Thank you for the helpful advice on the grammer and spelling. I was in a rush without thinking typed the second chapter.
let me just say.... I'm new at writing a story and come on cut a break if a person has a hard time with spelling let it be or better yet dont leave a comment that's... not going to explain it. Not to bring anything out but if you can take a minute looking back on how everyone started typing stories not knowing how to write stories (dont bring up "uh dont be stupid everybody uses spell check) plus this isnt a professional publishing site to stories being sell on like. Second it's my story I call the shots on what my story/ies plot is about and characters personality can be changed by us the people who write stories. Since the show has ended we can come up whatever we want to with the characters or anything.
Lastly for someone who made a nicely comment on the review I'll spell check and gram check.
and remember IT'S A STORY WE COME UP WITH ON HOW WE CAN WRITE WHAT WE WANT, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND.
just a reminder now thinking about it to either finish this story or end it. other then that again Thank you to
1GuitarLover1 and to those who have messaged also