Sorry it took so long to revise the Chappie. I'm starting a new FanFic with Sammi, and we had to do planning. It should be up soon. It's gonna be called 'These kids don't need broom sticks to fly'. Cool?

MM-kay. So, I'll do the disclaimer.

Disclaimer: You know, I think I've finally found a creative way to do my disclaimer. I might try it next time. Who knows? Hmmmm…..Okay, so, you know the drill. I don't own Maximum Ride. Jimmy Pats (see Fang's blog for details) does. But, maybe I can find Angel and get him to sell Fang to me. Fang….stares off into space….sorry, I just really like to type his name.

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The REVISED Chappie 6

I woke up to giggles and whispers. Opening my eyes, I saw Angel and Nudge sitting at the end of our bed.

"What?" I said, sitting up. But I couldn't. Something was holding me down. I looked down and saw Fang's arm around my waist. I looked up at his face and saw he was still sleeping.

God, he looks damn hott when he's asleep. I thought.

"Max, you know, you think loud," Angel said to me.

"Why? What she think?" Iggy said, leaning against the wall. He didn't look nearly as cool as Fang when he did it.

"She thought that Fang looked dang hott when he's asleep." Iggy snickered. "Oh, and she thinks you don't look nearly as cool as Fang when you lean against the wall." Iggy's jaw dropped, and it was my turn to snicker.

"Damn right I do," Fang mumbled, then he opened his eyes. "Mornin'"

"Glad to see you're up. Hey, Ig. What's for breakfast.?"

"Can we go to I.H.O.P? I don't feel like cooking," was Iggy's answer.

I looked around the room and saw that everyone was still in their PJ's. "Sure. Everyone get dress and meet me in the lobby in an hour."

Everyone raced out the door leaving me and Fang alone again. I tried to sit up again, and Fang moved his arm, making it possible this time. "I'm taking a shower," I told him.

"'Kay. Don't forget, we gotta take everyone to see Keez today."

"Yeah." I grabbed my towel and some clothes. When I got into the bathroom and locked the door, I stripped and got into the hot shower. I let the water run over my dirt-covered body.

About twenty minutes later, I reluctantly turned off the water and got out. I changed clothes and opened the door of the bathroom, only to find a very impatient Fang waiting there.

"Bout time. Hurry up, I have to pee."

"TMI," I grabbed he comb out of his hand and stepped out of the bathroom. Fang rushed past me and shut the door behind him.

I turned on the TV and was watching 'Drake & Josh' (another fave show) when he came out.

"You ready to go?" he asked, grabbing his studded belt I had bought him for Christmas when we were twelve. God, I can't believe it still fitted him.

"Yeah," I answered, and I grabbed my Max card and wing earrings I had recently bought at Icing by Claire's (my jewelry brand name of choice. I also have said earrings.). I stuffed the Max card in my blue wallet (it had clouds on it, funny, huh?) and started walking. We reached the elevator and I took that time to put my earrings in. Anything to take my mind off the crowded elevator.

When we got down to the first floor, I saw that the rest of the flock was already down there.

"Sorry. The elevator was slow," I told them.

"Or so you say." Iggy smirked.

"Ha, ha. You're a riot." Fang said in a deadly tone.

"Fang-watch it," I warned.

"Sorry." Wait. Did-did that just happen? Did Fang-Mr. Tall, Dark, Silent and Brooding-just apologize to me?

That's 'cause I love you. Fang's vice said.

"OOOOOO! Fang!!!!!!" Angel said.

"Angel. Not. A. Word." There's Fang's deadly tone again.

"About?" Iggy smiled evilly. That wasn't good.

"I have sworn to secrecy. My lips," Angel pretended to zip her lips. "are zipped."

Smart choice. Other wise Fang might rip you apart limb by limb.

"Yes, that's a good idea." Fang did his own evil grin. I don't which scared me more: Fang's evil grin or that he was showing emotion.

"Be afraid of the grin," Fang advised.

I looked over at Angel, and she had a look of pure horror on her face. Turning back to Fang, I smiled. He smiled back

(Sound familiar? That's because it's the old Chappie 6 up until Oz came. Now, sit back, relax, and buckle yourself in. 'Cause oh, man, am I taking off fast.)

"So, you guys ready to go?" I asked the flock, and I got nods and 'yes's on various levels.

We started walking-yes walking, the boring way to travel- to I.H.O.P. We got there, and the seater person (I know that someone told me what these people are really called in one of the reviews-and I thank them-but I'm too lazy to go look it up.) sat us at the biggest booth. That's when Fang spoke.

"So, guys, I have something to tell you. Well, two things, really."

"You and Max are getting married and moving to Alaska?" Gazzy asked. (Randomness! Don't know where that come from. Sorry)

"Ha, ha. No. One: I have someone you guys need to meet after breakfast." He looked at me, and I smiled, then nodded. "And…I have an ability.´(to those who call them 'powers', I think that that makes them sound like super heroes or something. Just like the whole 'Fax' 'Mang' thing. I support Fax. Mang sounds like my cousin's boyfriend's last name. I'm gonna shut up now.)

"WHAT???????" Iggy said.

"Um, yeah. I'm telepathic, like Angel."

"Okay. I can deal. Two telepaths. No biggie." Nudge was fanning herself like a total preppy, but she was coping well.

"Hello. My name is Dalton. I will be your server today." A blonde 18-year-old looking guy said. "May I take your order?"

Yet again, I'll spare you what we ordered, because it would take even longer.But, yeah.

MFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFINGAMFING

I know, that ending was crappy. But still. It's now updated! Be happy! And it has a title! And so will the next Chappie! Squee!

-Max