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So who will be the next opponent for Pit to face? Read on!
Chapter 4: Siren Singer! Jigglypuff appears!
It was a pretty quiet night at the K.K. Slider club, Brawlville, Brawl. The young ones were in bed, babysitters were called in, so the adults had all night to enjoy themselves. Everything was bliss, and seemed destined to stay like that…
"No way!" The shout carried over from the back rooms. In them, Jigglypuff was trying her best from keeping Jeff, the acoustic guitar player of her band, Puffs or Huffs, from quitting. "Please, you can't!" she pleaded. The clearly red Jeff pointed his finger at Jigglypuff before exiting out of the building… and not before he poked his head and did the classic rude finger salute.
Jigglypuff sat next to Barbara and their band's drummer, looking completely stunned. 3 minutes passed by uncomfortably, before Barbara finally summoned up the courage to ask "So what are we going to do?" Jigglypuff, however, could only stutter and look shocked. The drummer shrugged to Barbara. Barbara put her hand on her forehead to indicate her frustration.
Then a knock that could be heard by all the bands hanging knocked on their door. Jigglypuff answered "Come in." The same guy who just quit came in, looking like he was heaving something heavy. Jigglypuff's face soon lost its annoyed look. "Hey! What in the world are you still here? You look like you're nearly broke your back!" In response, the guy dropped into the room with the unconscious body of Pit on his back. Barbara and the drummer nearly jumped out of their chairs. "What the? Why is that guy on Jeff? And why is he unconscious.
3 minutes earlier…
Pit was flying above Smashville, completing what to do now. Suddenly, an explosion could be heard below Pit. Pit suddenly twisted around to see what was going on. To answer this inquiry, Wario popped up from the clouds. Pit looked quizzical, so Wario waved goodbye, before slipping back into the cloud. To make Pit regret his inquiry, Wario left behind parts of his Wario Waft. Pit sniffed a part, then his face grimaced to such a degree, it might have belonged to a zombie. Pit then fell unconscious, and fell to Smashville above.
Jeff had gathered his things and was grumbling as he walked home. When home was in sight, suddenly something appeared from the sky and crashed into a nearby tree. Jeff, a bit shaken, slowly walked over to the site to see Pit next to a broken tree. What gave a creeped out feeling to Jeff was the fact that when he put his finger on Pit's neck, there was still a pulse. "Whoa, kid, what are you made of?" Pit sat up, gave Jeff an icy glare, punched him, and then fell back again.
Dr. Mario was checking on Pit with the others nearby. He was muttering (Yeah, I'm making a cameo) as he diagnosed Pit's condition. "Sheesh, kid, what are you made of, steel?" Pit sat up, jumped in front of Dr. Mario and cold-cocked him with an uppercut. Dr Mario flew in the air for a bit before coming down hard. His face… picture his face with his eyes replaced with those swirly eyes you see when an anime character is knocked out or beat up.
Jigglypuff ran up to Pit and tapped him on the hip. Pit looked down at the pink pokemon and remarked "Yeah?" Jigglypuff then preceded to absolute surprise, "You just cold-cocked him!" Barbara face went into quizzical mode. "Cold-cocked?" Jigglypuff was about to explain, but before she could, Pit exclaimed, "Cold-cocked: verb, to knock-out." Grasshoppers were chirping all over, before the drummer broke the silence. "Umm… Yeah, we still have to play." Jigglypuff walked back and forth for a while, before looking up and looking at Pit. She pointed her hand, finger, (Ughh… my brain hurts) at Pit, who put on a look that indicated he did not like what was happening.
"You!" Pit pointed at himself. "Yes, you! Can you play a guitar?" Pit raised an eyebrow as he considered the question. He then eyed a broom, and a shoebox, plus he plucked a leaf and examined it. He looked at the three people standing in front of him. He smiled "Just give me a few minutes."
The band had already came out in the stage, and was both awaiting and trying not to let the boos that were coming from the crowd get to them. Then Pit came running to the stage and the band felt now snickers floating towards them. Pit's guitar looks to be more of a science project for a 5th grader, with the broom as a neck, the box as a body, the bow being used for the strings, and the whole thing being held to together by tape.
Jigglypuff, Barbara and the drummer all barely suppressed their desire to strangle, beat, and (Ughh… this gives me the creeps) castrate Pit at the same time. Instead, Barbara came by Pit, and with gritted teeth, whispered, "What are you trying to pull here?" Pit just smirked and winked at her to calm her. Barbara sighed and whispered, "Okay, listen, we're 2352589usdfnkhvhiu (I don't know guitars), do you got that?" Pit whispered, "Ahh, that song that was playing when DiCaprio was having a moment with Winslet." Barbara rolled her eyes as they started playing.
Every night in my dreams
I see you, I feel you
That is how I know you go on
Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on
Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you're here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on
Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never let go till we're gone
Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to…
Jigglypuff was trailing off as the whole club was taking in the music that was coming from Pit's homemade guitar. It sounded like an actual guitar, no, 5 guitars all together. It was just amazing, and even more was the fact that Pit was so absorbed in his playing that he didn't notice that all eyes were on him. He opened his eyes once and the music stopped abruptly. He gestured for Jigglypuff and the band to keep playing.
After the band finished the song, Jigglypuff and the others went to discuss. As Pit sat in the back with his guitar, he could hear booing. Apparently the next band couldn't hold a candle to what the crowd witnessed. Licking his lips, Pit grabbed his guitar and was making his way to the stage.
The crowd cheered as the band that just got booed slinked away and Pit took the stage. Pit looked really nervous, and was trying to get his nerves under control. He sighed and said "Hellooooooo, Brawlville! How are all of you tonight?" Woos and shouts could be heard all through. "All right, so who's ready to rock out?" The same noise came out again. With that, Pit started to play, the sound coming out like rock with a hint of country.
I've been wandering through the dark tryin' to find a light
To come breakin' through the black and erase the night.
I've been walkin' through the fire, but I feel alright.
What I need is a miracle and you tonight.
What I need is a miracle and you tonight.
What I need is a miracle.
I believe there's a miracle.
What I need is a miracle tonight.
I've been hangin' on to hope by the weakest thread,
But the shadows in the room haven't got me yet.
Just tell me I'm alive and I'll be alright.
What I need is a miracle and you tonight.
What I need is a miracle and you tonight.
What I need is a miracle.
I believe there's a miracle.
What I need is a miracle tonight.
Pit stopped in his singing and continued playing. People thought that was the end of the song and already was kinda disappointed. Pit soon assured them that it wasn't over yet.
I gotta free my soul, and put a spirit in my flesh and bone.
Gotta brave that road. Gotta bring love back home.
Pit followed that with a few hard strums of the strings and prepared to finish it.
What I need is a miracle…
I believe there's a miracle…
What I need is a miracle tonight!
What I need is a miracle.
I believe there's a miracle.
What I need is a miracle tonight.
I've been wandering through the dark tryin' to find a light…
With that, Pit strummed a few more times before stopping for good and letting the crowd savor the last note. It did not take them long to savor as the crowd started to cheer and throw brawl coins at Pit. Pit didn't get the memo yet. "Ow, ow, is this your thanks? Ouch!" Then he crouched down picked up a coin and nodded. He then shouted into the microphone, "Umm… thanks for the money! You've been a great audience." With that, he started to leave, but the audience saw more of a reason to throw more coins. "Ow! Hey, I bruise easy! Ouch! Ow!"
Unaware to Pit, Puffs of Huffs were watching from the back, and they shook their heads at what just happened…
First attempt to break up the fighting. Seems good...