall.

The story pacing. I messed up on this bit. I thought of having a prologue and do a skip with flashbacks to Jun's past. While I still will be adding flashback to the revised story just no huge flashforwards. Then there was the pacing of how the story well from chapter one and this will link in to the other reasons too. There was no development to Jun and Lin's parental/child relationship, Jun and Mako's relationship started and ended too soon and the start of Kuvira and Jun was the same. So I got stuck on how to continue it.

What I plan to do:

1: So I am planning to revamp the story, I will end up keeping and adjusting the Prologue as Chapter One, and with developing Jun and Lin's relationship.

2: Kuvira and Jun also Mako and Jun is a no go. Kuvira really got me stuck on what to write as I really liked her in the Series and her reasons before her corruption and even then was awesome…hello giant ass MECH SUIT comes to mind ^_^. Mako as much as I like him despite his douchebaggingness (Copyrighted word .) in the first Book with his relationships with Korra and Asami. There will be still something like this mainly because, the Pairing at the beginning will be Asami and Jun then future Korra and Jun (I like Korra and Asami and you can guess what may happen for a JunKor pairing :P)

3: Jun's occupation will no long being a Metalbending police Officer. There is a major reason for this, Lin would never allow her to be one. Simple as that, mainly due to the fact Lin became a officer for her Mother to make her proud as Quoted "When I was younger, all I wanted to do was please my mother. I became a police chief because I thought it would make her happy ... but it didn't. You need to make decisions based on what you want. Don't make the same mistakes I did." This was said to her niece Opal in book three. So she wouldn't want Jun to make her mistakes. The other reason is Jun is like her Aunt Suyin, a somewhat free spirit and because of that I do not know just yet what she will do if she has a job at all.

4: For when she is growing up Jun will have other family around here, Uncle Tenzin and Aunt Pema and their kids and the Acolytes, Uncle Bumi, Aunt Kya, Great Aunt Katara and Great Uncle Sokka (Before he passes away), Grandma Toph, Great Uncle Zuko and his family ^_^ so a lot. Suyin's family will show up in book three like normal, where Jun will only have bit and pieces from her Mother about her but not enough for her to link the two together when they meet even with her Aunt Su's bracelet (Hidden blade). So oooooo suspense…. what.

So I hope you all have fun reading the Revamp, I will be keeping the old one up. Also I am still doing my Star Wars AU it'll be posted sometime next week, just remembering why it's a pain to follow a movie and add my own bits for my OC to fit . the joys of a Fanfic writer xD any way catch ya later.

Zee-Kun.