Thank you guys for all the criticism. Its greatly appreciated. I'm trying to stay to the characters personality but it has proved rather difficult, lol. Heres chapter 6! Hope you like it.
"Die!!" Sasuke yelled, and ran towards Sakura. Sasuke activated his Sharingan, making sure no one would come at him with surprise..
"No!" Shikamaru and Kakashi yelled. Sakura screamed. Sasuke ran towards Sakura, then took a sharp left towards Orochimaru.
"MMnMMnNNm!!" You could hear Orochimaru's protests. Shikamaru quickly let go of his Shadow Possession, while Sasuke took the katana and plunged it through Orochimaru. "W-Why...y-you!" Orochimaru said, with his last breath. Sasuke de-pleated his Sharingan and extracted the bloody katana from the dead body. Kakashi walked over to Sasuke and said "Its nice to have you back, Sasuke."
Sasuke nodded. Shikamaru than walked over. "Your even more troublesome than Naruto. Is that even possible?"
"Yeah, about a few years ago, with the mission..." He wasn't the type to apologize.
"Its alright man" Shikamaru said. Sasuke walked over to Sakura, who was healing herself now. Her green chakra was growing faint, because of how exhausted she was. When she saw a hand enter her line of vision, she looked up to see a face she hadn't really looked for years. She took his hand, and Sasuke pulled her up. They walked over to Kakashi and Shikamaru, waiting for directions.Upon waiting, Sakura asked,
"Are you okay? I'll heal any-"
"I'll be fine. Besides, you should rest." Sasuke said, a little tired himself. Kakashi, Shikamaru, Sasuke and Sakura gathered up what was left of Kabuto and Orochimaru, and put them in a pile, in the middle of the room. Sasuke used one of his fire jutsus and burned them. They watched the flickering flames as Orochimaru and Kabuto were now nothing but ashes. Then, all four of them left, leaving the godforsaken place, never to return again. While walking back to their village, Kakashi and Sakura informed Sasuke of everything that had happened over the past years. Not that he was listening to all of it.
Sand Village
Jiraya had come by and taught Naruto a new wind technique that had do do with Rasengan. This jutsu was Kinjutsu. These jutsus were rarely used. They only used them unless everything else failed. Jiraya had also told the four of them the he had seen Akatsuki, and that they needed to be careful.
Naruto was standing on a sandy area, watching the sand in the air turn in many circles. It was almost like his new jutsu. Considering that this was his first wind technique, he had to do this in steps. The first step was to take a leaf and try to cut it in half with only his chakra. Since there were no trees around, he used a piece of paper Temari had given him to use. "Kage bunshin no jutsu!" He yelled, as many Narutos appeared. Jiraya aslo tolf him the whatever his clones learn, as soon as the jutsu disappeared, he would gain the knowledge. Each shadow clone held the paper and put it in between his hands. Naruto tried to concentrate the chakra to his hands to cut the paper, but it proved very difficult. All Naruto's tried, and sonner or later one of them made progress.
"I got it!" A Naruto yelled. He had made a cut in the paper. All the clones went towards him and was asking "How did you do that? Let me see!" The real Naruto made the clones disappear and waited a few seconds. Once the information got to him, he tried it himself. He concentrated his chakra once more, and watched the leaf, almost instantly, rip into two peices. Naruto fell with a thud, because his chakra was so low, he couldn't do anything. He fell in to the sandy desert with a smile on his face.
The next day
Naruto woke up, with sand all over him. Gaara was sitting next to him. "You need to get home. Rest."
"B-But I almost h-had it!" Naruto complained. "You can try in a couple days. Lets go." Gaara said, and helped Naruto get home.
