PPLZ!!!!!!!! i only have 2 reviews! *starts to sob* why isint any1 reviewing?!?! dose any1 even like this story??

im starting to think of quiting on this story. i dont think any 1 likes it much caz no1's reviewin' :-(


Fang POV

Who did this chick think she was? I mean come on, like she of all people—the enemy for pet's sake!—is gonna get us out of this crack hole. She must think that were retarded or something no wait she probably thinks we have freaking brain damage, that the lovely scientists probably dropped us on our heads when we were babies. I. Can't. Beli-. My thought rank was disturbed because Iggs called my name.

I sighed, "What?"

"Tell me."

"Tell you what, Iggy?"

"You know…"

I rolled my eyes at him even though he of course didn't see. He wanted me to tell him what Rescue Chick looked like.

"Iggy, you're thinking about things like that NOW?"

"That question's kind of a given."

I sighed again," Fine. Let's see, she's about 5'7, black hair to her mid-back. Uhh, blue eyes….I think that's it."

As I described the girl to Iggy I realized how hot she was. Hmmm, maybe I….

"Fang, that can't be it," Iggy said.

"And why not?"

"You know what? I'll ask you later..." Iggy obviously didn't want anyone else to hear what he was talking about.

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Angel POV

Hmmm, maybe I….

H e can't be in love with Alex, he HAS to be in love with Max. That's how it's supposed to be! I have to warn Max before he's fallen too far….

Max POV

MAX!

Angel was screaming inside my head. What is it sweetie?

He's falling for someone else.

What? Who's falling for someone? Angel what are you talking about?

Max you have to hurry or, or….

Angel was cut off by the black-haired beauty walking into the room with a zillion trays of food piled on top of each other, "Ok, dig in."

She let us out of our cages so we could eat.

"So if you know so much about us, it's only fair you tell us about you." Nudge said.

She looked hesitant, "Fine, what do you what to know?"

The question was directed to Nudge but Fang was eager to speak up, "What's your name?"

"Alex."

This time Iggy beat Fang to the punch, "What's that short for?"

"Alexandra. Anything else?"

"Yeah, what's your last name?" Fang asked.

She rolled her eyes at him and he smiled at her. I think it made me jealous. Maximum Ride? Jealous?!? She finally answered the question,"Martinez-Batchelder."

We all stopped eating and froze. Jeb was her father?

I get a free pass; my father is a scientist here.

No Jeb was dead. Wasn't he?

"What's wrong?" she asked us.

I answered, " What is your father's name?"

"….Jeb. Why?"

I think I had a panic attack right there and then. Everything went black.


*sigh* any ideas? probably not.....

plz review no1 is reviewing at its really starting to make me think that no1 likes this

who am i kidding u probably dont like it......*sigh*