Here's chapter 4 rewritten as of February 1, 2008. Yeah so here, hopefully it's good. Thanks for reading my fanfic this far! Again i'm sorry for any grammar or spelling errors.

DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN NARUTO!!!

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Hinata woke up with the sun shining on her face, she was laying on something warm, soft, but firm, and orange. She looked up to see Naruto's sleeping face. She remember everything that happen the night before and began to blush immensely. It seemed like a dream come true. Naruto had actually returned her feelings. This was the happiest she'd ever been. She laid her head back down and drifted back to sleep.

After about another hour passed and Hinata awoke again. This time she awoke to see cyan colored eyes down at her. She blushed a bit.

"Ohayo, Hinata." Naruto said with a grin. Hinata blushed even more.

"O-Ohayo, Naruto-kun." Hinata said in a shy half tiered voice. When she remembered that she was sitting in Naruto's lap. "Ah, im sorry Naruto-kun, I must be heavy i'll get up right away." As she bagan to get up Naruto grabbed her wrist and pulled her back down. She looked down at him with a dark blush on her face.

"C-can't we stay like this for a little longer." He said looking away to hide his blush, but Hinata could see a little of it. She laughed quietly to herself and made herself comfortable in Naruto's lap. (don't think anything dirty , this is not meant to be at all dirty got it.- )

Naruto held Hinata's hand as they looked out into the water covered forest. Naruto slowly got distracted from looking at the forest and ended up just staring at Hinata. He couldn't believe that she actually loved him, him the stupid big mouth ninja, was loved by the gorgeous, shy Hinata. He really did love her, he couldn't believe it took him a whole year to figure out. At the thought of all the things that they did together he gently squeezed Hinata's hand. She also turned away from the forest to stair at Naruto. There eyes met each other and they did not leave each other for a long time. Naruto finally broke the scilence, with kissing Hinata gently on the lips. It wasn't a kiss he intended to hold, but once his lips met hers, he didn't want to take them away. Hinata felt the same way, she didn't want to him to take his lips away. They would have continued the kiss if they hadn't heard a rustle in a bush.

They both stood up and looked at the bush, then a little bunny jumped out, (I was tempted to make it Neji or Hinata's sister, but then they might look like pervs) They both sighed, then looked at each other again. Then both looked away blushing like mad.( XD I love when they get embarrassed, sorry) Naruto held out his hand to her, still with a slight blush on his cheeks.

"Come on we should head home, your family must be worried about you, being gone the whole night." Naruto said. Hinata gasped, she had forgotten all about her family!

"Oh no, my father will be furious!" She said with a hint of fear in her voice, Naruto caught that hint of fear.

"It doesn't matter if he's mad, you should stand up to him Hinata. Don't listen to him if hes just going downgrade you." Naruto said with a stern voice. Hinata wasn't sure if she could do that, she never had stood up for herself before.

"I-I don't know Naruto-kun, I-I've never stood up to my father before." She said looking at the ground.

"theres a first for everything, isn't there." Naruto said with one of his smiles. This gave Hinata some courage, she decided she was going to stand up for herself.

"Hai, Naruto-kun." She said with a new confidence, and she gave Naruto a big smile.

"Thats a better attitude." Naruto said. With that they walked off to Hinata's house.

It took about thrity minutes to get to Hinata's house, so it was about 6:30 when they arrived. Naruto and Hinata stood their (still holding hands) and looked at the large house. Hinata got a little scared, she was going to have to face her father now. Naruto felt her hand tense, and he gave her a reassuring squeeze. She turned to him, a bit or fear and nervousness in her eyes, Naruto gave her a smile of encouragement and it all seemed to melt away.

"Do you want me to go in with you?" Naruto asked.

"no no, this is something I need to do for myself." Hinata said, she felt so lucky to have somebody that cared so much for her. Naruto leaned over and gave Hinata a goodbye kiss, which actually lasted a bit longer than they thought.

Meanwhile Hinata's father was watching from the side yard, he knew Hinata had been up to something for a long time now, but she had kept it all a secret. He new it was something serious when she didn't come home last night. When he saw her with Naruto he almost popped, but he decided to wait a little longer. But when he kissed his daughter, that was it.

"Hinata!" He came running and grabbing his daughter away from Naruto. "What on earth do you think you are doing!?" He was really mad. Hinata was kinda in shock, things happened really fast. Naruto was just in awe. "Well!?" Hinata's father yelled.

"Huh, eto, uno." Hinata said looking back and forth still somewhat taking in the scene. Her father let go of her arm, and faced her.

"What are you doing with this thing." Hiashi yelled. Naruto now stepped in to yell in his defense, but Hinata was quicker.

"He is not a thing, father." She said very upfront. "His name is Uzumaki Naruto." Naruto stared at her, shocked.

"I don't care, what are you doing with him!" He retorted.

"I-I ummm, that is." Hinata began to blush like mad. He could guess what that meant.

"What, don't tell me you love him." He said with venom in his voice. Naruto stepped in now.

"So what if she does, I love her back. It shouldn't matter to you." With that Naruto grabbed Hinata's hand and pulled her next to him. Hiashi began to laugh.

"She only thinks she loves you though, she doesn't know what you really are, you monster!"

"Stop it father!" Hinata shouted. She couldn't take this anymore "I now whats inside Naruto-kun, but thats not him, he is not a monster and I will not tolerate you calling him that!" She said tear filling her eyes from frustration. Hiashi stopped laughing emediatly.

"you know what this boy is, and yet you still want to be near him, you are more of a fool then I thought, Hinata." He said lookeing down. "Now if you have any sense left whatsoever you will come away from him and we can discuses your punishment, for defying me."

"No father, I won't take you bossing me around anymore! I am almost 18 years old, I can take care of myself and im able to make my own decisions now, I don't need you running my life!" And with that Hinata ran away down the street, Naruto immediately followed her.

"Hinata! Hinata!" Naruto called, but Hinata just kept running.

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yeah I think im happier with it this way. I hope you are too, I just couldn't come up with any ideas the other way.

Good news though, I have a 3 day weekend to write chapter 5 so it should be up soon. YAY