Aloha guys!
I am here again with the new chapter.
But as always i have noted a few things so i would like to discuss them first,
First of all i am seeing that a lot of you were really confused with the last chapter so i want to know
whether it was just due to that you are not understanding things or situations or it's because of the way i am writing?
please let me know about this guys, yes i want you confused but in last chapter a lot of you just said ki kuch bhi nahi samajh aaya
so i thought ki kahi writing mein toh kuch gadbad nahi.
Another thing, Alright i'll be updating on alternate days only but from 1st my college is starting and i have a schedule of tests so there would be some days i won't be able to update. I'll let you know the update schedule in my next update on Sunday though.
Lastly, Have fun reading everyone and Do review!
It's a bit long chapter than usual. So beware.
CHAPTER - 6 : Knowing Truth
Daya stopped his car in the hospital parking space, turned off the engine and got out of the car slamming the door shut. His eyes having anger and dried up tears, a deadly combination for his foes and enemies but even a fierce combination for his friends and family.
He was feeling a coldness settle over his heart while the anger and hurt burning his brain. He got to reception and asked about the specific room, showing his badge although the lady there already recognized him, telling him in apologetic tone...
" I am sorry sir magar visiting hours khatam ho chuke hain...(looking at clock and feeling angry after seeing time so said) and waise bhi patient abhi So rahi hain...iss waqt...
Daya replied as he showed the lady his badge, his voice terse and strained with controlled anger... " ma'am it's important please..."
The lady looked at him tensely and then nodded while picking up the phone and dialing someone... " main unke attending doctor ko bula deti hun sir...he is still in hospital...
Before daya could protest the line connected and the lady informed the doctor about his presence who agreed to visit once. He said to the receptionist, an edge to his voice... " mujhe pata hai room kahan hai ma'am...main dekh leta hun...waise bhi i need alone time with her..."
The receptionist this time landed him no favour and replied in strict tone unnerved even by his fierce eyes apparently in habit of dealing with families of various kinds from different patients.. " i am sorry sir magar jiss patient se aapko milna hai she is critical...we don't allow even family members at this hour aur aapko toh investigate karna hai unhe...doctor will have to accompany you...it's hospital protocols for any critical patient..."
Daya clenched his fist tightly as feeling really irritated being on edge already. Freddy had called him to let him know about Acp sir confirming their suspicion too but from freddy's voice he knew there was something else also that he was hiding from him. He took a deep breath standing there and rubbed his neck tightly, trying to compose his overwhelmed emotions. HE had suggested the IDEA half hoping it wouldn't work and half afraid it would and the result would not be something they would be able to accept as easily. His fear had come true snatching away and betraying all the trust he had had for Abhijeet and even for ACP sir.
Was the LIE really that important? Was it worth two decades of trust? friendship? reputation? had it even been necessary? Or was it just a game? He needed answers to these questions and to many more. He wanted to know why he had been lied to? Why...
He stopped feeling as a sudden feel of dread overcome him as he realized that may be, Abhijeet himself had not known what was happening. He hadn't been aware who the lady really was and had been later informed by someone that she wasn't really his mother. That it all had been as much painful for Abhijeet then or even more than it is for him now. He rubbed his neck again, his body feeling more tensed now. Of course, how Abhijeet would have known whether she was his mother or not? He Didn't damn well recognize her or anybody else. Right? OH GOD! Did Daya really blamed his friend over something that may have come as a shock to his friend as well?
But he must have had some photos of his mother, right? Or whether he really had had a mother or not? Oh god, they had missed out on so many things during those days, never considering or verifying anything. Did someone really tricked them all those years ago this badly? But daya remembers calling and getting her reply, he had known she had been gone away for some days and had returned for abhijeet. And ACP sir...he must have known something...
They hadn't considered this before...just jumping on conclusions that it was ACP sir's and Abhijeet's fault all those years ago...it may not have been their fault at all. But Abhijeet didn't really deny anything or seemed shocked while Salunkhe sir confirmed Acp sir didn't deny not knowing either...what...And the familiarity with which the lady kept asking for both? May be they both knew the truth and preferred not to tell them to prevent that hurt? but..the hurt would have only decreased...something else...
It was at that moment the attending Doctor arrived and after seeing Daya reached towards him and called him... " Officer...
Daya didn't hear him at first so he glanced towards the receptionist in confusion who shrugged and called the Cid officer herself too, but with still no reply the Doctor tensed and called him again, this time pressing his shoulder to bring him back in this world from his world of thoughts... " OFFICER..."
Daya jerked feeling the touch and hearing the loud tone and looked towards the Doctor who was eyeing him in concern, Daya jerked his head and presented a forceful smile with replying in apologetic tone... " i am sorry...main kuch soch raha tha bas...(asking desperately) can i meet her now?"
The doctor started moving with a nod and Daya followed, he asked softly seemingly in concern for Daya... " you Fine officer? (daya nodded tersely so he continued) sir yeh visiting hours nahi hain jaisa ki nurse ne aapko bataya hoga...aur investigation ke liye hum log usually officers ko accompany karte hain in case of critical patients...but i personally think...(eyeing Daya) it's not an investigation...
Daya looked towards the Doctor suspiciously who smiled and answered in soft tone... " woh aapke aur aapke saathi ke baare mein mujhse bahot baar poonch chuki hain...(explaining) aap log kal aane ka keh ke gaye the aur aaye nahi toh...(daya felt guilty so he downed his head while doctor just said to make the officer feel better) I know aap log busy hogaye honge so we kept her under sedation mostly...aap nahi aate aaj toh main aapko kal bulane hi wala tha...(both reached in front of the hospital room now so doctor informed daya further) she is better than before now...sedation ki wajah se thodhi groggy hongi but strength badh gayi hai...still i suggest ki aap jaldi se apni baat kar lijiyega...and please don't let her get stressed...
Daya nodded towards the doctor thankfully although his eyes, his focus was now on the weak old lady lying inside with white hospital sheets over her body. He jerked his head averting his gaze to control his emotions, even though the lady was not Abhijeet's mother but yet he had developed a connection with her, as she had said,she may not have been Abhijeet's mother but she had loved all of them unconditionally and similarly she also had become an important force in all their lives, he was not so sure now that he regarded her with as mush as respect as before, but he was not sure either that he wouldn't care for her as he had earlier.
He entered inside the room opening the door softly, and closing it in same silence, he stood there itself not moving forward. He looked at her and studied her feeling hesitant to say anything or how to breach the subject, but he needed to KNOW the truth. He needed to know the reason, the desperation for that LYING call from his father like senior and so called friend. He flinched at the thought realizing did he really just broke every relationship with ABHIJEET?
Shaking his head and making up his mind he moved ahead and softly called, his voice strong... " Aunty Jee...". He didn't knew why he called her that, she had been MAA jee for him for all these years, but then he had not known the truth. Her eyes flickered a little and her fingers moved, this time he moved ahead with little less hesitation but when he called her his voice trembled... " AUNTY... Aunty JEE..."
The lady opened her eyes slowly as Daya settled himself on a stool beside her, his eyes taking in her every movement as he wondered how he would start the conversation? Finally opening her eyes completely she looked around and after finding a figure sitting next to her she blinked a few times and tried to moved her hand towards a makeshift table beside her bed, Daya got what she wanted so he reached for the spectacle case and after taking them handed the glasses to her. She put them on and again looked towards her side this time recognizing the figure so a small smile appeared on her face, she asked softly, a pinch of tease in her tone...
" DAYA BETA...MAA jee nahi kaha mujhe?"
Daya hesitated to answer the lady, he had called her MAA jee until their last meeting and he wondered whether it had been an agreement on her part or a connection on theirs to accept the call? Before he could answer he heard some footsteps from outside so glanced towards the door and seeing the shadows outside sighed. He had needed some alone time with her, to understand about the situation years ago, to understand whether or not he should be angry on Abhijeet , whether it had been a mistake, a game, a play or a long stretched prank? He didn't consider that it could have been a prank but then he hadn't ever considered that the lady had not been Abhijeet's mother either. Or the lady they all believed to be abhijeet's who was believed to be dead hadn't actually died. And then who was Abhijeet's mother and where was she now? Could he even trust this lady if she had been a con all those years ago and had perhaps even fooled ACP sir and Abhijeet during that time when none of them was sure of anything anymore...
SO many questions, all related, roaming around the one friend he had considered his brother, partner in crime, from whom he had learned so much, who had been his senior, his mentor once and now probably he knew nothing about this person in reality at all. Or his life earlier...he never really paid attention..or to the fact that Abhijeet must have had someone...
He looked down taking a deep breath and when the two figures entered inside the room he looked up again at them finding an unusual hesitance on both faces so wondered whether there was anything else left for him to know? He looked from Freddy to Dr . Salunkhe and before he said anything heard from the doctor himself...
" Daya hume tumse kuch baat karni hai..(after glancing towards freddy once) do minute bahar aao please..."
Daya eyed him suspiciously and silently shook his head in NO, he had gathered the courage to face this with much difficulty, reached this far with much hesitance and now he won't leave without knowing the whole truth. He said slowly although making his words clear...
" salunkhe sahab...abhi hum log baad mien baat karte hain...doctor ne kaha hai jyada samaye nahi lena hai hume yahan toh..."
The lady who was trying to look towards the newly entered figures smiled at Daya's comment softly and with a love in her eyes that made daya cringe in pain, she said softly... " koi baat nahi DAYA beta...aap jaao...main toh yahi hun...aap...
Daya took a deep breath and after taking a glance at the two uncomfortable and scared looking figures behind said softly to the lady... " nahi...(forcefully) MAA Jee..pure din aaj aane ka waqt nahi mila...abh aaya hun toh baat toh karni hi hai...(asking desperately although tried it does not showed in his words as got that the lady didn't knew that they knew nothing about this at all) purani kitni saari baatein yaad karni hain..."
The lady took a shuddering deep breath scared the two young men present in the room while the doctor moved ahead to check the lady. The three pairs of eyes glanced at each other as the lady coughed painfully feeling a pain setting in their own hearts too. Daya gripped the lady hand hesitantly who instantly gripping it little tightly as she coughed again. Dr . Salunkhe now checked her heart and wanted to call her attending so asked freddy, when She spoke up in her soft tone...
" arrey nahi (she glanced at Dr . Salunkhe but can't recognise him as well so just said) bhai sahab...yeh sabh toh aam hai abh mere saath...yeh bimari bhi na...(she said trying to assure all of her health) main theek hun...bilkul...(looking at Daya now who was gripping her hand) sach beta...(daya after realizing loosened his grip although didn't leave it entirely while nodding hesitantly, the lady said tiredly, her voice having tears and pain) har yaad toh achi nahi hai itne saalon pehle ki...magar sach...mere paas unse badhkar bas kuch yaadein hi aur hain...inn unnees saalon mein bhi...
The three glanced at each other silently, asking Why? Daya averted his gaze back to the lady and said softly, a forced smile making it's way up his lips... " toh maaji woh din hi aise the...(the lady nodded although the painful tears increased in her eyes confused daya that whether memories be good for her or bad? he said further not wiping her tears feeling hesitance although this time he asked more softly but having a desperate edge to his voice) shuruwat kahan se hui thi maa jee...yaad hai aapko...
All heard some foot steps outside so their attention turned there although after seeing the shadows passed the door sighed and get back while not noticing the soft returning of those shadows closely towards the door. The lady glanced towards Daya, her eyes having that exact pain that daya at those days had become so used to seeing, the loss always evident in her eyes, he marvelled at her ability although feeling a deep sense of anger and hurt reminding how much he himself had shed tears after feeling the fake pain of this lady.
The lady asked softly before anything... " Daya beta...Abhijeet beta aur ACP sahab nahi aayein kya...(trembling voice) unke bina yeh kahani kuch bhi nahi hogi..."
Daya closed his eyes in anger unable to answer her question and freddy seeing his grip tremble said in order to save his senior from further pain... " nahi aunty jee woh log abhi ek meeting mein hi busy hain...(softly manipulating) hum log unke aane ke baad hi...
Before the lady said anything Daya quickly said glaring at freddy first, " NAHI...hum aaj hi...(realising so avert his gaze from freddy's face and turned towards lady and explained in soft tone) maa jee mujhe toh aaj hi baat karni hai...woh log toh pata nahi kabh aayenge...kam ka kya pata chalta hai..haina? "
The lady nodded pressing Daya's palm softly giving Daya a warmly feeling in his palm but a cold shiver in spine. She began, her voice trembling but all the spectators feeling a tone of proud in it...
" mera beta DELHI police force mein tha...(proudly) bahot bahadur officer tha woh...bahot jyada...(sadly) magar duniya aise logon se jalti hai...criminals usske peeche padhe rehte the...(lovingly) magar usska ek dost tha...bahot acha dost...(looking towards Daya either her eyes were distant in another era) ABHIJEET...dono ne najane kitne criminals pakde saath...halanki Abhijeet MUMBAI mein rehta tha magar dono ki dosti kam nahi hui... Abhijeet bahot (cracking tone) aage jana chahta tha...usske parivar mein usske pita ke alawa koi aur nahi tha...joh khud forces mein the...(all feeling a high jolt in their bodies as never heard of Abhijeet father before) mera bacha bahadur toh tha magar apne parivar ke liye darta bhi tha...(taking a deep shuddering breath either also felt that the soft grip on her hand did not tighten this time) ek roz ussne aise hi aakar mujhe ek bahot badhe case ka bataya...(her eyes becomes unfocused) koi undercover case tha...woh door rehta ghar se bahoth magar success milne per bahot badhi post milne ke chances the...bahot badhi gang thi koi...usse aur Abhijeet ko chuna gaya tha...aur kuch officers the...MUMBAI jana tha shayad...main usse...(teary trembling tone) mana hi nahi kar payi...
By the teary tone all realised something bad happened with her son but Daya was feeling confused, if the case had been undercover Abhijeet wouldn't have come to work for CID in those days...or was that his cover? He was feeling really confused when the lady started again...startling him and other who were lost in the feeling of that loss and their own hurt... " 1 saal...woh wapas hi nahi aaya...hum log Mumbai gaye...bahot pata kiya magar...magar kuch jawab nahi mila kabhi...kisi ne kuch nahi bataya...woh gayab hogaya tha sabhki zindagi se jaise woh kabhi kuch tha hi nahi...(her tears fell down her eyes freely, all feeling her sadness and sorrow as they heard it often in their lives, felt angry, bickered with their seniors but had nothing in their hands eventually) aur phir ek roz mujhe phone aaya..."
" (taking deep breaths) unlogon ne kaha apna beta chahiye ho toh aajayo...main wahan gayi...magar...un logon ne ek aur nayi shart rakhdi saamne...tasveerein dikahyi...bahot..bahot gande log the woh beta...bahot khatarnaak...mujhse kaha yeh ek kaam aur phir mera beta waapis...main main...(tightening her grip on the hand encased in hers) mana kaise karti...mera beta...(crying) woh tasveerein...main nahi...mana...police ke paas bhi nahi jane ki himmat thi mujhmein...bharosa hi nahi tha...main aur kya...main...maan gayi...
Daya feeling a high jolt in his body as realized some part of what he thought was true. They ALL really had been lied to...even Abhijeet and ACP sir...they had been lied to and deceived and Abhijeet...his whole energy and anger deflated. Although he somehow felt the other two people around him turning more strained and angry and he realized they may have not reached to the conclusion he had to yet. But...the familiarity with which the lady demanded to see ACP sir and Abhijeet told that they knew about her deceive then why? Why hide? He wanted to tell them that their relation, their trust was not wrong...that that his friendship was not wrong when the lady started again after taking few drops of water.
Here outside the door, the shadowed figures turned his head down as after 19 years of suppressing those memories, those emotions, they were surfacing again, threatening to overwhelm him from their sharp truth shaped teeth...he remembered the days again, and this time as he had seen them not as the world saw them...
I am not much aware of hospital protocols regarding their patients and police much but i am assuming that since It's CID and and the patient herself asking for them so it may not prove much of a problem for our officers to enter her room. Really sorry if this wrong and hurts anybody.
Hope it was not too big a chapter to handle, because next few chapters would be of same length mostly.
Rest, i hope this chapter was a little more understandable and cleared some things up.
Do review guys.
Individual replies Ahead...
luvcidduodosti - hey dear! Thanks for reviewing! I hope you enjoyed reading this chapter as well.
Shikha sharma - *singing* laga laga laga shock laga...hahaha, yaar i am writing half of the story to give shocks so i am happy it is indeed becoming successful in that. I hope my writing not confusing you dear. And yes dekhte hain aage abh yeh naya kaun aaya hai... ;)
Hahaha, hope for Abhijeet injured club? ;) hum logon ko bahar kar diya jayega if we started such a thing publicly for the amount of inappropriate content there would be in it ;) . Ek kaam karte hain, ek secret club khol lete hain with special membership only, hehehe. Thank you so much for reviewing dear! Will be waiting for your review on this chapter as well.
Tina - Yaar what you are not understanding? Is it the general story or is it my writing altogether that's confusing? Please tell me because then i will try to make it a bit more simpler if it's because of the writing. Alright? Thank you so much reviewing dear. I hope this chapter was able to clear your doubts a little.
Priya - hey dear! KYA! itne saare chapters ek saath hi padh liye! Kya speed hai yaar aapki...hmmm...manna padega! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing dear! I hope you be with the story till end now!
Sami - haan yaar nahi kar rahi shift but mere college start hone wale hain so i may get late in updating nonetheless. Even though i'll try my best to update a schedule accordingly every week.
Hahaha, yes now i am getting that most my reviewers liked to see ABHIJEET in pain. Hmmm, chalo yes i started to write something as i told you mere paas kuch similar sa already drafted tha but i am not sure till when i'll be able to complete it. YES YES! I saw the promo as well, i am not that much excited because they always ruin any officer centric episodes, specially Abhijeet sir based ones but i am excited still. It may even pull me back to watching CID once again.
Thank you so much for reviewing dear!
Duoayesha - No i didn't.. ;). I am glad you liked their convo and Abhijeet sir's portrayal because i was afraid that it wouldn't come out quite right. Especially when it may seem a bit out of character for him, but then situation bhi toh out of ordinary haina. Hmm, he is not per say disappointed with ACP sir but it's like he was feeling trapped in a series of bad happenings and then Acp sir telling him something made the trap deeper. SO he was just depressed. Thank you so much for reviewing dear!
Krittz - hey di! Kya sach kuch nahi samajh aaya? Di, is it my writing jiski wajah se kuch samajh nahi aaya? ya phir you are just confused because of the secrets in general? Let me know please. Thank you so much for reviewing di. Hope this chapter was clearer and cleared some of your doubts.
SS 1912 - Hey! Thank you so much for liking my stuff yaar, it's really a big big compliment and the best achievement for me. Hope you enjoyed this chapter as well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
AD Fan - Yaar i promised you na that i will surely complete this story, chahe thodhi late updates ke saath karun but it will be completed trust me. About your confusions, hmm...see i hope this chapter cleared a few of them? And ABHI did lie yaar, a big lie indeed. Abh dekhna yeh hai why and what will be the consequences of it's revelation. Thank you so much for reviewing dear.
Shubhangi's ABHI - HEY! Missed you in the last chapter but chalo maaf kiya aapko, pehli galti ke liye. Next time se no maafi.
Hahaha, bas sirf itna batane ke liye? Yaar PM kar diya hota ;) Awww...i thought it was me and my writing that you liked but yahan bhi Abhijeet sir ne meri fanship cheen li..tch tch. But chalo since i am like that too and since i write mostly because i love him so much and want to portray him the way i see him, i am actually happy you read my stories because of him...hehehe.
Yes, ADITYA sir is a very natural actor, he plays intense emotions so fantastically that you can see the emotion in his eyes itself. I still moon over that last shot of his face and his eyes at the end of the episode ABHIJEET KA INTEQAAM 1.
Odd one out GD ki story hai but i guess Dada ne yahan nahi post ki hogi. Her most stories are in IF so if you can go there and read i'll suggest you some. There are many other stories in IF too which you can read.
Yes i am thinking about catching up on both episodes but the thing is my family is no longer interested in CID and it's timing is really bad, so dekhte hain. Warna i'll watch the episodes on Sony liv. Even i am excited this time
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About 4th chapter - Kya baat sabh kuch hi pasand aagaya kya chapter mein, hehehe. Hmmm...let's see aage ki kya chakkar hai yeh. Hahaha, yes Both Abhijeet sir and Aditya sir deserves oscar for their performances in their own worlds.
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About 5th chapter - Arrey half of it Daya sir already knew from Abhijeet sir but the rest of it which salunkhe sir personally asking to Acp sir and not be in their plan, that's the thing salunkhe sir wanted to hide. Abh yeh cheezein toh saari later chapters mein clear hongi, kya bataya kya nahi.
I am really glad you liked their portrayals yaar. I am trying to portray them right and capture most emotions i think they showcased but it's a complicated task. So thanks allot for linking that. Thanks for reviewing yaar. Also, yaar it becomes difficult for me to reply to such a long review, so let's continue the most of our out of the story context discussion in PM's okay? I hope you don't mind that dear. Just PM me if you are comfortable and if not, i'll have to reserve you a special place at end of all replies then, hehehe ;).
Cid duo fan - Oh, ohk alright dear! Thank you so much for reviewing and reading yaar. But yes studies are first and foremost so pehle aap studies pe focus karo, stories waghera toh aati rahengi alright? Don't worry about the reviewing, jabh bhi time mile tabh review karna, ok? All the best for your studies yaar. THanks again.
Angelbetu - Hey dear! Aww...Confused bhai chota angel itna confused kahan hogaya hai? ahan, so many questions but i can't really answer any of them yet so you'll have to wait for the later chapters. Yes, darl you ARE a very blessed writer, but dekho DADA and MRF di ki toh baat hi alag hai, can't compare both of them with anyone really yaar. Dada toh meri inspiration hain hi humesha se. But tum bhi bahot acha likhti ho so don't undermine yourself, alright.
thank you so much for reviewing dear.
duosun - hahaha, me too me too! with multiple seengs actually. And a pointed tail. Hmmm.. ;)
Hahaha, about the reasons for the lie, i think sabhki apni koi theory zaroor hogi, it's just that since i began the task of revealing it first i am allowed to create my own storyline... ;). Hahah, yes i know most of you caught up on that dialogue. It's so much fun to give shocks and speculation ideas... ;). About updates, i will keep them to alternative ideas till i can yaar, but as it as my schedule would change once college starts from 1st so you'll have to wait a little more at times. I hope that would be forgivable. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing yaar. Hope the chapter cleared a few things. or arised more doubts. I am happy with later more... ;)
BFF - Hmmm...Salunkhe sir and freddy sir are trying to hide that revelation which was not even a part of daya sir's plan. But you'll have to see yourself what that revelation was. Hahaha, yes i am excited to begin the phase of that myself. But it won't be that much exciting a part really. Thank you so much for reviewing yaar. I hope some things got cleared in this chapter.
GD - This chapter has nothing of the sort, but yes next chapter se while showing any past i'll mention the year at least. Date and time thodha jyada hogaya for bunni little brain...hehehe.
Awww...culprit! Abhijeet sir mujhpe gussa karenge abh...hawww...
about acp sir and abhijeet sir father...hehehehe...i am really surprised and actually amused that each one of you caught that sentence in between all the sentences and dialogues and paragraphs. It's really fun to see this.
Yes for maa jee character only.
hmm...hope iss chapter ne maa jee character per kuch clear kiya ho. Baaki yaar...later chapter.
Hahaha...yes BUNNI got Dada reference but for freddy sir's sake and his sanity bunni would like to confirm that bunni is not a fan of supernatural like Dada.. ;)
Hmmm...yes...may be...shayad...a bit.. ;)
OooO! Did you really think that the BG of Abhijeet sir Daya sir got be absolutely correct? Or that log file on him? ;)
Thank you so much for liking this stuff Dada, really a big compliment from a writer i am still learning from to portray most characters with absolute fineness.
Hahaha, then you keep shinning those because i think Bunni would need a ride out within a few chapters now, hehehe. You will save bunni na? (innocent eyes)
Thank you so much for reviewing Dada. Please coming on IF once a week at least. hehehe.
kirti - Hey dear! Thank you so much for reviewing. I am glad you liked Abhi-acp part. Thanks again.
Jyoti A - Hehehe, ok, till the time i can manage i'll update at alternate days only.
Awww...I am happy and feel confused whether to take the intelligent comment as a compliment or not? was i not intelligent before... ;). Hahaha, thank you so much dear. But i am still that half pagal and half obsessed fan girl and writer who tries to dip abhijeet sir in any kind of trouble she can find...hehehe.
Yaar, there are very little specifically duo scenes in this story. I am really sorry for that.
Hmm...yaar it's meant to leave you in confusion and speculations over what that dialogue meant, so really i am happier this way. But yes if it's honestly creating trouble, my way of writing, i'll surely edit some stuff and it easier. Please let me know.
Yes...kuch toh gadbad hai Jyoti. Hehehe. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and liking it dear.
Tia - Thank you so much for liking it dear. I hope you like this chapter as well. Thanks for reviewing as well.
Js abhi - hahaha...loved your mumamiya. hehehe. Thank you so much for reviewing and liking it dear. Hope you had fun reading this chapter as well.
Thanks a ton to everyone else who's reading and liking this story. Thanks again for reviewing too GUYS! Missed gb, ladddo and SGJ again.
Rest, Hope you all had fun reading this chapter as well.
Do reply to my question in beginning in your reviews guys.
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