(NOTE; I WILL UPDATE THE STORY LATER TODAY OR TOMORROW I PROMISE but I thought I should post this first. So be a little patient ill have it up as soon as I can)
(Authors Note (long one): Hey everyone I'm back ! I know I've spent a long time away again and I am sorry about that. I've been recently having a lot of severe problems with my family, my brother got kicked out because he struck my mother and its been very hard for her mentally so I've been helping her out with a lot of things and taking a lot of her outbursts. I don't say this for pity but I felt maybe it would make you guys understand a little more why I've been absent but thankfully earlier this year I got a computer which makes writing a lot easier than using a small dinky cricket phone. I am also using Grammarly so hopefully, that helps a lot with my grammar mistakes. (but knowing me i'll still have some mistakes in it). I think something you guys should know about me is a very bad habit of mine is losing motivation. I get the motivation to write something but if I don't use that right away I tend to lose it and forget about it and it also doesn't help with school. Another thing is I imagine these great ideas in my head and I can see everything almost perfectly but as soon as I put on paper or something it does not come out as I planned and it discourages me in a way which in some peoples eyes would probably be seen as childish. I still do want to continue with this story, of course, it will usually have a lot of breaks in between updates sorry about that. I got a review on from someone named and I thank you for not totally hating like some other people and yes people have told me about my grammar mistakes many times in fact and I never ignored them I have repeatedly been trying to make fewer mistakes in my writing but I need have a small phone and I did not know that Grammarly was free I always thought you had to buy it or download it. Another person I'd like to point out is djdust71828, thank you so much for the story idea and I'm glad you like my story. I love your idea and I'm sure to use it so thanks a bunch!