Chapter 3 never really sat well with me. Oh, the Captain being passionate and just grabbing Maria worked very well for me. But the conversation leading up to it didn't flow as I wanted it to. He goes from learning Maria was in love with him to just pouncing and while that's hot, I felt he needed to realize he was in love with her before he takes action. And I wanted to allow Maria to be slightly more inviting. So I re-worked it, and I'm happier with the results. I had to change chapters four and five, but the result is still the same.
And I'm thinking of adding more. Maybe see what happens next. But I'm not sure if I should.