Hello everyone !
Well, I have a dilemma.
"Not just what I seem to be" had not been updated for one year and a half.
I really wish to continue this story however, I have yet to find a beta to help me with it. As you can see and know, I do a lot of mistakes in English and this story really need to be "refreshed" before I start to post new chapters. Worst, I wrote it sometimes ago and I'm not sure that everything made sense at all.
If one of you is interested, please, PM me as soon as possible. This story will not be updated before undergoing serious corrections. I really need the help of a beta.
Thank you.
Sweetest Angel.
Flame's answer:
Fairly_nice (just the name make me laugh) had left a review or rather like you can call it a flame. Critics aren't a problem if it is to help you to improve but I think that if you truthfully don't like a story then you should just not read it and that's it. But saying to someone to change their story or a character because you don't like it as it is and after that, you don't leave them the opportunity to defend their works and point of view by not leaving a way to contact you directly is a little too much over the top for my liking.
so you don't like the Kagome in this story because she seems to you a weak character ? 3 quarter of the story is already planned and I can assured you that she isn't weak. A judgement can't be made just with the few little chapters already posted. Of course you can't know it since it is just the start of the story. Right now she is out of her comfortable cocoon she was living in and had lost everything and might have lost her last relative, friends and home. She is desoriented but as the story will evolve, Kagome true caracter will be reveled and will prove that she isn't just « what she seem to be », a weak little princess and a crying baby lost in the big bad world. she didn't get to mourn her lost or had the confirmation that she had to.
It is something that is supposed to be discovered little by little with the evolution of the story, even more when people of her past will appear.
As I couldn't PM you, « fairly_nice », I hope that this message will reach you. It is difficult to explain something to someone who had attacked you and then just disappear. It was difficult to understand everything in your message though but I received the general feeling.
I hope to have the opportunity to prove you wrong when I will be able to post new chapters but know that nothing that I have in mind will be changed just because of your message.