HEY GUYS!
First and foremost...
A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU ALL! Hope you all had fun and had the visit from Santa... ;)
Otherwise obviously i am here with the new update... :P
But before that...Thanks a ton to all the reviewers of MOVING TO AND FRO as well.
Abhi fan, Shikha sharma, guests, Duoayesha, Js Abhi2, Misti, Jyoti A, Shubhangi's Abhi...thanks a ton guys.
Before the update though i would also like to clear somethings about the format in this chapter...
ITALICS is a scene before Daya sir confronted Abhijeet sir in his house about fake maa and everything in normal writing is DURING Daya sir confronted him. Basically normal writing is going simultaneously in present for these both chapters, this time with different characters.
Also, just to clear this all is taking place after ASHA's left, alright.
Hope you have fun reading this chapter!
Thanks for all the lovely reviews!
Chapter - 4 : A little play...
Since Freddy already discussed about the woman's health conditions and her reasons and condition and other related information during her admission in the hospital and in all of it they can't really see anything suspicious from their side as they are not professionals in the field of medicines and since the only reason the lady giving about meeting cid two senior officers be that she knew them, it's really nothing they had to go on. So they decided to move ahead as per Daya's instructions and see what results they get.
Daya got the samples analysed from an outside source not in contact with Cid forensics, while Freddy showed the reports to a DOCTOR friend of his to get the lady's condition as fake or real. Both were working on taking out details about the lady too and got from her address and phone number that she had shifted to MUMBAI only a few days ago due to her worsening health condition which could not be treated where she lived earlier and had been suggested to visit the particular hospital for treatment. Freddy's friend confirmed the results and tests and condition even performing the few tests he could on blood work too which confirmed the diagnoses and the treatment plan too.
As much as the whole not being a game plan relieved the two, it was also increasing the fear and anger in their hearts about the alternate scenario.
Daya got the test results of DNA on next day morning and got to know that the DNA indeed didn't match. He sighed painfully and gulped down his sadness and hurt, he had been hoping for it to be a match...even if it would have still been a lie from his buddy and mentor...it at least would have relieved him of the guilt he carried every day in his heart and he had truly come to respect her as his mother. He let freddy know about the results and the silence he met with conveyed the other person's feelings too...
Both, however were now confused from where to start investigating or verifying or asking...they were in a turmoil...on one hand they suspected their own and on another someone who was seeming innocent till now. They decided to meet in bureau knowing that the team wouldn't be there for today as they completed the case and now daya had asked them to go home and take rest.
Daya entered inside bureau feeling exhausted and completely frustrated, Rajat had told him about Acp sir and Abhijeet coming a day late that is now both would be arriving today which was something really setting Daya off. He threw the medical file of lady on the centre table and said angrily after seeing freddy already there...
" kuch samajh nahi raha hai...(moving his hand in his hair) ek taraf yeh lady hai joh lag raha hai sach keh rahi hai aur ek taraf apne do mahan officers joh already yeh bahot baar dikha chuke hainki woh humare bina koi bhi plan bana sakte hain...DAMNIT! (he hit his fist angrily on table making freddy worried about him) kuch toh choot..
Freddy interrupted his senior trying to analyse another situation as... " Sir aisa bhi toh ho sakta haina ki uss lady ko yeh baat pata ho ki ACP sir aur Abhijeet sir yahan nahi hain aur issliye ussne yeh sabh plan kiya ho? taaki woh hume issme phasa sake..aur sir hum mask...plastic surgery ke kai cases daikh chuke hain...
" oh SHUT UP FREDDY! Har baar itna vishwas bhi sahi nahi..kya tumhe nahi maloom yeh log kitni dafa bewakoof bana chuke hain...haan.." Daya interrupted freddy harshly making Freddy quite instantly, who stood completely silent now.
Daya shaking his head and took a deep breath when realising what he said and how and to whom so instantly apologising ... " freddy i am sorry...mera yeh matlab...i am..
Freddy interrupted softly as it's not something affecting their bond or relation any more,.. " sir please maafi nahi maange...mujhe andaza hai aap kis cheez se guzar rahein hain...", he already knew Daya feeling on edge after meeting that lady having Abhijeet sir dead mother face or may be she was who she was saying she was and that was gripping both of them in scare, anger and irritation. Freddy had not developed a strong bond with Abhijeet in those days or with his mother, however Daya had. He had talked to her for hours, visited her and Abhijeet sir in every free hour he got in day and helped her in every way he could. Daya had developed a bond with her like he had with Abhijeet but when she had died he had not been there to pay his respects, his apologies, his...
Freddy stopped short suddenly feeling he had hit a concrete wall, he said maintaining his tone calm although feeling an untold scare... " Daya sir...(daya focused towards freddy so he continued) aap jabh maaji ka dehant hua tha tabh...
Daya nodded closing his eyes... " main yahan nahi tha...
Freddy added further... " main bhi sir..."
Daya turned around feeling confused about this suddenly but then realising the significance of it although also feeling his heart starting to beat at a faster rate now. Both gathered their thoughts about the scenario and somehow feeling little stress even guilty too about thinking in such plane too where they only proving their own loved ones wrong or LIARS but having no other option as still feeling trapped in the truthfulness and familiarity of lady's face, words and illness.
Daya moved ahead now rubbing his neck while freddy also turned around not noticing the figure who entered bureau at that time. The figure coming in bureau and after seeing the only two officers present there feeling the tense environment so wanted to ask about it but as he looked around found a file on table so pick it up and started going through it as came for the forensic reports copy he gave to Rajat earlier that day as he forgot his copy at home, as he read through the file he was feeling shocked and...stunned...
Daya was still very confused and somehow no information to how to move ahead was really troubling him. He trusted Abhijeet and Acp sir but he also had numerous reasons to not to in this scenario specially after this new development. He took a deep breath and made a decision, but when turned around to convey it to freddy feeling shocked after seeing the uninvited figure...
SALUNKHE SAHAB...
Freddy also turned seeing Daya tensed and clipped expressions and same whisper coming from his mouth too forcing Dr . Salunkhe to look up.
Dr . Salunkhe asked still feeling shocked from what he saw... " Yeh sabh...(looking towards Daya and freddy) yeh sabh kya hai Daya? (to freddy) haan Freddy...yeh tasveer toh...(whisper) abhijeet ki maa aur...aur yeh results toh recent...
Daya couldn't help his anger at this point as it was difficult to believe if the alternative was true that Salunkhe sir had not been involved too..
" hahaha...PLEASE sir...natak toh na karein...aapko toh sabh kuch pata hi hoga..."
The man laughed bitterly in presence of his friend showing his hurt and anger and commented on the dialogue as... " kitna galat sochte haina pradyuman sabh log...ki tum mujhe...hahaha..mujhe kuch batate ho..." In anger he clenched his fist but did nothing else, he had learnt to control his anger from bitter experiences of long ago.
Acp sir who was listening all till now said slowly... " salunkhe...uss samaye halat bahot nazuk the yaar...Abhijeet ki jaan...
Dr . Salunkhe interrupted his buddy in anger... " yeah right...hum log the na usske jaan ke peeche jaise, haan?( ACP sir wanted to interrupt in irritation but salunkhe sir continued unfazed) kitna saath diya pradyuman...kitna roye...kitna dukh... takleef...guilt..remorse sabh kuch...magar sabh aake end kahan kiya tum logon ne haan...(disgusting tone) ek jhoot per?
Dr . Salunkhe opened his fist but still in anger so started roaming around in STUDY where both buddies were locked by Salunkhe who had lots of questions for the Head of CID mumbai. He said again although still roaming making Acp sir a little concerned... " mera nahi pradyuman, Asha nahi, Freddy na sahi, koi bhi nahi..kam se kam DAYA ko toh batana thana? kitne ghanton tak woh kai baar Abhijeet ke ghar ke bahar betha hai kyunki ussme andar jane ki himmat nahi thi...kitna waqt ussne Abhijeet ka saath dene mein...usse wapas zindagi ki aur lane mein lagaya hai...(asking in tired but angry tone) kya sabh bekaar tha pradyuman? Haan tha hi...jabh woh takleef hi nahi thi joh hum samajhte rahe toh usse sympathy kis baat ki mili haan...(clapping which hurts Acp sir allot) kya actor hai sachme tumhara officer...aur tum bhi kam nahi...maa kho dene ke dukh ko tak master kar liya tum logon ne toh...Shaandaar...(asking in taunt in complete anger) OH... kya memory loss ka bhi drama kar raha hai woh...
ACP sir silence and his down head answered Dr . Salunkhe unintended question bringing more tremors and more questions and more jumbled pieces in the once thought made up puzzle, Dr . Salunkhe eyes focused his buddy while he asked in extremely low tone having a warning to not lie this time around...
" PRADYUMAN...kya Abhijeet memory loss ka drama kar raha hai itne saalon se?"
Acp Pradyuman looked towards his buddy face and even though he could have lied, protected his officer he had come to love as his son, but even he knew that may be...may be the revelation was now required, the secret opened up now was in itself disrupting enough but he didn't knew what will the following information do if delivered late after patching of this mess... He gazed towards Salunkhe and started in low pacifying tone... " Salunkhe tu meri baat toh...
Salunkhe sir Stopped the head with his hand and ordered in a tone Acp sir had rarely witnessed from his friend.. " HAAN ya NA pradyuman...sirf haan ya na...mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi explanation ya kahani isske aage matter karegi..."
Acp sir took a small breath let it out and said in barely audible a voice... "...Yeh main nahi...
Dr . Salunkhe involuntarily took a step back as he gulped down so many emotions that had threatened to rise above the barrier. He heard few words in between other memories and words that were overwhelming his brain and heart now...
He has suffered ACUTE AMNESIA... a form in which his brain had somehow completely forgotten or closed every detail of his past.
" Yaar SALUNKHE...
iss takleef aur iss shock se salunkhe ke unnka khudka beta unhe pehchan nahi paya...
...Uss samaye humare...
Well Acp sahab, i must say this officer of yours has become a source of courage for many...the way he has risen literally from ashes of his own self...it's amazing...really an example of bravery and determination...
As Acp sir still continued to explain Dr . Salunkhe showing his hand in stop sign to his buddy not in mood to hear anything else and said in a voice wavering with anger or hurt or pain or all even ACP sir couldn't place... " Pra..pradyuman please...(with his eyes fixed on Acp sir's daring his buddy to say any word even) tum dono already bahot badhi kahani bun chuke ho...abh aur nahi...(angrily either his fist becoming clenched too) unnees saal pradyuman...nineteen years aur tum dono ne hume sirf bewakoof banaya hai...tum log...
He turned his head down with a slight shake and a pain filled smile and a HUNH conveying easily to his buddy about the amount of anger and hurt endured by him bringing some tears even to his dry eyes. Dr . Salunkhe in same form turned around and left the STUDY and then the house leaving his buddy staring behind him towards his retreating hunched form making him wish...he didn't knew what he wished for even, wishing for forgiveness would be cowardliness because what they did with these lovely people surrounding them having trust and respect for them is something unforgivable and wishing for something happened in past to have had happened differently was not his nature so he just closed his eyes took a deep breath and headed towards the rocking chair to give some level of comfort to his tired body and aching head.
Here, Dr . Salunkhe moved out of the house and headed straight to his car having fast yet forced tired angry steps. His eyes were focused ahead only on the vehicle and he after opening the car lock yanked the door open and sat inside closing the door harshly not caring about the amount of noise his actions created. His clenched fist too finally slammed itself on the steering wheel with a DAMN IT! coming as programmed from his system, unaware completely that there was another man, having had a similar confrontation was sharing same position like him, may be in more anger and pain, but still with clenched burning fist having hit the steering wheel. He really didn't knew what came ahead and first time in life wanted the things to unfold themselves as he was not sure he would like what was beyond this and what further turns there life would take after this revelation. Well at least he was sure about one thing, he will stay with Daya and support Daya and freddy no matter what as his buddy,the head of Cid mumbai has lost that trust and support while Abhijeet, he didn't knew how he would forgive him himself ever.
He thought of earlier that day how they had discussed this little plan, still afraid about the outcome...
" Kya keh rahe ho Daya haan? kaunsa plan? (asking again about the reports) aur yeh sabh kya...
This time freddy took the charge seeing Daya completely irritated while Dr . Salunkhe in confusion and anger both...
" Salunkhe sahab...kal hum logon ko ek hospital se call aaya tha ki koi lady patient hain joh Acp sir aur Abhijeet sir se milna chah rahi hain...
Freddy explained the whole scenario to the old doctor showing the amount of shock on the later one's face to daya as Freddy's voice dimmed at the end while the eyes of doctor widened with each word unable to recognise the extent of present scenario. Dr . Salunkhe asked, his brain working in same pace and manner as the officers...
" tum logon ne maan liya isse sach? arrey hum logon ne twins, look alikes, clones sabh...
Daya interrupted now taking a deep breath... " sabh daikh liya hai sir...tests verify karwa liye hainki beemari sach hai aur death inevitable...koi plan nahi hai shayad...magar yeh nahi keh sakte kisi ki chaal hai ya sach...Abhijeet ka DNA inse match toh nahi karta magar inki baat per jaaye toh karna bhi nahi chahiye...(grabbing his forehead lightly with one hand) aage kuch samajh bhi nahi...
The three stayed silent as the true severity, the true truth, the true hurt and the consequences of the whole tried to sink in but even that was seeming impossible as they still can't believe something so well hidden from them from so long about so important relations of their lives.
Daya said suddenly breaking the silence, his voice little distant but confident...
" ek tareeka hai...(freddy and Dr . Salunkhe looks confusingly towards him so he explains strongly) sach bata dete hain dono ko...
Dr . Salunkhe and freddy feels shocked as of course they don't believe that the alternative would be a reality indeed and telling them this with what daya suggests would be like themselves betraying their trust, Dr . Salunkhe comments with a little irritation and anger in his tone... " kya keh rahe ho daya,haan? sach plan hua yeh sabh toh jante ho dono ko kitna dukh hoga...hum log hi aise shak karenge toh...
" aur agar sach huya sir toh? (his tone tired and sad now) mujhse jyada takleef shayad kisi ko na ho sir...main khud nahi chahta magar yahi ek rasta hai...hum log un (forcefully) aunty..(salunkhe sir and freddy smiles sadly on the innocence of the word) per bharosa nahi kar rahe toh kuch poochne ka kya fayda iss waqt...(convincing tone) this is our best bet sir...aur agar jhooth huya toh keh denge ki yeh yeh baat hai...hum sabh per shak huya hai sir pehle bhi...Sir aur ABHIJEET samjhenge...magar humare paas koi aur tareeka nahi hai..."
freddy and Salunkhe sir glanced at each other and nodded after that. The three already knew Abhijeet and Acp sir arriving today so it would be best time for them, Salunkhe sir would be talking to Acp sir while Daya to Abhijeet,plan was simple...tell the lie you considered truth or the truth you considered lie so confidently that the true truth revealed itself. Freddy would be staying in contact to both through bluetooth and search for records on the lady and check all records related to her and abhijeet of past.
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Individual replies ahead...
Duoayesha - hahaha...i hope these shocks not having adverse effects on your health. ;). Arrey yaar sach mein i am glad you liked the surname i thought for days and changed it a million times before settling on this one. And yes, because it sounds regal. Matches our Abhijeet sir personality well. About A MISTAKE sure yaar...give me some time though because it's not written and i won't start it again before it's complete from my side. So the wait for that i can't promise is over. I hope you had fun and shocks reading this chapter as well.
SGJ - thank you dear. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well.
WisMod - I like your username yaar! Though i can't really get what it means but it sounds great. And thanks allot for your comments yaar. Really made me feel energetic and confident about the story again. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well, more of a filler though i think.
Shikha sharma - hahaha...yaar i hope your confusion got a little cleared in this chapter, rest all...keep speculating yaar.. ;). Hope you had fun reading this chapter!
Ladddo - hey! you are back! Feels nice to see your review again really! Hahaha, chalo phir humne aapko iss ghustakhi ke liye maaf kiya...hehehe...hmm...hope this chapter cleared something. Although i don't think memory is a issue it's more about that he knew the lady he had called his mother had been fake. And Daya and others feel angry on him for hiding all that. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well. Awaiting your review!
Duosun - Hey Dear! Hahaha...i am glad you finally checked FF because it's good to see your review really! About ASHA-ABHI...kya yaar sabhne hi socha...i think i mentioned something i didn't realize i did. Or i am just too platonic in my life to realize this stuff...sigh ;P. Hope you had fun reading this chapter too!
Tina - Yes yaar it's confusing but i hope you'll be able to understand more with coming chapters. Hope you had fun reading this one as well. Thanks allot for reviewing dear.
BFF - HEY! It's absolutely alright yaar! I know, i had same problems with FF in past year as there are really no duo writers anymore. Hahaha...GOD aapko bhi...i think i gotta clear this thing now that it's really not Asha- ABHI based. I was just trying to show something fun and suspicious altogether yaar. Everything platonic surely. Hope you liked this chapter! Have fun reading and thanks for review.
Js Abhi2 - Hey! happy to see u back as well! Thanks for reviewing dear. Hope you had fun reading.
gB - Hey dear! yaar basically CID provides no more inspiration regarding DUO and busy life and stuff really makes it hard to write something and be interested in it for whole duration so really i can't promise for anything more but if i do write i'll surely post something more.
Dada - AHA! Now finally pallot coming in form, haan...growing big big red seengs on her head. Chalo, about all your speculations...see bunni can't comment on those...she sincerely promised not to reveal anything. Or give any hints as then DUO take all her carrots, you see. And it's winter.
About patient history and stuff...i tried to add the little paragraph in beginning but yaar in bunni head it's all cleared while they talked to doctor in between and in way to the hospital so, yes it's a mistake of bunni little head and big ears. and DADA...1018 nahi 2018... :P:P:P
About Freddy sir, hmm...see Dada it's really my first time where i tried to show something more personal on these officers front with their POV and more deeper thoughts, it's looking inside CID heads with a magnifying glass in my head and the thing is that the plot is clear to me so there are few things i am showing earlier to create a greater impact with later chapters but i surely tried to limit that if it seems out of character for him.
Daya sir reaction...yaar i hope iss chapter ke baad you got it's not really a reaction? And still if it feels OTT...yaar i wrote the story..at least these few beginning chapters in a phase where CID still had much emotional value in my opinion so...yes it may seem exaggerated...also kya dada...bunni always exaggerated emotions, na...abh tak toh aapko aadat padh jani thi...hehehe.
hath zakhmi? hmm...he broke a glass...but yeh kisi later chapter mein reh gaya shayad...hehehe...sorry.
Everything going on right now is after ASHA left in first chapter. Italics are just some scenes i am showing later, for effect of course. Baaki sabh present stuff hi hai abhi. I'll let you all know when past stuff started.
About Asha problem with Abhi sir, it's just something i added to give some character to her and her leaving. I tried to imply that it was due to Abhijeet sir memory loss accident that she didn't feel comfortable or just felt insecure with cid mumbai. Every accident in my opinion leaves a lasting impact on people, whether victims or their closed ones so i just tried to show her leaving from that front.
I just hope pallot not beating bunni after this chapter or few more chapters...hehehe... Thank you so much reviewing Daya. Hope you had fun reading!
P.S - Kya baat hai aaj kal dada IF per bilkul nahi ate kya?
Cid Duo fan - I hope this chapters cleared a few things for you dear. Warna may be later chapters would. Otherwise just PM me alright?. Thank you so much for reviewing. I hope you had fun reading this chapter.
Jyoti A - Sure yaar, i'll try my best but i am not promising that it would be soon. Well, i think you are the only one who actually got the essence of the chapter so yes it's all about it. hahaha...nahi yaar...NANDITA already wrote something on that front. I have wanted to write something on that for very long as well...but bas kabhi mauka hi nahi laga. And now i am not interested...hehe...so many speculations...abh pata nahi kya sahi kya galat...hmmm... ;). Thanks allot for reviewing yaar. Hope you had fun reading.
Shubhangi's Abhi - yaar...i can't really say anything to your praise except i try and i am really glad i could portray him the way he really is. For me he is one of the most...imperfectly perfect characters ever created. It's like he is intelligent and smart and mature and has a painful past but at the same time he is flawed in his own way and has his own quirks like any human being is. It's amazing and depressing how they created such a beautiful character so long ago and completely ruined him now. Yaar ye kyun aapne THE WORDS ki yaad dila di mujhe...i read that story again and again and again after MRF posted it. Something brilliant. And yes, you caught me...that story made me tear up as well. Yaar...bas abh itni tareef na karo...i am turning red...hahaha.
Dada ki stories? Saari padh lo yaar...they all are duo based and all are simply amazing...well except a few. Read ODD ONE OUT. It's an amazing fic. Baaki aise mujhe naam toh yaad nahi but in next reply i will surely look up some and suggest you.
Oh god...you are having the bad girl streak like me then...like to see Abhijeet sir injured...hmmm... ;). His expressions are more touching and real when he plays hurt...Haaye yaar feels amazing to tell this to someone once again.
About story, yes you got it right. baaki sabh abh dekho jaise jaise reveal hota hai... ;) Hope you had fun reading this chapter! Thanks for reviewing!
kirti - It's alright dear, it doesn't matter how late, i am glad you reviewed at least and interested in the story still. yaar just trying to write complete sentences please...mujhe kuch kuch hi samajh aaya aapne kya kaha. Sorry if it made you feel bad. Thanks for reviewing again. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well.
Sami - Hey dear! it's alright yaar...jabh bhi time mile aap tabh review kardo. but i felt nice that you gave a long review this time for me...thanks allot dear.
72 times! yaar itni baar toh maine bhi nahi padhi hongi woh stories...aapne toh pakka record bana liya hoga yaar...thank you so much for reading and appreciating them yaar. Arrey! hahaha...i guess it's favorite among Abhijeet sir fans then...hehehe. His expressions when he is acting injured are just speechless...and he looks speechless too...hehehe. Negative role...hmm...let's see.. ;) thodha thodha shyad acha bhi hon. Kis per based hai matlab? Kis episode per? It's not really related to any cid episode in particular but haan mostly it's based on Abhijeet sir's past. Thank you so much for reviewing yaar. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well.
Thanks allot to Guests and all readers as well. Hope you all guys are enjoying the story still. I know it's little confusing and you are open to ask anything you want just not the main part, sorry...i had a deal with DUO to not to reveal that. ;)
Missed Krittika Di, Angelbetu, Ad fan, tia, luvcidduodosti this time. Hope you all guys are still interested and around.
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