The Other Half of Me

by 3mison

By Emily’s junior year of high school, she was completely lost in her life. From dealing with her parent’s strict conservative beliefs, an evident lack of friends, and questioning her sexuality, Emily was entering a depression. That is, until a bold and exciting blonde miraculously entered her dull life. - Slow burn Emison fanfic. Rating might change to M in the future.

13. Feedback

Hey everybody! This isn't a chapter, but I am looking for some feedback from you all. Being the planner that I am, I already have the next like 10 chapters mapped out lol. One thing I've been curious about is how you guys feel about mature rated content. I've been a little hesitant writing it now that we are approaching that territory in the story. I remember reading a fanfic a long time ago when the author wrote some M rated content involving Emily and Alison when they were in high school. A lot of people were on the fence about the fictional high schoolers having sex...being that they were under 18 at that time in the story. Obviously, right now Emily and Alison are in high school in this story. I kind of went into that territory with the shower scene in chapter five, but it definitely didn't escalate further than making out haha. I want to ask for opinions before I dive head first into writing content of that nature. I just want to be careful so that I don't offend anyone or cross a line. I'm not really 100% positive on what is okay since this is the first fanfic I've wrote. So if you all could give me your honest feedback and opinions I would really appreciate it! Thank you! See you in a week or two.

~3mison