Hey Guys!

I am back with the update as promised.

Before anything though, Guys if someone else also felt that i picked to reply to my friends instead of all reviewers, I would like to say that i am really sorry if it came out that way. I replied to all queries rather than reviews honestly and it was not my intention to pick or ignore anyone based on my friendship with them.
You all are my reviewers and readers and critics guys, and believe me when i say that i would always reply to a critic before a friend if it's about my story. It's simple professionalism. Moreover, you all are my friends guys.

So please don't harbor any ill feelings regarding that. I replied to DADA because she had genuine queries and i replied to other's queries as well. Yes, Diya is an old friend who returned after very long time, would you have me ignore her reviews?

Chalo anyways, don't take it in any wrong way. I am genuinely sorry if it hurt anyone. Individual replies at end.

NOW, MOST IMPORTANT. We have reached an important stage in the story so i want that all previous doubts and confusions regarding previous chapters are cleared, so i am just giving a brief summary and facts that are known till now, alright? GO THROUGH THIS BEFORE READING AHEAD.

CHAPTER 1-

Asha and Fantastic five are celebrating their rendezvous after long years and completion of a case. Nothing much in this chapter to note except that ASHA at some level had left during those days because she felt anxious after Abhijeet sir's memory loss. (AU thought. Not mentioned in CID). Acp sir knew about it. Also Abhijeet sir has a head injury.

CHAPTER 2 -

Cid team sans Abhijeet and ACP sir are dealing with a case. Daya and Freddy while in bureau gets a call from hospital regarding a lady asking to meet Acp sir and Abhijeet. They decide to go there and investigate. They find that the lady asking to meet them has face of Abhijeet sir's long dead mother.

Things to note : Obviously Maa jee's return; Abhijeet sir getting irritated over ACP sir's concern about his head injury;

Chapter 3 -

Daya sir confronts Abhijeet sir regarding his lie about his mother's death. Daya and Freddy meet maa jee and later try to investigate the truth behind her return etc.

Things to note : Abhijeet sir has a surname Shekhawat; He doesn't deny daya sir about maa jee being alive, or not being his mother at all.

Chapter 4 -

Salunkhe sir comes to know about Maa jee. He confronts ACP sir about that. Later in frustration and anger he asks whether Abhijeet is lying about his memory as well or not? Acp sir stays silent. The decision to confront both Abhijeet and Acp sir was a plan or play by Freddy sir, Daya sir and Salunkhe sir to bring out the truth.

Things to note : Acp sir stays silent about Salunkhe sir's question.

Chapter 5 -

Freddy hears the exchange between all through speakers. He knows Acp sir didn't answer that question. They both decide not to tell Daya about it. Abhijeet sir and Acp sir has a conversation.

To note : Mention about Abhijeet sir's father by Acp sir; Both confirming (to reader as well) to each other as well about fake maa jee. Salunkhe sir and Freddy sir does know something that daya sir does not. Abhijeet sir and Acp sir doesn't know whether Daya be aware of the hidden truth or not.

Chapter 6 -

Daya sir confrontation with himself regarding the truth, betrayal, lie about maa jee and the story behind it. Later, Freddy sir, Salunkhe sir and Daya sir confrontation with maa jee. Maa jee is actually Abhijeet sir's friend mother who worked in police as well. Her son went on a mission in 1997 ( new info. , sorry.) He didn't return, she approached police but when got nothing tried to find her son herself. Got call from some gang.

Things to note. - Maa jee original story acc. to AU; Salunkhe sir and Freddy sir anger.

Chapter 7 -

A scene from past era. The point at which Abhijeet sir was found and in hospital with lost memory. His waking up and other things. In present : Daya sir being tamed a little with his own arguments and seeing Abhijeet sir weak and miserable condition tries to comfort his buddy. Abhijeet sir turns unconscious.

To note : Abhijeet sir in past after loosing memory are still feeling like he's hearing some voices and seeing some scenes in his head.

Chapter 8 -

Salunkhe sir and freddy sir anger and them hiding something from Daya sir. Daya sir feeling confused and irritated with them for it especially after Salunkhe sir suspicion about Abhijeet sir consciousness. Daya sir and Abhijeet sir confrontation. Attack on maa jee. Attacker dies soon after in front of daya sir.

To note : Maa jee tells Abhijeet sir that someone found them. Attacker tells daya something similar.

Chapter 9 -

Daya sir and Abhijeet sir investigate the attack further. Abhijeet sir is called by Acp sir to come to his home immediately.

To note : chances of HQ involvement with maa jee case.

I hope this cleared some things.

Have fun reading guys!

CHAPTER - 10 : it's a confusing mess of non-lying lies.

It wasn't really a surprise or a shock but the unwavering gazes of men known and unknown, of few older officials he was seeing after 19 years and of some they despised today focused entirely on him made him startle a little in his head and to seek unconsciously the warm eyes of his senior who was also looking towards him with that confidence and warmth in his eyes.

He had always wanted to see those expressions, 19 years ago, in a pair of eyes he wondered whether he remembered now or not, because when he closed his eyes at night, all he could see were those eyes closing and the light in them going out with what he assumed had been an accusing glare.

An old man, Abhijeet remembered from having seen 19 years ago, who was right now sitting in a single elegant couch nodded his head when Abhijeet's eyes met him. Abhijeet had averted his gaze back then, and he couldn't meet those eyes for longer still. Those eyes seemed to pierce through every wall you created around yourself to directly look into your soul. Then he had been too afraid to let someone see his dark soul and now he is too afraid to let the man see his weakness.

He moved forward then, nodding a small "Good evening" to all the officers present as all of them be higher than him in ranking and waited for the conversation to continue itself as he settled himself beside ACP sir after sharing another look with him.

Acp sir shared a look with another official Abhijeet recognized as Acp sir's friend, from one of those parties Acp sir made him and Daya attend occasionally. He hadn't known that so many of these men had been in on their secrets, he could have told to Daya atleast, couldn't he? He stopped himself from continuing that thought as realized it led to some very deeply rooted fears of his which he really wouldn't like to face right now. He himself asked stoically after the silence stretched too long...

" I Don't think i would be wrong in guessing what this is about...(he looked around not meeting any pair of eyes straight on), would I?"

Acp sir's friend, who he now identified be the ACP of CID DELHI replied softly, his gaze softer and warmer than others...

" No. (after sharing a look with others) No, you wouldn't be wrong Abhijeet and before anything else we would all sincerely like to apologize to you...(looking towards Acp sir now) to you both. It was our duty to have kept her under surveillance and i guess, we failed spectacularly..."

A few of the higher officials grunted at that with displeasure to have questioned their abilities and one of them said in a little irritated tone...

" it's one case ACP JHA, one officer, (shrugging) i don't think it really matters much to anyone..." He looked to others for acceptance and most of them nodded in yes contradicting their late night presence at the said officer's senior's home. Personally. With coffee in their hands. Abhijeet was not a child so he held himself from rolling his eyes.

Another of the senior officer's (Abhijeet realized him as the old man he was now able to identify clearly as colonel Jadav) nodded but continued with... " But here it's not only about an officer, (looking towards all and stating with perfect calm and authority in his tone while his eyes focused on Abhijeet's as he continued) It's about a case which WE misled, about a situation misjudged by us and about the death of more than 20 officers for whom we haven't gained justice, yet."

It made all the officers present there silent and Abhijeet realized that he may have been the only one who remembered that year every single day of his life, but these men, these men weren't absolved from the ghosts of that case, those years of disappointment and guilt either.

The man continued after feeling everyone brought down and together once again... " Acp JHA, please continue..."

Acp Jha nodded and started in same grave tone once again... " Mrs. Shastri meri surveillance mein kuch paanch (5) saal pehle aayi, jabh woh aur unki family kerala se yahan Delhi shift hua. (he pointed towards a side where Abhijeet had earlier noticed a projector and screen set up which now showed the picture of a man in his forties.) yeh unka beta hai..."


It was seven in the morning and whole CID team was present in the bureau, but even with the absence of ACP sir, there was absolute silence. The juniors who had realized the severity of the matter too early in the day when they had been called to that hospital by Daya sir, stood at their own places completing the daily tasks as right now they really had nothing else to go on in the current case. And the truths they all wanted to know stayed buried still under the mountains of lies their seniors had built around them.

Daya and Freddy had taken to discussing something together which made both of them angry at turns but neither of the two revealed anything about what they were discussing.

Rajat and Nikhil had been ordered by Daya to stay behind in the hospital and inform them if anything came up further there.

The silence in the bureau was however disturbed by the sound of the approaching footsteps which straightened all of them slightly as they all looked towards the bureau entrance to see their two other seniors enter.

Daya and freddy looked towards each other, both having same queries and similar emotions of hurt and betrayal running through their brains and their gentle hearts. They wanted to know the truth, the complete truth about this lie of their loved ones from their own mouths now. They wanted to know what had compelled the two to lie to them all for so many years. But they also knew that it's not always good to intercept and coerce these two men into conversation in front of everyone else. They would have to wait for the right time when the juniors would not be present. So both kept their silence and showed indifference to the entry of the two men.

Abhijeet and Acp sir entered inside the bureau and felt a sense of dread overcome them after seeing Freddy and Daya already present there along with the juniors. It made them feel jittery and nervous but they both were considered the most stone hearted officers and they knew that it was also for good so that they could get this over with.

Acp sir shared a glance with Abhijeet and then stopped after both were present almost in the middle of the bureau and began after seeing he had everyone's attention except Daya's and Freddy's forced unaatention which he easily commanded with a strict tone... " Daya, Freddy...(both looked towards him, their eyes filled with emotions and questions which he thought better to avoid for now) Yeh joh naya case aaya hai...Mrs . Shastri par humla ka...(after a moment seeing Daya and freddy's confused gazes he realized his officers in between all the emotional stress had clearly ignored the lady's name continued without acknowledging it) Yeh case CID DELHI take over kar rahi hai...(ordering tone) saari files and evidences joh bhi abh tak mile hain tum log Abhijeet ko dedo...

The junior officers glanced towards each other in shock while Daya said in a barely controlled voice... " magar sir...woh humla meri aur Abhijeet ki presence mein hua hai...woh bhi mumbai mein toh...

Acp sir stopped him after showing his hand and said in a firm tone... " main janta hun Daya magar HQ ka yahi faisla hai...(looking towards everyone shocked and confused faces) no more questions and arguments on this.."

Abhijeet saw Daya clenching his fist to control his irritation and anger and heard again even after the clear order ignoring the command in the voice... " sir hum log unke saath co-ordinate kar lete hain magar aise poora ka poora case hi unke...

Acp sir said in a warning tone... " DAYA..."

But Abhijeet can see that Daya can't stop himself now. He had known before coming and giving this news that at least Daya and Freddy won't interrogate them in front of all the juniors but he had also known that this would anger Daya to a point which may even lead to...

" sabh log pehchante hain sir woh chehra...sirf yeh case kisi aur department ko saunp dene se aap aur Abhijeet sachai se bach nahi payenge sir...(low voice) itne saal aapne hum logon ko andhere mein rakha hai...(pointedly ignoring focusing on Abhijeet at that moment he asked in a teasing tone) mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh case nahi aata toh kabhi hum logon ko pata bhi chalta..."

Abhijeet looked towards all the juniors present there and saw confusion and curiosity in them for knowing the truth of the lady they had considered dead and mother of their senior, he wanted to tell them the truth too but if it had all been in his hands, they wouldn't have been facing this conversation at all. He said coming a step forward trying to stall the conversation for now... " Daya please...iss baare mein baad mein...

Daya looked at him now, his gaze piercing and angry and behind that facade a deep rooted hurt that only Abhijeet could see because he knew already it had to be there, the eyes themselves told him what were going to be the next words... " kyun Abhijeet? Jhooth toh tumne hum sabh se kaha haina...bewakoof toh hum sabhi ko banaya haina tumne (teasing painful tone) chalo mujhe, freddy aur Salunkhe sir ko toh abh khair aadat si hogayi hai...magar hume chodho inn becharo ko toh baksh do Abhijeet...(in complete anger) hum log toh khair hain hi nahi iss layak..."

Abhijeet tried again, trying to plead Daya to leave the matter for now, for not bringing it up here, trying to catch Daya's eyes again so that he can convey to his buddy that this was really not the place nor the time... " Daya pehle humari baat...

Daya snorted disbelievingly while Freddy who hadn't said a word till then whispered softly, his voice carrying over the silence left over by abhijeet's incomplete sentence and Daya's dismissal of it... " hum logon ne humesha aap logon ki baat suni hai sir, (looking up and looking in Abhijeet's eyes directly) humesha bharosa bhi kiya hai aap per aapki har baat per...(softly) magar sir jabh itni baar dhokha mile toh phir baar baar baat sunna aur usspar vishwas karna mushkil hojata hai sir...(in pacifying tone after feeling the silence from both men and their eyes) chodhein sir vishwas nahi toh phir toh abh bhi batane ka kya...

" Kyun chodh dein Freddy? " All heads turned towards the bureau entrance where Salunkhe sir was standing. Acp sir glanced towards his friend and when both eyes met it was clear that something passed between them which was completely ignored by Salunkhe sir leaving Acp sir in shock and pain.

Abhijeet after seeing Acp sir's expressions understood the conversation carried out by oldie duo with silent words easily. And Acp sir felt when his shoulders drooped a little more and his eyes grew more distant, knowing his officer was tucking a part of his soul to protect at least a bit of it from withering away when this argument right now, right then escalated to something bigger and bitter.

Salunkhe sir stepped forward and asked again? " batao Freddy, kyun chodhein inn logon ko haan? (in anger) chalo mana vishwas nahi...magar inn logon ne joh hume takleef, dard, dukh diya hai kya usska hisaab bhi na mange hum log?"

He said again after focusing his eyes on Abhijeet's shifting and guilty gaze... " Oh...(mocking tone) ya phir hisaab sunkar hi tumhara officer yadasht khone ka natak karne lagega pradyuman?"

Acp sir hissed angrily after feeling Daya's and all other present officer's shock and stunned silence, while Abhijeet softly took a step back... " SALUNKHE!"

Salunkhe sir said angrily in same tone as his friend's, his voice was however less restrained... " Chilao nahi Pradyuman (standing straighter) aur nahi abh tumhare Salunkhe ya Daya ya Freddy kehne se yahan koi rukega...(forceful tone) hume sachai janni hai pradyuman, aaj hi aur issi samaye...unness saal kaafi hone the tum logon ke liye ek achi kahani sunane ke liye..."

The silence left in the wake of his words was filled by Daya who whispered softly, his gaze fixed on Abhijeet who hadn't glanced up since the moment salunkhe sir accused him of memory loss.. " salunkhe sahab please...baat maa jee ke jhooth per hai aap Abhijeet ki yadasht ko toh na beech mein...

Salunkhe sir turning to fix his unwavering gaze on Daya which stopped Daya in the middle of his sentence. The older man's eyes filled with anger and pain made Daya afraid but he had seen Abhijeet take that step back right now and he had heard about the hurt and pain faced by his buddy when this man had accused him of being a bad fish ruining all their lives and of ACP sir questioning his Buddy's competence over the same issue, so he didn't back down. He was angry with Abhijeet, yes, but it didn't mean he wanted him be accused of something the man had really suffered and was indeed had been suffering for his entire life since that day. So he continued, now in an even more soft but forceful tone...

" Nahi Salunkhe sahab please, main samajhta hun aap Abhijeet se naraz hain magar usse isske liye toh na..."

Salunkhe sir's bitter laugh stopped him again and he looked towards Abhijeet to see him closing his eyes tightly. It made him forget his anger over the man and revive that old throbbing wound in his heart created by their seniors. He focused his gaze towards Salunkhe sir who was now wiping his eyes (and daya realized that they were amazingly wet really) and wanted to argue when the older man looked him in his eyes...

" mujhpar vishwas nahi haina tumhe Daya? (his wet eyes spoke of his hurt and pain and anger which daya found himself stunned by, he couldn't even shake his head to convey his negative response, but salunkhe sir just smiled that bitter smile and looked towards freddy with) freddy ki baat manoge phir tum? (he turned his stunned gaze towards freddy who didn't meet his eyes scaring Daya more, Salunkhe sir asked again, more softly) Acha usski nahi toh phir apne param pujiye ACP sir ki baat toh manoge hi...(secretly) unhone hi bataya hai waise mujhe bhi...(Daya looked him in shock as right now he can't process what was going on) pucho inse tumbhi..

Acp sir said, his tone controlled and measured like he was controlling his anger or helplessness, Daya wasn't sure anymore... " Kya BAKWASS kar rahe ho Salunkhe haan...(confidently) maine tumse kabh iss baare mein kuch kaha...

Daya's gaze focused on ACP sir now who was looking towards his buddy in anger and irritation.

Salunkhe sir turned around and glared towards his buddy and said in a tone that sounded dangerous to even Daya's ears... " MAIN BAKWAAS KAR RAHAN HUN PRADYUMAN! (angrily) Bakwaas toh tum log karte aaye ho hum logon ke saath itne saalon se...(with forcing and emphasizing his every word) ek ganda, bhadda aur bakwas mazak...(disappointed tone) aur abh bhi wahi kar rahe ho tum pradyuman..."

Acp sir,before replying focused his eyes on Purvi and Pankaj who were both till then trying to simultaneously listen in on the conversation and stay clear of it. Both looked towards him and getting his message left the bureau hurriedly, not bothering with any excuses as every man present there knew the reason well enough.

Acp sir turned his focus now towards his buddy again, completely avoiding the low, shocked and tensed whisper of " SIR" from his side. He asked, his tone a mixture of same calm and warning he used while interrogating criminals... " kya kar rahe hain hum abh Salunkhe? (teasingly) please batao mujhe...(softly) maan li thi maine humari galti, bataya tha tumhe ki koi majboori thi humari magar tumne...

Salunkhe sir said interrupting his buddy, his tone straight and with a warning in it... " meri baat ka jawab do pehle pradyuman, kya kuch galat kaha maine? (tease again but this time in straight whisper) kya natak nahi kar raha tumhara officer itne saalon se yadasht jane ka?"

Daya whispered a small " Salunkhe sahab.." simultaneously with Abhijeet who gripped Acp sir's arm with a soft tensed whisper of... " Sir please nahi..."

Acp sir's eyes met with Abhijeet's conveying a little confidence and a small apology as realizing easily what he was trying to say, or protect, but he has to do this now or it would always be never... " Please Salunkhe...yeh ghatiya bakwaas aur nahi karo...(angry calm tone) jabh main keh rahan hun ki hogayi galti, maan rahan hun baat ko...phir kyun tu bekaar mein uss baat ko isske beech laa raha hai, haan?"

Salunkhe sir didn't say a word to that, didn't interrupt his buddy as he felt the words shock his system badly. He looked in his buddy's eyes and realized that those eyes never met his anymore, he asked, his voice turning low and complete questioning... " kya tumne mujhse kaha nahi tha pradyuman ki Abhijeet yadasht khone ka natak kar raha hai? (forcefully, his tone conveying clearly what be the result of the answer his buddy gave) kya tumne nahi mana tha iss baat ko..."

Daya looked towards Acp sir silent face and then towards Abhijeet's shocked and painful expressions, he interrupted softly in between... " Salunkhe sahab yeh aap kya...

Salunkhe sir showed him a hand stopping him once again and said straightly... " iss baat ka jawab pradyuman khud dega daya(whispering) main sunna chahta hun...(to Acp sir) Bolo pradyuman..."

Abhijeet took that step forward and started to say in soft low tone... " Salunkhe sahab please...

The older man's closed eyes and clenched fists made Abhijeet stop along with the warm wrinkled palm pressing his arm and the another palm signalling him to just keep quite. Salunkhe sir opened his eyes and said to Abhijeet although his gaze was still on Acp sir's face... " tumhe jawab pehle dena chahiye tha Abhijeet...iss waqt main sirf pradyuman ka jawab sunna chahta hun..."

And before anyone could have protested, the anyone being only Abhijeet as right now after seeing Salunkhe sir so serious even daya wanted to hear the reply from Acp sir who gave just that... " nahi...(moving his gaze from Salunkhe sir's face to focus on other two) maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kaha tha, tujhe kuch galat fehmi..."

A small choked laugh and Acp sir was forced to turn his worried concerned eyes towards his buddy, who at that exact moment slammed his clenched fist on the table beside which he was standing. He said again, laughing in same small gasps of breath... " maan gaye pradyuman tumhe sach mein...(clapping softly either everyone felt the throbbing in that palm and that heart except he himself) kuch na kehke bhi sabh kaha aur phir bhi kuch nahi...sach mein..."

His breaths were coming in too long short gasps which scared every soul present their at those moments especially the man called this person his buddy. He moved ahead with a soft... " Salunkhe tu sambhal ke yaar please..."

" Kyun pradyuman? tum chup kyun rahe jabh maine tumse poocha...(focusing his red eyes on his buddy who was now standing close to him) kyun?"

The man replied softly, his hands simultaneously busy with checking the bruised fist and the angry pulse of his dear friend... " toh kya kehta main salunkhe? pehla ilzaam sahi tha magar phir jabh tune woh sawaal poocha toh main chauk gaya yaar...(soft tone) mujhe vishwas hi nahi hua tu aisa kuch poochega...main kya jawab deta?"

The older man smiled softly and painfully and very carefully took his hand from in between his buddy's and replied in a tone only heard by his buddy and nobody else.. " chillate mujhpar, kehte kya bakwaas kar rahe ho, yeh ghatiya bakwaas kaise ki tumne, usspar yeh ilzaam kaise lagaya, magar tumne...tumne bas itna kaha pradyuman (very low tone) ki humari koi majboori thi...(pushing his stunned buddy back with) batado uss bache ko pradyuman...please...aur takleef na do hume..."

Acp sir glanced back silently towards Abhijeet and then towards Daya and freddy, seeing all three faces constricted with stunned emotions and concern, he looked back towards salunkhe, took a step forward and whispered in a tone he meant for only his buddy to hear... " I am sorry Salunkhe...(very low tone) yeh faisla humare haath mein nahi hai...tu samajh"


Hope you all enjoyed the chapter guys and that nothing was too confusing.

Do read and review.

Priya - thanks a ton dear. Do keep reading and reviewing yaar.

tina - Thank you so much dear. Keep reading and reviewing yaar.

Shikha sharma - Hey dear! Tension toh is a part of life yaar, ya toh kisi ko dedo ya lelo... ;). Main yahan tum logon ko deti hun toh wahan college wale mujhe...hehehe. Thank you for liking the chapter dear. Thanks for reviewing and reading and being with the story still.. :P

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guest - thanks dear.

Js abhi - Hehehe, yes i am trying to give chapters good relative names...pata nahi kitna success ho raha hai. good to see you noticed and liked it though! arrey yaar i am always awaiting your guys reviews and words and critics...kuch bhi kaho but batao. It improves a writers confidence and skills as well. Lagta hai koi sach mein padh raha hai. So thanks a ton to you.

guest - yaar dear i don't know why you feeling that way. I just answered queries, it was nothing about being friends or not. Chalo i am sorry still agar aapko itna laga toh. Thanks for reading and reviewing dear.

Duoayesha - hahaha...yes i can sense those evil thoughts twinning with mines... ;). Milke satayenge kyun? ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing and liking the chapters dear. Hope you had fun reading this as well. I tried to sataofy Abhijeet sir a little in this one, ;)

kirti - Yaar ek hi line mein sabh keh diya aapne toh...hehehe...talent hai yaar.. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing dear. Hope you enjoyed this chapter as well.

duosun - Yes i tried to portray Daya sir matured and focused rather extra emo. glad you all finding it good yaar. Hehehe...yes, about smoking, i don't support the HABIT but i think that it gives a character to him. Like Daya sir doesn't either drink or smoke but Abhijeet sir is more open kinda in that manner. Also i loved the idea when i read it first time in DADA story. Jabh se man tha isse portray karun..hehehe. Hahaha...bhai naam ki tarah hi sabh kuch twisted hai abhi toh...dekhte hain aage kya hota hai.. ;). Thanks for reading and reviewing dear!

Krittika - ummm...i tried to give a summary and series of important facts in this chapter di, toh ek baar woh padhke dekho and phir bhi sabh kuch confusing lage toh it's really fine. Aap baadme padh lena...i'll always await for your critics though. :D. Thank for reviewing and reading till now di.

GD - AHAN! BEANIE wala parrot ko bunni ka sir thoke salam... (evil smile). Does new BEANIES have small small seengs as well! :O
Yaar honestly i still can't think why Daya sir arranging security for maa jee? I accept it's a fault of their's because there's a attack involved now, but before, why would daya sir suspect anything when the lady herself not pointing that her life be in danger? It could simply have been some plan/ elaborated lie from Abhijeet sir side which deliberately/undeliberately coming ahead.
Next, Even if she isn't important than the point that now she has been attacked after coming in contact with CID must raise some alarm bells for all. Moreover i think, the case dealt by CID (decision by Daya sir) be mostly because of emotional attachment. They do help their friends and acquaintances a lot of time.
Yaar, that smoking idea, it's only you really who deserves the credit because i honestly loved it and accepted it instantly as one of Abhijeet sir traits when you first portrayed it. Usse padhkar sabse pehle dimaag mein yahi khyaal aaya tha that he used it as a connection to his past...which is something so...real. About when you portrayed it, well i think it requires BUNNI's sharp skills to detect those meanings...hehehe... ;). So most took it as a bad habit only.
Honestly, half of things i portray specially characters are inspired from your own stories. hehehe...Bunni's a DIE HARD FAN afterall.. :P:P:P:P
Yaar, i had been thinking to post it in 3 parts honestly. In phases. But bahot badha hojata woh and most FF readers i think are not in habit of reading stories in one go. And ...IF is not that accepting about unconventional ideas yaar.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING DADA. Always awaiting Dada reviews and critics on bunni little under developed tries...hehe.

BFF - AWWW! I was really afraid about that chapter as it's very slow with little investigation and stuff only. Which i am not at all good in. So i feel really glad that you found it as one of the best chapters. Thank you so much dear. Smoking idea...Yaar i am not in favour of smoking at all. But when Dada first time portrayed it i felt connected to the idea. Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reviewing BUDDY.. ;). Hope you enjoyed this chapter as well yaar.

Sami - Yes yaar i understand you must have felt bad. Mujhe khud bahot guilty feel hua tha. 3rd year student! at 18..! Bhai aap toh phir bahot jyada intelligent hongi yaar! and Hard working as well! now a few stories for you. Read BEZUBAAN by Sk's DUO. Its classy work. Lady meringue all stories. 23Diya ki bhi all stories. Krittika di ki stories : Lakire qismat ki, jane ke waqt, Fight for own. GD whole story collection for DUO stories. I hate you buddy by dada has a bit tortured ABHI. ;). You can read STANDING Alone too by dada but it becomes a little...disappointing at end so dekhlo. Bas meri list mein yahi kuch thi yaar. Baaki IF per hain bahot saari stories you can read. Chalo thank you so much for reviewing dear. Awaiting your critic about one of the above mention stories. Read BEZUBAAN first...my suggestion.

I hope i didn't miss anybody, and if i did it was not my intention guys and i am really sorry.

Missing reviews from Jyoti A, Shubhangi's ABHI, Angelbetu, AD FAN, Rhia Dubey, SS 1912, Ladddo, DIYA (evil smile), SGJ, Andeta, Misti Lovecidduodosti, Cid duo fan...hawww...kya itna pakka diya kya guys maine? hehehe...chalo awaiting all your critics and reviews guys. Warna yahi batate jana ki abh interest nahi raha...hmmm.

Thanks again to all those who are reading and reviewing still!

Take care guys.

Have fun. Next update on saturday.