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Chapter 2: Gokudera's Suspicion
Ever since the last time they've gone to Tsuna's house, Gokudera has noticed something about his Tenth and Yamamoto. They've been acting weird toward each other. Sometimes they would just blush when looking at each other. And they would blush and messed up anything they were doing every time he asked about what happened when he was unconscious at Tsuna's house last week. Decided that there was something going on, he is determined to look more into the matter, since this was affecting on his Tenth, he would never let it past his mind.
The investigating plan began with Yamamoto. "Since he's a baseball idiot- Gokudera thought- it won't be hard to ask for information without getting any trouble." With that in mind, he purposely waited 'til baseball practice was over. And just as Yamamoto was walking out of the front school gate, he started to walk out as well, carefully not to act suspiciously. Surprisingly, Yamamoto didn't even notice his presence and just walk straight to home. "There is seriously something wrong now." Gokudera thought. Normally he would immediately notice Gokudera and at least said hello to him before walking out of school. Gokudera decided to follow him before asking anything. As he went on spying Yamamoto (it must be the exact word since he kept hiding from place to place wherever Yamomoto goes), he noticed something that's definitely weird about the black haired boy who he was spying. The boy would usually have a happy face whenever Gokudera met him. Not the kind of expression he's wearing now , a face that show he's troubled about something, and sometimes he would just stopped and blushed on his own, hand scratching his head. The spying might have lasted longer if he didn't just tripped his own leg and let his presence be revealed. He ended up walking with Yamamoto. But his plan just didn't end at that, "it's time for phase 2" thought Gokudera . And then, he began to start a conversation, which is what Yamamoto usually did.
"So, what happened when I was unconscious at the Tenth's house?" He asked bluntly, straight into the topic.
"Why did you need to know about that?" He questioned back
Great , thought Gokudera , and here I thought I won't have any trouble, how naïve could I be? "Because it concerned the Tenth and as his Right Hand Man, I have every right to ask about that. Just answer me, you baseball-freak." Gokudera growled, already fisted his hand near Yamamoto's face.
"All right, all right. Well, you see, Tsuna and I already made a promise not to tell anyone about that so sorry but I can't tell you." He smiled sheepishly. That didn't make Gokudera feel any better , but before he could react , Yamamoto has already ran toward his house and saying "Bye then. See you tomorrow" with his hand waving and his smile still on.
OK, so the plan to ask Yamamoto didn't work. There's only one option left: directly ask the Tenth. But that wouldn't work since the Tenth definitely won't tell since he had a promise with Yamamoto. So that option is also wiped out. He stood there, on the street, cursing before walking toward his way home, while still trying to figure what the hell has happened on that time he was unconscious.
Well, that didn't go well I guess, Gokudera seems too OOC isn't he? I tried to keep the characterization right but I guess I failed. A little short , is it ?
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Oh and can anyone teach me how to separate the paragraph with a line? I wanted the fic to look more organized so the people won't get dizzy by reading a bunch of words stick together.
and I'm thinking if I should have a beta reader for my fic or nor , what do you think ? yes or no ? I'm positive about no but ...